2020-2021学年九年级英语全册 单元写作训练 Unit 10 You are supposed to shake hands（含解析）（新版）人教新目标版.doc

1、Unit 10 You are supposed to shake hands.本单元以“风俗习惯”为话题，围绕这一话题主要学习各国的不同礼仪，如见面礼仪、餐桌礼仪等，谈论在不同的场合应该做什么，了解不同国家的习俗。最能体现本单元话题以及语言运用能力的作文为介绍不同国家风俗习惯的短文、书信或邮件等。常用表达有：（1）You are supposed/expected to（2）You should（3）You are not supposed to有用表达：1.besupposedtodo sth被期望/要求做某事；应该2.shakehands握手 3.dropby顺便拜访4.afterall

2、毕竟;终归 5.pickup拾起；捡起 接某人6.makeanoise发出噪音 7.tablemanners餐桌礼仪8.getusedto习惯于 9.berelaxedabout对随意/放松10.get mad大动肝火;气愤 11.cleanoff 把擦掉12.take off脱下(衣服)；(飞机等)起飞 13.make an effort作出努力14.make sb feel at home使某人感到宾至如归 15.cut up切开;切碎16.be expected to do 被期待做 17.make friends with与交朋友18.as soon as一就 19.to ones s

3、urprise令某人吃惊的是20. be different from 与不同 21.on time 按时 in time及时22.besupposedto do sth被期望做某事，应该做某事23.make plans to do = plan to do. 打算做某事24.go out of ones way to do 特意，专门做某事25.afterall毕竟【典型例题】假如你是苏敏，你的美国笔友Tina发来电子邮件，说她下周要来中国，但对中国的风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪了解很少，于是向你寻求帮助，请你给她回一封电子邮件，告诉她有关中国风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪的情况。提示：1.风

4、俗习惯的不同：中国人第一次见面时握手；2.见面时谈论的内容；3.餐桌礼仪的不同：我们用筷子就餐；就餐时不能用筷子指着别人；就餐时不可以多说话等。_【优秀范文】Dear Tina,Im very happy to hear thatyoure coming to china next week. Ihope to see you soon.As we all know, different countries have different customs. So the manners in China are very different from those in your country.

5、 Let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country.First, we Chineseare supposed to shake hands when we meet for the first time. Then we greet each other. After that, you can talk about something relaxing. But you are not supposed to talk about someones salary, age and so on. Second

6、, we use chopsticks to have meals while you use your forks at table. Also, its bad manners to talk too much when youre having meals.Ihope youll have a wonderful time in our country.【常考类型】Writing1（2020四川乐至初三期末）俗话说“入乡随俗”，去另一个国家前，先了解其习俗和历史是很有必要的。请你根据初中阶段所学到的关于英国的习俗和历史，写一篇文章，投稿到某英文版的旅游文化刊物。（写作要点）礼仪第一次见面

7、通常握手跟年长的人说话要用Mr.和Mrs.饮食在茶会(tea party)上只能喝茶，不喝咖啡或果汁城市伦敦(London)，约两千年历史利物浦(Liverpool)，在18世纪以工业闻名注意事项在公共场合不要大声说话(请再列举12点)（写作要求）1.词数90左右；2.短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中须包括所有写作要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当加入过渡语句，使短文通顺、连贯；4.不能照抄原文，文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something abo

8、ut its customs and history. Take Britain as an example._The golden rule is：Watch the other people. Do as they do.【范文】Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history. Take Britain as an example. People usually shake hands when they meet for the

9、 first time. We should say Mr. and Mrs. when we talk with older people. People can only drink tea at a tea party, but not coffee or juice. In addition to the customs, we need to know about the history. London has a long history of about two thousand years. Liverpool is famous for industry in the 18t

10、h century. When we are in Britain, we cant talk loudly in public. And we should stand in a line when we wait for buses or trains. The golden rule is：Watch the other people. Do as they do.【解析】试题分析：这是材料作文，介绍英国的习俗和历史。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般

11、现在时来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【写作亮点】这篇短文语句通顺，条理清晰，表达准确。特别连词In addition to运用，使文章表达更具条里性，过度自然，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。Writing2（2020全国初三单元测试）音乐的世界, 将世间万事万物带进了美好的时空。每每听着音乐, 就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐, 有着无穷魅力!音乐是世界上最美的语言!请你以“Music Makes Me _”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。Music Makes Me _例文

12、：Music Makes Me HappyI like music very much. It gives me energy when Im tired and it makes me happy when Im sad. Music is very important in our life. If there is no music, our life wont be so interesting. Different people like different kinds of music. I like electronic music thats loud. It makes me

13、 excited. I also like music that I can dance to. The Cool Kids is my favorite band. I cant stand music that is quiet and slow. It makes me sleepy. Music is the most beautiful language. Enjoy the music you like, and enjoy yourself!【解析】题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，以“音乐使我”为题写一篇文章。根据题目可知，本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，主要介

14、绍音乐给自己带来的感受以及在生活中的作用。例文点评：本文分为两部分，第一部分主要介绍“我”喜欢的以及不喜欢的音乐种类，并讲述了音乐带给自己的感受，第二部分总结全文，点明主题。文章逻辑顺畅，紧扣话题，向我们介绍了音乐的魅力。高分亮点：短语：kinds of；electronic music；dance to；enjoy yourself。句型：If there is no music, our life wont be so interesting.（if引导的条件状语从句）I also like music that I can dance to.（that引导的定语从句）Writing3（2

15、019山东初三单元测试）书面表达。节目朗读者备受欢迎。阅读使人明智、使人放松、使人充实，你喜欢阅读吗? 请你以Reading is very important为题,写一篇有关阅读的短文。要点: 1. 阅读的益处; 2. 你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间、地点、购书方式等）; 3. 你的阅读体会; 4. 你的阅读计划; 5. 号召大家多阅读。提示:1. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名;2. 短文中应包含所有要点;3. 词数100左右，可适当发挥。开头已给出,不计入总词数。Reading is very importantReading can not only open up our ey

16、es but also improve our knowledge. _【范文】Reading is very importantReading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge. I like reading a lot. In my spare time, I often read newspapers and magazines,from which I can get lots of fun and learn about whats going on around the world. I als

17、o read my favorite books such as storybooks and novels,which make me relax and happy. On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed. I used to buy my favorite books at the bookstore, but now I usually buy them online

18、. Summer vacation is coming. I plan to read more English books to improve my English ability. I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates. Its time for us to take up a good reading habit because its very important and necessary for us. Lets do more reading together.【解析】1.题干解读：这是一篇

19、提纲作文。内容是以Reading is Very Important为题，写一篇有关阅读的短文，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。2.例文点评：例文采取三段式，用第一人称来写作。开头就点明阅读的重要性，第二段就具体列举了自己与阅读的故事，从而进一步说明阅读的重要性，最后写了自己关于暑假的阅读计划，号召大家阅读。3.高分亮点：短语：around the world 全世界；and so on 等等；make sb+adj 让某人怎样；spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事；share sth with sb 和某人分享某某。句型:1I also read my favorit

20、e books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relax and happysuch as 例如，and so on等等；which作为关系词的定语从句，which做主语，修饰先行词favorite books。2And I often read for about half an hour before going to bedbefore going to bed是省略句，完整表达是before I go to bed。3Its time for us to form a good reading habit beca

21、use its very important and necessary for usIts time for sb to do sth 某人做某事的时间到了；because 引导的原因状语从句。Writing4（2019山东初三单元测试）某英文论坛的网友正在谈论自己最喜欢的电视节目。你最喜欢的电视节目是什么？请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的电视节目，参与此话题的讨论。要求：80词左右。提示：1. 节目的名字；2. 节目的性质：体育节目/娱乐节目/访谈节目/选秀节目；3. 此节目的内容或特色；4. 你喜欢此节目的原因。 _例文:My favorite TV program is

22、Happy Camp. Its an entertainment program. I watch it every Saturday night. Many famous movie stars are often on the show. They act and play games with the hosts. They re also interviewed by the hosts. Through the program,I can learn many things about the movie stars, such as their personalities, lik

23、es and dislikes. This program is interesting and I can learn something from it, so I like it very much.【解析】1.题干解读：本文属于话题作文，已经明确给出需要写作的话题“最喜欢的电视节目”，然后就此展开讨论。写作时可以按照所给的提示，逐一进行描述即可，要注意句子结构，适当的使用主从句提高作文的档次。2. 例文点评：本文使用三段式描写，第一段直接引出最喜欢的电视节目，第二段具体描述节目的具体特色内容，第三段描写喜欢这个节目的原因，把文章描述的很透彻，条理清晰，句式结构简单明了。3. 高分亮点：

24、短语：TV program；Happy Camp；movie star；such as；句型：so连接的并列句；It is 系表结构；and连接的并列句。Writing5（2018全国初三单元测试）中西方的饮食习惯大有不同。请写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍一些有关的差异。要点提示：1food2things used for eating 3eating etiquette(like whether people can make some noise when eating)词语提示：difference，prefer，steak(牛排)，make a loud noise，rude. _【范文

25、】There are many differences in eating habits between China and Western countriesFirstly，Chinese people eat rice，noodles，vegetables and meat while Western people prefer bread，milk，salad and steakSecondly，Westerners are used to eating with a knife and fork，but the Chinese eat with chopsticksThirdly, W

26、esterners dont make a loud noise during mealsThey think it is rudeBut it is common for the Chinese to talk with family and friends while having dinner【解析】这是一篇话题作文，谈论中西方的饮食习惯的不同。根据要点提示介绍一下中西方的饮食习惯的不同之处。主要从食物、吃饭时使用的餐具、和吃饭过程中的礼节等三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称较为灵活。注意作文中必须包含词语提示，并适当发挥。写作时，语言要简洁，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确

27、，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【亮点一】本文在写作时，使用了表示顺序的词语，如Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly等，使文章层次清楚，一目了然。【高分句型一】Westerners are used to eating with a knife and fork，but the Chinese eat with chopsticks西方人习惯用刀叉吃饭，但中国人用筷子吃饭。短语are used to doing sth. 的应用，使文章具有了可读性。but the Chinese e

28、at with chopsticks表示转折。 【高分句型二】But it is common for the Chinese to talk with family and friends while having dinner但是中国人在吃饭的时候和家人和朋友聊天是很普遍的。这句话使用了句型It is +形容词+for sb. to do sth. 说明该生的语言功底深厚。Writing6（2019全国初二课时练习）为了实践社会主义核心价值观，你校学生会决定举办以“文明礼仪伴我行”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你根据以下要点提示及要求，写一篇英语短文参赛。要点提示：1. 尊敬(respect)父

29、母，帮助他们做家务；2. 对人有礼貌，诚实友好，帮助他人；3. 不在公共场合大声讲话，不乱扔付费；4. 节约粮食，节约用水；要求：1. 短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并在此基础上适当发挥；2. 80词左右（短文开头与结尾已给出， 不计入总词数）；3. 文章中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名。As a middle school student, we should have good manners._In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future.【范文】As a middle

30、 school student, we should have good manners. First, we should respect our parents and help them do some housework. Second, we should be polite and honest. Also, its always good to be kind and friendly. We should try our best to help the people in need. Third, wed better not talk loudly in public. D

31、ont throw rubbish everywhere. Its our duty to keep our city clean and beautiful. Fourth, we are supposed to save food and water. Lastly, its important and necessary for us to help protect the environment.In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future.【解析】试题分析：本题要求以“文明礼仪伴我行

32、”为主题写一篇参赛征文，根据提纲提示，本文要从在家、在学校、在公共场所及节约粮食、水等等方面进行写作。要求要包含提纲中提示的所有信息，并作必要的发挥。短文用第一人称，用一般现在时态，可以适当用一些含情态动词：should, can等等句子帮助表达责任与义务。短文要作到思想健康，主旨鲜明突出。写作亮点：本文用first, second, third, fourth, lastly等等列出中学生如何做到“文明礼仪伴我行”，层次清楚，要点分明。文中多次用到情态动词should，明确人们的责任与义务，主旨鲜明，重点突出。文中使用的不定式作主语的结构，had better, be supposed to等结构都为本文增色不少。【考点定位】 考查提纲类作文。