2021秋七年级英语上册 Module 8 Choosing presents写作素养提升练课件（新版）外研版.ppt

1、写作素养提升练 Module 8 Choosing presents本模块话题是“生日派对邀请及描述生日派对”，要求同学们能够向别人发出派对邀请并能够使用一般现在时描述生日派对以及自己的感受。可以用“四W 一H 法”：when:派对举办的时间where:派对举办的地点who:参加人员what:进行了哪些活动how:感受如何 外研版七年级上birthday,gift,present,music,cake,wish,flower,welcome,friend,classmate,beautiful,surprising单 词：special gifts,birthday noodles,best

2、wishes,a big surprise,an unforgettable party,interesting stories,a lovely smile,sing the birthday song短 语：1.We begin the party at 8:00.2.I hope he will have a happy birthday and stay healthy.3.We sing and dance together.4.I would like to give him a special present for his birthday.句 型：5.You give me

3、the best gift in my life!6.I choose different birthday presents for my family and friends on their birthdays.玛丽（Mary）的生日快到了，她想在当天举行生日聚会，邀请朋友们去她家做客。她喜欢读书、听音乐等。每次过生日，她妈妈总是为她买一个大生日蛋糕，朋友们送她书、光盘、花等作为生日礼物。她们唱生日快乐歌、吃生日蛋糕，玩得很开心。请你以“Marys Birthday”为题，根据以上信息写一篇60 词左右的英语短文，描述一下玛丽过生日的情景。1.体裁：介绍性记叙文2.人称：第三人称3.时态

4、：一般使用一般现在时【审题指导】【思路构建】开篇点题Marys birthday is coming.介绍玛丽的喜好及朋友们选择的生日礼物 she likes Her friends want to give her some presents.gives her a book.介绍活动内容They always sing and eat总结评价She has a very happy birthday party.Marys BirthdayMarys birthday is coming.On that day she wants to have a birthday party.She

5、asks her friends to her home to have a party.Her friends want to give her some presents.Because she likes reading and music,Lucy gives her a book.Lily buys a CD for her.Lingling gives some flowers【范文赏析】to her.Her mother always buys a big birthday cake for her.They always sing Happy Birthday and eat

6、the cake.She has a very happy birthday party.点评：本文思路清晰，层次分明。运用了“四W一H法”说明了时间:On that day;地点:her home;人员:her friends;活动:give her some presents，sing Happy Birthday and eat the cake;感受:very happy。亮点句型：She asks her friends to her home to have a party.，使用了ask sb.to do sth.。今天是刘朋的11 岁生日。爸爸妈妈在家里为他举办了生日派对。妈妈

7、制作的生日蛋糕、爸爸新买的自行车、朋友们的生日贺卡、小表妹的生日快乐歌都是送给他的生日礼物，刘朋可开心啦！请根据上述提示写一篇短文。要求：1.条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确。2.60 词左右。_Liu Peng is 11 years old.Today is his birthday.His parents have a party for him at home.At the party,he gets many presents.His mother makes a birthday cake for him.His father buys a new bike for him and his friends give him some birthday cards.His little cousin even sings Happy Birthday for him.Liu Peng is very happy!