Unit 5 Music -【同步写作课】2023-2024学年高一英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019必修第二册）.docx

1、必修第二册Unit 5单元写作指导与演练Write a speech单元写作早知道写作任务本单元的写作任务是写一篇演讲稿。欢迎词（welcoming speech）是在正式场合迎接客人时的致辞。其特点是热情、友好、愉快、短小精悍。它由标题、称呼、正文组成。而当客人要离别时，主人和客人又欢聚一堂，互相问候，并致祝愿，表示不舍之情，以增进友谊。这时主人的话叫欢送词(send-off speech)。常用表达1. on behalf of代表2. an honour for sb. to do有幸3. to give/ express our warmest welcome to向表示欢迎4. gr

2、eet sb with warm applause用热烈掌声欢迎某人5. give a speech发表演讲6. in bidding farewell to在临别之际7. wish sb. a pleasant journey祝某人一路顺风8. express our sincere thanks to表达我们诚挚的谢意9. extend our greetings to向致以问候10. keep in touch with保持联系单元话题真题展示高考链接欢迎致辞2021年1月浙江卷欢迎辞结构一般为（1）自我介绍（看情况是否需要）+表示欢迎；（2）活动安排（这个是重点，一般讲三点即可）；（3

3、）祝愿（注意祝愿内容尽可能与活动安排密切相关）Use what you have learnt to write a speech .假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1. 表示欢迎；2. 介绍活动安排；3. 表达祝愿。发言稿常用于交流思想、感情，表达自己的观点或介绍自己的学习、工作情况和活动计划等，具有宣传、鼓动、教育和欣赏等作用，是人们在工作、生活和学习中经常使用的一种实用性很强的应用文体。一篇好的发言稿主题明确、语言得体、条理清晰。写作时要注意的几个方面：(1)发言稿要围绕主题，抓住重点，详略得当。(2)针对性要强，这样易于吸

4、引听众的注意力。(3)语言要简洁，用语要口语话、通俗化。少用冗长句式，便于听众接受和理解信息，句型要多样化。(4)感情要真挚，以情动人，以理服人，引起读者的兴趣和共鸣。只有拉近与听众的距离，听众才会认可你的发言，达到交流和接受的目的。内容表述【表示欢迎】1. First of all, please allow me to express a warm welcome to you on behalf of our school.首先，请允许我代表我们学校对你们表示热烈的欢迎。2. Im honored to have this opportunity to welcome all of yo

5、u to visit our school.我很荣幸有这个机会欢迎大家来我们学校参观。3. We have been looking forward to seeing you for a long time. 我们一直期待着与你们相见。4. I feel greatly privileged to have a chance to stand here, on behalf of all the students, to give a warm welcome to you. 我很荣幸有机会代表所有的学生站在这里，向你们表示热烈的欢迎。【表达祝愿】1. Wish you a pleasant

6、 journey. 祝您这次路途愉快。2. I hope you can enjoy your stay in our school. 希望你在我们学校过得愉快。【小试牛刀】Hello! My name is John, and Im here to talk about the power of music over words. Two years ago, my grandmother passed away, and music has helped me cope since then.Sometimes words cannot describe what we are feeli

7、ng, but music can. As Hans Christian Andersen once said,Where words fail, music speaks.”Music is like a special language that everyone can understand.Have you ever heard a piece of music and remembered an important time in your life? Perhaps when something important happened or when you feltreally h

8、appy or sad.I feel this way about a piece of classical music by Eric Satie called“Gymnopdie No.1.It reminds me of my grandmother. It is like an old friend comforting me when I hear it.This music helps me remember how much I miss her. It helps me remember all the great times we had. And music helps m

9、e be grateful for that time together. If you struggle to find the words to help you, music can be your guide.Types of Music(音乐类型)1. classical music古典音乐2.folk music 民间音乐3.rock n roll 摇滚乐4.jazz 爵士乐5.pop 流行音乐6.country music乡村音乐7.orchestra music管弦乐8.hip-hop嘻哈乐9.symphony 交响乐10.electronic music电子音乐11.rhyt

10、hm and blues节奏布鲁斯Appreciation of Music(音乐欣赏)1.marvelous 非凡的2.peaceful music宁静的音乐3.fascinating 迷人的4.heroic music英雄的音乐5.inspiring 鼓舞人心的6.dark music黑暗的音乐7.melodious 优美动听的8.the positive reaction of the audience观众们积极的回应9.be moved by受到感动10.heart-rending令人悲痛的11.The bands music is inspired by.这个乐队的音乐以为灵感。12

11、.fall in love with 爱上 13.expressive and emotional 有表现力和感染力的14.virtual choir虚拟合唱团15.be/become popular among受欢迎16.on stage在舞台上 17.be popular with people of all ages老少皆宜18.taste in music音乐的品味19.be pleased with对.满意20.target audience目标观众21.from now/then on从现在/那时起22.show a strong touch of Chinese music表现出

12、强烈的中国音乐风格23.a sense of satisfaction满足感24.touch my heart/soul触及我的心灵/灵魂 25.high art 高雅艺术Creation of Music(音乐创作)1. award-winning composer and conductor获奖作曲家兼指挥2.All my hard work paid off.我所有的努力得到了回报。3.be uploaded onto the Internet被上传到网上4.music training 音乐训练5.try out for the famous musical参加著名音乐剧的试演6.or

13、iginal compositions原创作品7.lead to导致8.set up equipment搭建器材9.a worldwide phenomenon风靡全球10.be capable of performing有能力表演11.give sb the inspiration to do sth 给某人灵感12.produce albums制作专辑13.be capable of 能够14.write sbs own original composition写原创歌曲15.would rather do sth宁愿做. 16.develop your identity in music

14、形成自己的音乐风格17.prefer to do sth更喜欢18.in addition to除.以外 19.perform live现场表演20.people to set up equipment安装设备的人21.practise the same composition for an hour a day每天练习一小时同一首曲子Influence of Music(音乐的影响)1. gives me energy/hope给我能量/希望 2. 2.help him through his dark times 帮助他度过了生命中的黑暗时期3.have the opportunity t

15、o do sth有机会做某事4.help connect ordinary people together帮助把普通人联系在一起5.increase sales of the singers new album增加歌手新专辑的销量6.prove to be结果是，证明为 7.keep ones soul at peace保持心灵平静8.thus make the world a better place世界因此变得更加美好9.in relief如释重负10.enable sb to focus all his/her attention on sth使某人能够将全部的注意力集中在某事上11.r

16、emind sb of sth使某人回忆起某事12.cure sb of sth治愈某人的病 13.recover from the shock从打击中恢复过来14.have an impact on对.有影响15.touch a part of ones being触及到某人情感的一处16.bring people of different cultures together把来自于不同文化的人们聚到一起 17.relate the song to his/her life将歌曲与他/她的生活联系起来18.Jazz music had a big impact on his life.爵士音

17、乐对他的人生有重大的影响你校英语俱乐部将举行主题为“My favorite kind of music”的演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿参赛。注意:词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)。Good morning, everyone!Thank you very much for your attention!_一、审题定调演讲稿以简单句为主要表达形式，语言要具有感染力，所以我们可以使用祈使句、感叹句等句式来达到这种目的。写作时还要注意适当地使用关联词承前启后。时态应以一般现在时为主。人称宜用第一人称，这样能引起更多人的关注与共鸣。二、谋篇布局演讲稿一般由称呼语、正文和结束语三部

18、分组成。我们可以将正文部分分为三部分:第一部分:说明自己喜欢的音乐类型;第二部分:说明自己喜欢这类音乐的原因;第三部分:进行总结。Good morning, everyone!Different people like different kinds of music. As far as Im concerned, popular music is my favorite. First, the lyrics of popular music are usually easy to understand and its topics are various, allowing everyon

19、e to choose what they like. Besides, popular music is closely related to what is happening in modern life. Thus it can stir up our emotions easily. Last, there are many famous singers whose sounds are extremely attractive.All in all, popular music is my favorite kind of music and I hope more people

20、can enjoy it. Thank you very much for your attention!假设你叫李华，欲与来自本校不同班级的另外4名同学组建一支乐队，但缺乏经验，请就以下情况或问题给知名音乐人卡曾斯（Cousins）先生发一封电子邮件，以寻求帮助。1. 成员中有三名男生和两名女生，均喜欢流行音乐与现代舞蹈；2. 每周周末排练是否足够？初期演唱的音乐宜多元化还是一种风格？ 3. 怎样获得较多的表演机会？ 4. 希望他能为乐队取个名字。注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. E-mail的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。_【佳作欣赏】Dear M

21、r. Cousins,Since you are a well-known musician, Im writing this e-mail to ask you for some advice on how to form a band.I,as well as two boys and two girls in different classes in our school, want to form a band. We are all fond of pop music and modern dance. Id like to know whether we should play o

22、ne kind of music or different styles to start with. And is it enough to practise only at weekends? How can we get more chances to perform?Wed appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【链接高考经典诵读】（2021年1月浙江卷）假定你是李华，下周有

23、新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1. 表示欢迎；2. 介绍活动安排；3. 表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【佳作欣赏1】Dear friends, Welcome to my school! Its nice to meet you in my school. In celebration of your arrival, there are many activities to be held. First of all, we will organize an amazing cultural show on

24、 the playground,which I believe will be a good feast for your eyes.In addition, its advisable to have a bite of local food. The Chinese food likedumplingsis so delicious that you are certain to fall in love with it the minute you taste it. Its your arrival that makes my school much more colorful. I

25、hope you will have an unforgettable trip here.Thank you.【佳作欣赏2】Dear friends, Im Li Hua. On behalf of our school, Im delighted to extend our warm welcome to you. Your visit bears great significance. To welcome you, a variety of activities have been arranged. What comes first is to visit the school hi

26、story museum, where you can gain a deeper insight into our schools distinctive development. Additionally, as scheduled, well pay a visit to the Song City, a theme park in which you can have a taste of a range of ancient Chinese cultures. My dear friends, your visit surely will promote our friendship

27、. Sincerely wish your experience memorable and rewarding!Thank you.【佳作欣赏3】Distinguished guests: On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting. At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which

28、contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students. As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable experience.