2020-2021学年新教材英语人教版选择性必修第一册课件：UNIT 4 BODY LANGUAGE SECTION Ⅳ　WRITING .pptx

1、完成一篇与body language有关的概要写作典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Happy,angry,amazedthese are some of the emotions we like to express these days when were sending a message on our smartphones!Were also using them as a quick way of telling someone how were feeling.Emojis have become a vital tool

2、 for communication.典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练The emoji was first invented in Japan in the late 1990s and the word“emoji”comes from the Japanese words for“picture”and“character”.The number of different images has dramatically increased since then and now we have a picture for every mood or situation.So now

3、 we have the option to give this new creation the visual“thumbs-up”but have you thought why weve become so addicted to using emojis?Professor Evans has典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练written a book called The Emoji Code.He says,“Increasingly,what were finding is that digital communication is taking over from ce

4、rtain aspects of face-to-face interaction.One of the reasons emojis are so interesting is that they really do enable us to express our emotional selves much more effectively.”So emojis are a sort of replacement for the visual signals or non-verbal clues we normally give when we speak to someone face

5、-to-face.典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练Another advantage of emojis is that they are an international languagethey dont use words but tell a message in the form of pictures so they can be easily understood whatever your native language is.However,the emojis you send need some thought as they can sometimes be m

6、isunderstoodif a friend sends you an emoji of a hammer,you may think he is angry when really he is saying he has hurt himself or he is clumsy!典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练Emojis are a good way for showing common emotions.But as Linguist Neil Cohn says,“To many,emojis are an exciting development of the way we

7、 communicate;To others,they are extinction of language.”It does show there is a lot more to our communication than words alone.But does this mean the decline in traditional writing?典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练概要写作是一种限制性写作的作文形式,它是阅读理解和写作的有机结合。所给短文一般在350词以内,以说明文、议论文为主。要求基于所给短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要(词数不得少于40或多于80);所写概

8、要不但要清晰地呈现原文的要点,且各要点的表达还要相对独立,整篇概要内容做到上下连贯,结构紧凑。该题型对考生的读写要求较高,主要考查考生对大段阅读文字的概括能力,如考查考生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力。同时,考查考生用简洁典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。进行概要写作时,考生要把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词或句表述出来,而不是抄袭文章的原句,更不是把细节性信息作为中心。考生要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换,对文章的具体信息进行概括,再用合适的语言表达出来。在写作时,考生首先要仔细阅读所给短文,掌握文

9、章的主旨和结构,明确各段的大意,列出原文要点。分析原文的内容和结构,将内容分项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序。在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部分。典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练就这篇文章而言,文章介绍了表情符号在交流中的重要地位、历史演变过程以及表情符号的优点与它可能会造成的一些问题。在写作前,需要考生认真弄清叙述或说明的方式以及文章框架结构,并归纳各段的段意。因为概要写作是写全文概要,不是写某一部分的概要,或者就某些问题写出要点。因此一定要弄清文章结构,归纳文章各段大意。这篇文章一共五段,第一段描写表情符号在当今交流中的运用;第二段描写表情符号的历史演变进程;第三、四段描写表情符

10、号的优点;第五段描写表情符号的运用可能会产生的一些问题和缺点。典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练分析原文的内容和结构后,将内容分项扼要表述,并注意在结构上的顺序。在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部分。本文中要点有三:第一,介绍表情符号的地位;第二,表情符号的历史演变;第三,表情符号的优点以及表情符号会造成的问题。典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练在进行概要写作时,同学们需要注意以下五点:(1)概要应包括原文中的主要事实,略去不必要的细节。(2)安排好篇幅的比例,概要应同原文保持协调,即用较多的文字写重要内容,用较少的文字写次要内容。(3)注意要点之间的衔接,要用适当的关联词语贯通

11、全文,切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子,但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语,以免显得生硬。典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练(4)不排斥用原文的某些词句,但不要照搬原文的句子,如果不能完全用自己的话语表达,至少对原文句子做一些同义词替换,如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好。(5)计算词数,看是否符合规定的词数要求。典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练Emojis have become important in communication.Since the creation in Japan in the 1990s,their number has risen so sharply t

12、hat now each emotion has a corresponding emoji.They replace non-verbal language in communication due to its efficiency in conveying feelings while emojis can cause misunderstanding.Although they add colour to communication,they may indicate the weakening of traditional writing.典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练名师

13、点评 范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Since the creation in Japan in the 1990s,their number has risen so sharply that now each emotion has a corresponding emoji.运用了结果状语从句。They replace non-verbal language in communication due to its efficiency in conveying feelings while emojis can cause misund

14、erstanding.运用了while表示前后对比。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练1.同义词替换原文:Emojis have become a vital tool for communication.提炼:Emojis have become important in communication.2.使用从句原文:The emoji was first invented in Japan in the late 1990s.提炼:Since the creation

15、 in Japan in the 1990s,.典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练3.高度概括原文:One of the reasons emojis are so interesting is that they really do enable us to express our emotional selves much more effectively.so they can be easily understood whatever your native language is.However,the emojis you send need some thought as

16、they can sometimes be misunderstood.典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练提炼:They replace non-verbal language in communication due to its efficiency in conveying feelings while emojis can cause misunderstanding.典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练4.转换句式原文:To many,emojis are an exciting development of the way we communicate;To others

17、,they are extinction of language.提炼:Although they add colour to communication,they may indicate the weakening of traditional writing.典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练阅读下面的短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Meeting people from another culture can be difficult.From the beginning,people may send the wrong signal.Or they may pay

18、 no attention to signals from another person who is trying to develop a relationship.典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练Different cultures emphasise(强调)the importance of relationship building to a greater or lesser degree.For example,business in some countries is not possible until there is a relationship of trust

19、.Even with people at work,it is necessary to spend a lot of time in“small talk”,usually over a glass of tea,before they do any job.In many European countrieslike the UK or Francepeople find it easier to build up a lasting working relationship at restaurants or cafes rather than at the office.典题示例写作指

20、导高分范文提分典句即学即练Talk and silence may also be different in some cultures.I once made a speech in Thailand.I had expected my speech to be a success and start a lively discussion;instead there was an uncomfortable silence.The people present just stared at me and smiled.After getting to know their ways bet

21、ter,I realised that they thought I was talking too much.In my own culture,we express meaning mainly through words,but people there sometimes feel too many words are unnecessary.典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练Even within Northern Europe,cultural differences can cause serious problems.Certainly,English and Germa

22、n cultures share similar values;however,Germans prefer to get down to business more quickly.We think that they are rude.In fact,this is just because one culture starts discussions and makes decisions more quickly.典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练People from different parts of the world have different values,and

23、sometimes these values are quite against each other.However,if we can understand them better,a multicultural environment(多元文化环境)will offer a wonderful chance for us to learn from each other.典题示例写作指导高分范文提分典句即学即练It can be very challenging to meet people from anotherculture due to cultural misunderstan

24、dings.Some culturesvalue personal relationship building while others pay lessattention to it.People from different parts of the world alsohave very different attitudes towards whether they shouldtalk more or stay silent.Even in some similar culturalbackgrounds,people deal with things in different ways.So thekey solution is to better understand each other.