广东省惠州市惠东县惠东高级中学2018届高三英语第二轮复习运用高级词汇和短语润色写作(共19张PPT).ppt

1、书面表达(满分25分)某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“你喜欢老教师还是新教师?”请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。老年教师青年教师教学耐心讲解细致经验丰富精力充沛教学活泼勇于创新你的观点?注意：1词数120左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数；2短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯“Young teachers or old teachers，who do you like?”Different students have different answers.Some students like old teachers teaching,becaus

2、e they think that old teachers have more teaching experience and that they will be patient to talk.I like young teachers teaching.Firstly,we students have many same opinions on many things.So they are our friends and our teachers.Secondly,they are younger.They can make their classes funny.Besides,th

3、ey are more ready to accept new ideas.Thirdly,most young teachers love their work and spend much time on their work.In a word,I prefer young teachers.One students original version“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?”Opinions are divided on this question.Some students are fond of

4、elderly teachers teaching,because they hold a belief that elderly teachers have more teaching experience and thus they tend to be patient and careful with explanations.However,I prefer to be taught by young teachers.Firstly,we students have much in common with them.Consequently,they are likely to be

5、come our friends as well as our teachers.Secondly,they are more energetic and enthusiastic.Usually they can lecture their class with vivid descriptions.Besides,they are likely to accept or create new ideas.Thirdly,the majority of young teachers devote themselves to their work,making it creative and

6、effective.In a word,from my personal perspective,the advantages of young teachers outweigh those of elderly ones.A possible improved version“Young teachers or old teachers，who do you like?”Different students have different answers.Some students like old teachers teaching,because they think that old

7、teachers have more teaching experience and that they will be patient to talk.“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?”Opinions are divided on this question.Some students are fond of elderly teachers teaching,because they hold a belief thatelderly teachers have more teaching experienc

8、e and thus they tend to be patientand careful with explanations.I like young teachers teaching.Firstly,we students have many same opinions on many things.So they are our friends and our teachers.Secondly,they are younger.They can make their classes funny.Besides,they are more ready to acceptnew idea

9、s.Thirdly,most young teachers lovetheir work and spendmuch time on their work.However,I prefer to be taughtby young teachers.Firstly,we students have much in common with them.Consequently,they are likely to become our friends as well as our teachers.Secondly,they are more energetic and enthusiastic.

10、Usually they can lecture their class with vividdescriptions.Besides,they are likely to accept or create new ideas.Thirdly,the majority of young teachers devotethemselves to their work,making it creative and effective.In a word,I preferyoung teachers.In a word,from my personal perspective,the advanta

11、ges of young teachers outweigh those of elderly ones.词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了所有的要点 2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词What is a good writing？技巧1.使用较高级的、地道的词汇表达法3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达

12、效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式Question:What are advanced words and expressions?He is a good student(He is sure to succeed).He is a promising student.He is a good student(He works hard).He is a diligent student.He is a good student(He is always ready to help others).He is a warm-hearted student.He is a good student

13、(He behaves well.).He is a well-behaved students.He is a good student(He has many good qualities).He is a students with great virtues(美德）.He is a good doctor.(His skills are of a very high standard)He is a professional doctor.He is a good president.(He has a strong desire and determination to succee

14、d.)He is an ambitious president.Question:what are advanced words and expressions?Words that are not general(笼统）,but precise（精确）and specific（具体）.联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。

15、村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，可适当增加内容使行文连贯。2）词数：120之间。Practice 书面表达：Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school.This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new loo

16、k.The school here was very small.Now it has been rebuilt.The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys.It is the most beautiful building in the village.All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!Ladies and gentlem

17、en,Welcome to our school!This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.This village is an average one inChina with approximately 500 people from roug

18、hly 100 families.Villagers used to live in absolute poverty.However,enormous changes have taken place since the Reform and Opening policy in 1978.The living standard has risen and the whole village grows fairly more prosperousthan before.书面表达：In the past,the school here was very small.Now it has bee

19、n rebuilt.The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys.It is the most beautiful building in the village.All the school-age children can studyhere.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.In the past,the school here was shabby and most children didnt have access to education.But now it has been r

20、ebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.All the school-age children can get educated in the modern grand school without charge.May you have a pleasant time here!Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!This village is an a

21、verage one inChina with approximately 500 people from roughly 100 families.Villagers used to live in absolute poverty.However,enormous changes have taken place since the Reform and Opening policy in 1978.The living standard has risen and the whole village grows fairly more prosperous than before.In

22、the past,the school here was shabby and most children didnt have access to education.But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.All the school-age children can get educated in the modern grand school without charge.M

23、ay you have a pleasant time here!Thank you.Homework请你给中国日报写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。原因：1、家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱养家。2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。看法：1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。Now in the country areas,there are many children out of school.Most families are poor and c

24、ant afford their education.They have to stay at home and make money.Some parents think daughters neednt go to school.They dont let them go to school.Some children are not interested in their studies and wouldnt like to go to school.All the children including girls should be educated.The whole society should pay attention to it.Theyll play an important part in the future of our country.