专题08 劳动故事-直击2022高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”.doc

1、专题08直击2022高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”-劳动故事劳动，可以让我们品尝甜蜜01阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Theyd been planning this forever. From her birth, most likely. Myas mother, Helena loved hosting parties. And Aunt Beatrice loved birthdays. Together, theyd make her Sweet Sixteen a hundred times bigger, bolder, and bri

2、ghter than it needed to be. They selected a theme every year and stuck to it. Her fourteenth had been the “Snow White” and her ninth had been the “Frozen”. They never told her what the theme was the day before. Shed just wake up her birthday morning, a brand new birthday outfit (一套服装) laid neatly on

3、 her dresser (an outfit related to the theme, of course) and she would open her door to see the adventure that lay ahead of her that day. Mya had a few guesses as to what this years theme would be. A play on the words “Sweet Sixteen” was likely a candy themed party, perhaps? But shed had a baking pa

4、rty a few years ago and Helena was anything but repetitive. Mya didnt have any interest in cars, so she doubted a sports-car party was on the menu. Shed tried to look through her mothers purchase history online, but her mother had been careful enough to delete everything recent. So the only clue lef

5、t was the birthday outfit she would receive the next morning. May 1st, Mya woke. The bright sunlight begged her eyes to open and she loved the day that her birthday took place. It was always nice out on May 1st and it never rained. This morning was no different than her previous birthdays. She sat u

6、p in her bed and looked to her dresser before slipping out of bed and inspecting the outfit. She unfolded it and held it against her body, seeing how it was like. It reached down, just above the ankle. Mya dressed, eyed herself in the mirror and found it was not so much a pretty outfit as she had re

7、ceived before. It was totally one for blue-collar workers!注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly, her thoughts were interrupted by a knock._With everything done, her face shone with a sweet smile._【答案】例文1:Suddenly, her thoughts were interrupted by a knock. Helena walked in. “What is my birt

8、hday theme this year, mum?” Mya asked. “Labor!” Helena answered in a firm voice. “But I was expecting a party!” her voice sounded shaky. Oh, how could she forget she was born on Labors Day! Myas feet brought her small steps to follow Helena to the van. On arriving at a farm, she noticed the vast lan

9、d of wheat spreading over the horizon that made a splendid view itself. Their job was to remove the weeds.With everything done, her face shone with a sweet smile. Several drops of sweat traced a path on her red and pink cheeks and she turned to Helena: “this is not bad, mum and I feel Ive grown up e

10、nough to help you with something.” Helena pulled Mya into her arms and planted a big kiss on her forehead. The sun in May was shining brighter than ever like a fire ball. Picturing the good harvest of this year, they hit the road with a happy birthday song echoing in the van.例文 2:Suddenly, her thoug

11、hts were interrupted by a knock. “Is the birthday girl up?” Helena asked. Mya opened her bedroom door and surprisingly found they looked the same! Looking at Myas surprised face, Helena grinned and led her to the kitchen. There was no meal on the table. “Lets prepare for the party together this time

12、.” Aunt Beatrice said gladly dressed in the same outfit. It suddenly occurred to Mya that the theme this year was supposed to be “Sweet Labor, Sweet Sixteen”.With everything done, her face shone with a sweet smile. Looking around the living room, Mya felt the happiness brought by labor the first tim

13、e. “Happy Birthday!” Mya turned around in surprise. All of her friends jumped out of any hiding spots with everyone wearing the same outfit. They enjoyed the party and cleaned up together afterwards. Tired as Mya was, she pulled Helena and Beatrice into a hug tightly, saying “this is the best sweet

14、sixteen ever.”【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲的是Mya的妈妈和阿姨喜欢为她办生日派对，Mya一直在猜测她16岁生日派对的主题，可是没有结果，只能等生日那天早上看梳妆台上的衣服，那天早上她穿上衣服后发现自己完全是一个蓝领工人。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“突然，敲门声打断了她的思绪。”可知，第一段可描写Mya的妈妈告诉Mya今年生日的主题。由第二段首句内容“一切都做完了，她的脸上露出了甜蜜的微笑。”可知，第二段可描写Mya劳动后的感受。2.续写线索：告知主题到农场劳动劳动后的感受回家3.词汇激活行为类回答：answer/respond到达：arrive at/get

15、 to掠过：trace a path/skim over情绪类坚定的：firm/determined糟糕的：bad/terrible【点睛】高分句型1Oh, how could she forget she was born on Labors Day!(由that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)高分句型2On arriving at a farm, she noticed the vast land of wheat spreading over the horizon that made a splendid view itself.（由关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句）02It wa

16、s early spring and Nana was in the backyard with her grandchildren. Amy, Michael, and Justin were playing when Nana said, “Im going to start planting my garden. Who wants to help me?”“What are going to plant, Nana?” asked Amy. “I like big, yellow sunflowers.”“Im going to plant vegetables. That way w

17、e can have them to eat when they are ready,” said Nana.“How long does that take?” asked Michael. He liked vegetables sometimes, especially carrots.“It will take a few months before anything is ready to eat,” answered Nana. The children were surprised.“Months? Why would you do all that work and then

18、have to wait so long?” asked Amy. “You should just go to the store and buy them.”“Patience, my sweeties! Dont you know food always tastes best when you grow it yourself?” replied Nana. “And if all of you come to help, it wont be too much work.”“Ill help you, Nana,” offered Justin. He put down the so

19、ccer ball and went to look at the gardening tools Nana had laid out. “What do we do first?” Michael and Amy came over to look, too. Nana taught Justin how to use a trowel (小铲子) to dig small rows of holes for the seeds. Next, Nana showed Amy how to pour the seeds into each hole. And it was Michaels j

20、ob to cover up the holes with soil. Finally, Amy wrote the vegetable names on sticks that Justin pushed into the ground. “This way we can remember which vegetable seeds we have planted,” said Nana.When they had planted everything, the children took turns filling up the watering can so that Nana coul

21、d make the soil nice and wet for the seeds to start to grow. “Now we just water them a little every day, and with some time and sunshine, well have some delicious things to eat in the summer,” said Nana.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Whenever the grandchildren came to visit, they would dash

22、into the garden._Finally, Nana said it was time for the first harvest._【答案】Possible version1 :Whenever the grandchildren came to visit, they would dash into the garden. Not surprisingly, they were going to see how the garden was growing. After watering the vegetables, they would remove the weeds tha

23、t popped up around the plants and apply organic fertilizer under Nanas instruction if necessary. As time went by, the plants were growing taller and stronger. When they noticed the vegetables flowering and producing fruits, their eyes were sparkling like diamonds. Never had they looked forward to su

24、mmer like this before. But they clearly knew that its worthwhile to wait for the inviting results.Finally, Nana said it was time for the first harvest. Hearing that, the children all jumped into the air and cheers filled the whole garden. Nana gave them each baskets and, together they gathered some

25、of the cucumbers, carrots and tomatoes, which were turned into delicacies. “Who wants to help eat this fresh salad?” Nana asked. “Me!” everyone responded loudly. Tasting the salad, they thought nothing could be more delicious, because it was they who grew these vegetables. They all learned that many

26、 hands make light work and patience really pays off. Possible version 2 :Whenever the grandchildren came to visit, they would dash into the garden. Eager to help grow the vegetables well, they first took turns to water the plants. Then Nana showed them which plants needed trimming or which needed ty

27、ing up to grow tall and straight. Day after day, spring turned into summer and finally, the plants started revealing their colorful secrets. The children were thrilled to see the tomatoes turning red, the cucumbers hiding under the green leaves and the peppers growing bigger. Not until then did they

28、 realize that Nana was right- all they needed was patience. Finally, Nana said it was time for the first harvest. With baskets ready, Nana and the children started out on their business. Nana took them around the garden and picked some tomatoes, cucumbers, peppers and cabbages. Then for the followin

29、g hour, they were busying making vegetable salad. The children helped wash the dirt off the food while Nana chopped up the vegetables. When Nana asked who wanted to try the fresh salad, everyone expressed their willingness excitedly. “OK. Amy, get the plates. Justin, get the water and cups, and Mich

30、ael, get the forks. Lets celebrate the harvest!”【解析】本文以奶奶和孙子们在后院一起种植蔬菜为线索展开，讲述了那年早春，娜娜和她的孙子们在后院，艾米、迈克尔和贾斯汀正在玩耍，奶奶提出要种植蔬菜，一开始孙子们建议奶奶去商店买，因为自己种植蔬菜要做那么多工作，然后还要等这么长时间，奶奶让孙子们耐心点，因为自己种的食物总是味道最好的，奶奶认为如果大家都来帮忙，工作也不会太多。孙子们听了都乐意来帮忙，奶奶给孙子们分了工，奶奶耐心教导，当他们把所有的东西都种好后，孩子们轮流往水罐里灌满水，这样奶奶就能把土壤弄湿，让种子开始生长。奶奶说只要每天给它们浇水，再

31、加上一些时间和阳光，夏天就可以吃到美味的东西了。【详解】段落续写（以version1为例）：由第一段首句内容“每当孙子们来拜访时，他们都会冲进花园。”可知，第一段可描写孩子们怎样照顾这些植物们，以及看着蔬菜开花并结出果实时的兴奋心情。由第二段首句内容“最后，娜娜说是第一次收获的时候了。”可知，第二段可描写孩子们听到消息的喜悦之情，他们一起收集蔬菜，并把这些变成了美味佳肴，们认为没有什么比这更美味了，付出总有回报。续写线索：冲进花园看如何生长照顾花园开花结果高兴词汇激活行为类冲进：dash into/storm in除草：remove weeds/clean out weeds注意：notice

32、/note/find情绪类：骄傲地：loudly/with pride兴奋：jump into the air/ be up in the air【点睛】高分句型1. After watering the vegetables, they would remove the weeds that popped up around the plants and apply organic fertilizer under Nanas instruction if necessary. (由关系词that引导的限制性定语从句)高分句型2. Never had they looked forward

33、to summer like this before.(否定词never提于句首的部分倒装句)高分句型3. They all learned that many hands make light work and patience really pays off.(由连接词that引导的宾语从句作learned的宾语)03The Trouble With Chores (家庭杂务)The twins, Jenna and Jeff, were good at most things. Their dad was good at most things, too. But there was o

34、ne thing the twins and Dad were not good atthat was chores. It wasnt that Dad and the twins didnt want to do their chores. It was just that they always seemed to have reasons not to do them. And they had such good excuses.“Youre right, my dear,” said Mum. “The grass does need cutting. But a spider h

35、as spun a wonderful web on the lawn mower and I havent the heart to put all her hard work to waste.”“Mum,” said Jenna, “I know its my week to put up my cards. Its just that Im waiting for them to dry. Theyll be easier to scoop up that way.”“Mum,” said Jeff, “may I skip setting the table tonight? The

36、res a TV show on the Ice Age, and I have to do a report on the Beast of Baluchistan.”There were also the endless quarrels about who did what and who got the easy job. Mum sighed. If only Dad and the twins were as good at doing their chores as they were at arguing about them, life would be easier. Ta

37、lking of chores, Mum thought instead of pushing them for chores, it would be a lot easier to do them herself. And that was what she did. She put away all cards and set and cleared the table. She chased the dust bunnies from under the furniture and cleaned up the twins messy room.The twins did pick u

38、p and put away things occasionally. Dad did cut the grass once in a while. Not surprisingly, things began to slide. Everybody got a little unhappy, especially Mum, who spent much time doing chores. Something had to be done. But what?注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Mum decided to host a family

39、 meeting._Living in all that messy build-up wasnt much fun._【答案】Mum decided to host a family meeting. “My dear,” she said, “theres a lot more to life than chores. Ive been so concerned with the house that I havent been to the gym for weeks.” “Go to the gym to work out,” Dad and the twins applauded.

40、The whole family enjoyed themselves and not worrying about chores worked pretty well at first. But bit by bit, messy build-up began to take up the house.Living in all that messy build-up wasnt much fun. Dad decided to host a family meeting, too. No sooner had the meeting begun than everybody decided

41、 to do something about the awful mess. They picked up all the wet towels. They got the dishes out of the sink and banished the dust bunnies. Then they sat down, exhausted but pleased. At last, they realized there were a lot of meaningful things in life, including chores.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎和爸爸在大多数事

42、情上都很擅长。但有一件事他们都不擅长，那就是做家务。并不是他们不愿意做家务。只是他们似乎总有理由不去做。他们有很好借口；有时这对双胞胎确实偶尔会收拾东西，爸爸确实偶尔割草，但是似乎每个人都有点不高兴尤其是妈妈，因为她花了很多时间做家务。妈妈意识到必须做点什么。【详解】1.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“妈妈决定召开一次家庭会议”可知，第一段可描写家庭会议的计划和安排。由第二段首句内容“生活在如此混乱的环境中并没有多少乐趣。”可知，第二段可描写大家决定一起打扫如此混乱的环境。2.续写线索：家务找借口拒绝混乱收拾干净感悟3.词汇激活行为类拒绝：have excuses/didnt want to do

43、/refuse politely情绪类.高兴：pleased/happy .担心： concerned/worry【点睛】高分句型1. At last, they realized there were a lot of meaningful things in life, including chores.（省略连接词that的宾语从句作realize的宾语）高分句型2 No sooner had the meeting begun than everybody decided to do something about the awful mess. （否定词置于句首的半倒装句）04I r

44、eached into my backpack, feeling for my cellphone. I was tired of Aunt Letty talking on and on about her chickens, horses and cows. Worse, I was afraid of having to spend spring break at her farm.In spite of my protest, my parents decided that spending time at the farm would be a great experience fo

45、r me. My parents both grew up on farms and believed that responsibility, hard work and respect for the land were valuable lessons. “Lessons you need to learn, son,” they said.“So, have you ever ridden a horse?” Aunt Letty asked, trying to turn my attention away from my phone.“Hmmm, no. But Ive seen

46、horses on TV,” I answered, absent-minded.“Well, weve got a nice horse I think youll like. Hercules sounds like a beast, but hes a gentle giant. The other animals have names too, but dont worry, you wont have to remember their names. If you show up at the gate with feed, theyre happy!” she said smili

47、ng.I glanced at my aunt, angry that I was expected to work. Vacations were meant for sleeping late, playing video games, and maybe skateboarding. I tried to text a friend.“Phones dont work well out here. With all the hills and valleys, its hard to get a connection.”I continued texting, but she was r

48、ight there was no cell reception.The next few days were busy. We had breakfast before dawn. Then we went out to the barn to get the feed while the animals waited to be fed. The afternoons were occupied with hauling hay, clean-up, and caring for the animals. The animals depended on Aunt Letty, but th

49、ey also provided her with affection and necessities such as eggs, milk and cheese.At dusk, when the farm was finally quiet, Aunt Letty stretched her arms out and said, “Just take a deep breath of the sweet country air!” I, exhausted, was unable to appreciate my work.1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答

50、。On the fourth day, Aunt Letty announced, “Its time to meet Hercules.”_After the ride, time at the farm seemed to be different._【答案】Para 1: On the fourth day, Aunt Letty announced, “Its time to meet Hercules.” “You must be joking!” I responded, a flush of fright sweeping over me. Aunt Letty, grinnin

51、g, headed to the stable. Then in front of me was Hercules, standing over 2 meters high. A horrible dark giant! I backed away, shooting an angry glance at my aunt. “Oh, man, come on! Hes anything but a beast!” she encouraged me. Sensing her insistence, I scratched my head and shuffled to Hercules. Au

52、nt Letty helped me mount the horse and handed me the rein. Flicking his head and shaking his body, Hercules moved off, with a stiff me on it. Relax! Aunt said, trotting just beside us. Gradually, I adjusted myself, following Aunts instructions. And then, I was enjoying the gentle rhythmic jolts.Para

53、 2: After the ride, time at the farm seemed to be different. I had a friend, Hercules. The gentle giant, every evening, immersed in the setting sun, gracefully carried me strolling or galloping at the farm. And I had Aunt Letty. She, from dawn to dusk, tirelessly, cared for the animals and did the m

54、anual work, showing me responsibility, hard work and respect. And she did enjoy the busy and seemingly boring routine. Infected, I also began to appreciate my labor. It paid to work hard! Life was fulfilling and the animals rewarded us with affection and nice food. One day after enjoying some tasty

55、cheese my dear aunt made, I picked up the phone, prepared to tell my parents the spring break would be a great experience.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者讨厌在Letty姨妈的农场过春假，但作者的父母还是坚持让作者去，Letty姨妈告诉作者他们有一匹名叫Hercules的马，最后作者和这匹马成为了朋友，作者也在Letty姨妈的感染下感激自己的劳动，认为这个春假很有意义。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“第四天，Letty姨妈宣布：是时候见见Hercules了。

56、”可知，第一段可描写作者见到Hercules和骑马的经过和感受。由第二段首句内容 “骑马之后，在农场的时间似乎变了。”可知，第二段可描写作者在农场的生活和体会。2.续写线索：作者见到Hercules作者骑马作者适应农场生活作者被姨妈感染热爱劳动作者认为这个春假很棒3.词汇激活行为类开玩笑：joke/ kid回答：respond / reply照顾：care for/look after情绪类温柔：gentle / soft愤怒：angry /mad【点睛】高分句型1 I backed away, shooting an angry glance at my aunt. (运用了现在分词作状语)

57、高分句型2 One day after enjoying some tasty cheese my dear aunt made, I picked up the phone, prepared to tell my parents the spring break would be a great experience. (运用了动名词作宾语)05I had a deadline for a huge project at work. Since my husband was on business, I hurried to buy a rotisserie chicken(烤鸡) for

58、 dinner. I figured that would buy me an extra hour to work on my project since I wouldnt have to cook that night.Now, it was 6:00 pm, and I was typing away, making good progress. My kids were downstairs watching TV. My eleven-year-old son, Nathan, came in and said, Mom, Im hungry. Can you warm up th

59、e chicken now?In a little bit, I answered without looking up from the computer. Im trying to work.Ten minutes later, my older son, Jordan, came in to tell me that he was hungry too, and I needed to warm up the chicken. Ill do it as soon as Im at a stopping point, I said.Fifteen minutes after that, m

60、y eighteen-year-old daughter, Julia? made the same request.I exploded. Youre all old enough to put the rotisserie chicken in the microwave, I nearly shouted. You guys are watching TV while Im working on something important. You should just take some responsibility.Twenty minutes later, a paper plate

61、 filled with chicken appeared on the desk next to my computer. I smiled at the kids, Sorry I yelled at you guys. Im just so tired of being ATF around here.ATF?All Things Food. Its my responsibility to plan the meals, shop for the food, cook the food, and then clean up the dishes afterward. If its fo

62、od-related, it automatically falls to me. I dont want to yell at you guys again, but Im overwhelmed（压倒的）right now.Julia nodded, We understand, Mom. Whens your deadline?In two days, and I dont know how Im going to finish. Tears threatened as I thought about how much work I still had to do.Julia looke

63、d at her brothers. For the next two days, the three of us are ATF. Lets leave Mom alone and go to make a plan.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The next noon, when Julia came home from her job at a local grocery store, she was carrying multiple bags of food. _The day o my deadline was much the

64、same. _【答案】The next noon, when Julia came home from her job at a local grocery store, she was carrying multiple bags of food. An hour later, Nathan tiptoed into my study room to deliver my lunch to me. As he handed me a paper plate containing a turkey sandwich, some chips and apple slices, he smiled

65、. I hope your work is going well, he whispered and then tiptoed back downstairs. I laughed, took a bite and got back to work. That evening, after several productive hours of work, I could smell something cooking. It actually smelled good.The day of my deadline was much the same. Jordan delivered bre

66、akfast and lunch to me at the computer. Then, to my greatest delight, I typed the last words on my project at 3:00 pm. I went downstairs and announced that I had finished my work. I said I would make dinner that night. But Julia shook her head, No, youve earned a break. My mouth dropped open, but I

67、didnt argue. I curled up in bed with a novel Id wanted to read for months. Three luxurous hours later, Nathan knocked on the door and told me that dinner was ready.【解析】本文以食物为线索展开，讲述了作者在工作即将到了最后期限时，对于还要照顾孩子们的饮食有些忙不过来，对孩子们发火，孩子们意识到作者正在忙于工作，决定负责家人的食物。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“第二天中午，茱莉亚从当地一家杂货店下班回家时，她背着好几袋食物。

68、”可知，第一段可描写孩子们为自己和作者准备食物，作者继续高效率地工作。由第二段首句内容“我的截止日期到了。”可知，第二段可描写作者忙完工作，之后打算去做饭，而孩子们决定让作者休息，继续负责做饭。2.续写线索：孩子做饭作者工作工作完成作者想去做饭作者休息3.词汇激活行为类蹑手蹑脚地走：tiptoed/make ones way noiselessly/walk quietly低声说：whispered/speak in a whisper/speak in a low voice拒绝：shook her head/decline/refuse politely情绪类喜悦：smiled/ give

69、 a soft smile/ laugh惊讶：dropped open/be surprised/ be amazed/ be astonished【点睛】【高分句型1】As he handed me a paper plate containing a turkey sandwich, some chips and apple slices, he smiled.（由连接词as引导时间状语从句）【高分句型2】I went downstairs and announced that I had finished my work.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句作announced的宾语）13原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！学科网（北京）股份有限公司