初中英语书面表达复习（25张）.ppt

1、英语书面表达15分中考英语写作评分标准一类（13-15分）：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基本无语法和词汇方面的错误。词数达到要求。基本无单词拼写及标点错误。二类（10-12分）：写出大部分要点内容。语句较流畅。有少量语法和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。有少量单词拼写及标点错误。三类（7-9分）：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有一些语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误。四类（4-6分）：写出少量内容要点，语句不通顺。语法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多。只有少量句子表达正确。五类（0-3分）：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较多。基本上没有通顺的句子。只写出一些单词，不知所云。一、字

2、数达标，卷面整洁。二、把握英语造句的特点：1、“先主谓，后时地”。今天下午我们要在操场举行篮球比赛。2、“无动不成句”。He very happy.My father at home.She twelve years old.三、以简单句为主。长句短句交叉使用最好。尽量不重复句型。We will have a basketball game on the playground this afternoon.写好篇章结构Middle正文Ending结尾concluding sentence 结论句-对全文的总结和概括。supporting sentences支持句-用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展

3、叙述、讨论topic sentence 主题句-说出文中的要点、核心问题Beginning开头Beginning（开头）开头万能句型：1).plays an important part in the.2)As we know,.becomes more and more.3)Many people say that.But I dont think so.For example:As we all know,English becomes more and more popular/important.Many people say its difficult to learn Englis

4、h.But I dont think so.1.Learning English2.The InternetAs we all know,the Internet plays an important part in our lives.正文：巧用连接词（一）按事情发展的先后或时间顺序1）Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly 2）first,then/next,after that/next,finally表示并列not only.but also,both.and,on the other hand表示举例或补充1）for example 2）besides/whats more

5、/whats worse表示转折however,though,instead of表示原因 thanks to,because表示结果 as result(of),so，so.that,表目的 in order to,so that.For examplethe Internet is wonderful.We can Whats more,It can help us But each coin has two sides.If we spend too much time on it,we will Whats worse,Its harmful to So we should use t

6、he Internet properly.正文：句式富于变化（二）(good)(better)Its necessary for us to have a healthy habit.We should have a healthy habit.A She is very young.She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is so young that she cant carry the 加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is

7、a good way to learn English.As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.正文：加谚语(saying)（三）Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.3.Do as the Romans do.熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。4.The early bird catches the worm.2.Where there is a will,th

8、ere is a way.5.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。我们应尽所能保护环境拯救地球。We should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,stop using napkins,plant more trees and save water and energy.正文：加例子（四）加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干

9、家务活。I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes,tidying the room,sweeping the floor and so on.1.与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点,注意避免重复句式。2.结尾经典词组、句型：At last/Finally.最后In a word/In short,.总而言之Lets try our best to.If we can.,.will be.结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应For example:Keeping healthyHelping othersIn short,its imp

10、ortant to have good habits and keep healthy.I believe if we can help each other,our world will be more and more beautiful.书面表达一般步骤：审题目：切中题意。列提纲：要点，先后顺序，分层次。定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头和结尾。写全文：句型，结构词汇，关联词，表达，字数。改病句：认真检查，改正错误。卷面整洁：书写工整，卷面整洁。写作常见错误 1、时态的误用。2、词法错误。（名词单复数，不可数等）3、词性误用。（形容词，副词混用）4、一致性错误。（主语 谓语不一致）5、“

11、汉语式”英语。Ill give you some color see see.6、综合性错误。（拼写，标点，表达法等）写作常见错误 1、时态的误用。2、词法错误。（名词单复数，不可数等）3、词性误用。（形容词，副词混用）4、一致性错误。（主语 谓语不一致）5、“汉语式”英语。Ill give you some color see see.6、综合性错误。（拼写，标点，表达法等）1.I want to buy bike.2.My fathers body is strong.3.There are some boy on the playground.4.How to be a green pe

12、rson?Here are some advice.5.Miss Wang teaches good.6.We very love she.7.Its good for our healthy.8.We went to there by train.9.If.our world will be more and more better.火眼金睛a bikeboysiswellWe love her very much.healthbetter and better火眼金睛10.My classmates is friendly to me.11.He want to visit the Gre

13、at Wall.12.In the past,the children cant go to school.13.Stay up is bad for our health.14.When I was very small,I 15.I go to school time is 7:20.16.I have many hobbies.Such as swim,play basketball,listen to music and so on.arewantscouldntstayingyoungatswimming,playinglistening.为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护

14、能力，某校开展了以安全为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。一显身手How to keep safe?遇险报警上放学安全饮食安全其它实战演练同学们，从小到大你的父母老师一定一直教育你注意安全！安全使宝贵的生命不受到伤害，使生活充满欢乐。请根据提示写一篇题为“Always be careful的英语作文。80词左右Always be carefulat home,turn off,strangeron the road,ride,traffic rulesat school,dont run after,protect,do sportsHow to Keep Safe As

15、students,we should always keep safety in mind.But how can we keep safe?Here are some ways.First,we should be careful when we make friends,especially on line.Second,we ought to eat healthily and safely.Eating bad food will do harm to our health.Third,if we are in danger,we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.Last but not least,summer is coming,and we must remember its dangerous to swim in the river.In short,safety must come first!