2022版新教材高中英语 UNIT 3 FOOD AND CULTURE Part 4 Writing提升训练（含解析）新人教版选择性必修第二册.docx

1、Part 4Writing应用文写作写作题目假定你是李华,你的美国网友Jack来信说他的家人都很喜欢吃中餐,向你请教如何在中餐馆选择健康的中餐。请你用英语给他写一封回信,内容主要包括:1.份量(portion)适当,避免浪费;2.蔬菜为主,少油少盐;3.不加味精(MSG)。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jack,Im glad that your family like Chinese cuisine.Yours,Li Hua思路点拨主题饮食文化体裁应用文人称以第二、三人称为主时态一般现在时布局第一部分:对对方喜欢中餐

2、感到高兴;第二部分:建议对方选择适量的饭菜;第三部分:选择饭菜的种类及注意事项;第四部分:祝对方有个好胃口。遣词造句.用本单元所学单词或短语填空1. n.菜肴;烹饪 2. n.餐厅 3. n.卡路里(热量单位) 4. n.厨师 5. 减少 6. 停止食用;戒除答案1.cuisine2.canteen3.calorie4.chef5.cut down on6.cut out.本单元语块、语法运用1.完成句子(1)中餐是最受欢迎的饮食之一,但是可能油盐含量高。Chinese is one of the most popular diets, but it can oil and salt. (2)

3、主菜份量经常很大。are often quite large.(3)当你和家人在中餐厅吃饭的时候,你最好少点菜。Youfewer dishes when you have dinner with your family in Chinese . (4)你应该尽量避免(吃)诸如烤羊肉串和红烧肉那样的菜。Youthe dishes such as lamb kebabs and red braised pork belly.(5)那些菜含有很高的卡路里。The dishes have.答案(1)cuisine;be high in(2)Main dish portions(3)had better

4、 order;canteens(4)should try to avoid(5)high calories2.句式升级(6)用表示因果关系的连词合并句子(2)(3)(7)用合适的衔接词连接句子(1)(6)(8)用定语从句合并句子(4)(5)答案(6)Main dish portions are often quite large, so youd better order fewer dishes when you have dinner with your family in Chinese canteens.(7)Chinese cuisine is one of the most pop

5、ular diets, but it can be high in oil and salt. Whats more, main dish portions are often quite large, so youd better order fewer dishes when you have dinner with your family in Chinese canteens.(8)You should try to avoid the dishes which have high calories, such as lamb kebabs and red braised pork b

6、elly.连句成篇参考范文Dear Jack,Im glad that your family like Chinese cuisine.Chinese cuisine is one of the most popular diets, but it can be high in oil and salt. Whats more, main dish portions are often quite large, so youd better order fewer dishes when you have dinner with your family in Chinese canteens

7、. Then divide the dishes and eat up!Choose dishes with lots of vegetables. You should try to avoid the dishes which have high calories, such as lamb kebabs and red braised pork belly. Ask the chef to use less oil, cut down on salt and cut out MSG.Have a good appetite.Yours,Li Hua写作积累1.Proper diet, e

8、xercise, and no smokingthese will help prevent heart and lung disease.正确的饮食、锻炼、不吸烟这些将帮助(人们)预防心脏病和肺病。2.Having no breakfast will throw our digestive system into confusion.不吃早餐会让我们的消化系统陷入混乱状态。3.In order to save time, some people eat junk food and snacks as well as take-away food.为了节省时间,一些人吃垃圾食品和快餐以及外卖食

9、品。4.They dont attach importance to food quality, which may result in food poisoning.他们不注重食品质量,这可能导致食物中毒。5.A good cook relies on experience and skills when cooking.在烹饪时,一个好厨师靠的是经验和技巧。实战演练(2021四川宜宾四中高二上开学考试,)假如你是红星中学高二年级学生李华。你校正在举办倡导良好饮食习惯的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列提示写一篇英文发言稿。Bad eating habits ofsome studentsGood e

10、ating habitsMy opinionsnot have breakfastprefer snacksbe particular about foodhave various healthy dietstake meals at a regular time and eat a proper amount of food each time注意:1.发言稿必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥;2.发言稿开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;3.词数80左右。Dear friends,As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, its very

11、important for us to form healthy eating habits.Thats all. Thank you!概要写作写作题目阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Plant-Based DietWhat is a plant-based diet? Is it just a fashionable new term for a “vegan(严格素食主义者)”? While there is no specific definition, a plant-based way of eating focuses on consuming plant-so

12、urced wholefoods (全天然食物) that are least processed in their original form, for example whole grains, fruits, vegetables, nuts and seeds. These are full of vitamins, minerals, and provide an abundance of nutrients for your body. Following a plant-based lifestyle doesnt necessarily mean fully avoiding

13、animal products like a vegan. For plant-based eaters, animal proteins can happily fit in with the lifestyle, yet they play more of a supporting role. Overall, “plant-based” is more of a broad and flexible way of thinking about nutrition than a rigid diet. With a plant-based diet, the focus is on sim

14、ple, nutritious wholefoods.Why people start following a plant-based diet? One of the main reasons is the health benefits. Now, more so than ever, research is showing how eating more plants and less meat can positively affect health. Particularly, a plant-based lifestyle has been linked to heart heal

15、th. In a study of more than 10,000 adults published in the Journal of the American Heart Association, it was shown that those who followed a more plant-based diet had a 16 percent lower risk of having cardiovascular(心血管的) disease and a 32 percent lower risk of dying of cardiovascular disease.A plant

16、-based lifestyle can also help to promote weight loss and help to maintain your goal weight. Weight loss commonly occurs because the diet consists of foods that are full of fiber and have a high-water content, which easily make you feel full.Another major reason to jump at the plant-based eating tra

17、in is the external (外界的,外部的)benefits. Plant-based foods are loaded with vitamins, which help brighten your skin. One of the plant-based all-star vitamins is vitamin C, which is a powerful antioxidant(抗氧化物质). A large number of fruits and vegetables contain vitamin C.Furthermore, these vitamins assist

18、 in smoothing lines, and reducing wrinkles.文本分析(1)语篇解读通过阅读所给文章可知,本文是一篇说明文,主题语境为人与自我,主题语境内容为健康的生活方式。文章主要介绍了什么是plant-based diet,并解释了人们选择这种饮食的原因:一是它有益于健康;二是有助于减重和维持体重;三是使皮肤有光泽和抗衰老。(2)段落主题本文是典型的总分结构,即提出问题,然后分析原因。全文共分四段,每段主旨如下:第一段: A plant-based diet focuses on plant-sourced wholefoods that have a lot of

19、 nutrients. And animal proteins can serve as complements.第二段: One of the main reasons why people start following a plant-based diet is the health benefits, especially lowering the risk of having and dying of cardiovascular disease.第三段:A plant-based diet can also help to promote weight loss and maint

20、ain your goal weight, because the foods are full of fiber and water,which easily make you feel full.第四段:Plant-based foods are loaded with vitamins, which help brighten your skin. They also assist in smoothing lines, and reducing wrinkles.筛选、整合信息、转换表达要点1第一段主题句可概括为要点1,该要点中含有两部分信息,A plant-based diet fo

21、cuses on plant-sourced wholefoods that have a lot of nutrients.是第一部分信息。其中focuses on可同义转换为;定语从句that have a lot of nutrients可以转换为形容词放在plant-sourced的前面作定语。And animal proteins can serve as complements.是第二部分信息,第二部分信息可以与第一部分信息合为一句话,用with的复合结构进行改写,可改写为。要点2第二段主题句可概括为要点2,由research is showing可知这里可以用research h

22、as shown表达。the health benefits、lowering可以分别同义转换为、。要点3第三段主题句可概括为要点3,该要点介绍植物性饮食的第二个好处,和要点2之间是并列关系,可用副词besides衔接。A plant-based diet can also help to promote weight loss and maintain your goal weight, because the foods are full of fiber and water,which easily make you feel full.是一个主从复合句,该句可以转换为一个含有现在分词短

23、语作状语的简单句。because the foods are full of fiber and water,which easily make you feel full可以转换为abundant fiber and water form the feeling of being full,前面的部分可以转换为现在分词作结果状语。要点4第四段主题句可以概括为要点4,该要点和要点2、3之间是并列关系,为避免重复,用moreover来表示并列和意义上的递进。要点4提到植物性饮食含有维生素,它们可以淡化细纹、减少皱纹、使皮肤变得光泽。所以第4段主题句可以合并为一句,即。答案要点1centers o

24、n;nutritious;with animal proteins serving as complements要点2good for health;reducing要点3helping to promote weight loss and maintain your goal weight要点4Vitamins in plant-based foods assist in smoothing lines, reducing wrinkles and brightening your skin.连句成篇参考范文A plant-based diet centers on nutritious p

25、lant-sourced wholefoods, with animal proteins serving as complements.(要点1) Research has shown a plant-based diet is good for health, especially reducing the risk of having and dying of cardiovascular disease.(要点2) Besides, abundant fiber and water form the feeling of being full, helping to promote w

26、eight loss and maintain your goal weight.(要点3) Moreover, vitamins in plant-based foods assist in smoothing lines, reducing wrinkles and brightening your skin.(要点4)写作积累概要写作中常用的词类转换:名词:peopleindividual;careerprofession;approachmethod;argumentdebate;quarrelfight;motherlandhometown;environmentsurroundin

27、gs;behaviouraction;awardreward;benefitprofit;aidhelp;presentgift;exampleinstance;reasonexcuse;climateweather;contestcompetition;matchrace;consequenceresult;dietfood;directionsinstructions;energystrength;forcepower;eventaffair;affairbusiness;faultmistake;faulterror;glimpseglance;labourwork;jobtask;op

28、inionidea;thoughtmind;patterndesign;stylemodel;practiceexercise;purposeaim;goaltarget;scenescenery;sightview;shadeshadow;skillability;symbolmark;tripjourney;wagesalary;payincome 动词:promoteimprove;endfinish;achieveaccomplish;obtainacquiregetgain;producecreate;affectinfluenceimpact;favourbenefitprofit

29、;endangerthreaten;destroydamage;altertransformchange;enhancestrengthen;emphasizestress;mendrepair;aidhelp;separatedivide;encourageinspire;purchasebuy;understandfollow;ignoreoverlookneglect;solvesettle;bookreserve;tryattempt;buildconstruct;reducedecrease;allowpermit形容词:elegantdelicate;glorioussplendi

30、d;famouscelebrated;mass-iveenormous;fundamentalessential;importantsignificant;adequateabundantenough;uniquespecial;identicalsame;valideffective;boringdull答案全解全析Part 4Writing实战演练应用文写作One possible version:Dear friends,As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, its very important for us to form hea

31、lthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some dont have breakfast. Some prefer snacks. Some are particular about food and some eat or drink too much. To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as staple food. Besides, wed better take meals at a regular time and eat a proper amount of food each time.In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.Thats all. Thank you!