2022版高中英语 Unit 1 Cultural relics 单元达标检测（含解析）新人教版必修2.docx

1、Unit 1 Cultural relics单元达标检测(满分:120分;时间:100分钟)第一部分阅读理解(共两节,满分35分)第一节(共10小题;每小题2.5分,满分25分)阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中,选出最佳选项。AIf youd like to go sightseeing, the following World Heritage Sites(世界遗产保护区)may be your best choices.Jiuzhaigou Valley Scenic and Historic Interest AreaThe Jiuzhaigou Valley, whi

2、ch lies in the northern part of Sichuan Province, reaches a height of more than 4,800 meters, with a series of different forest ecosystems (生态系统). There you can enjoy watching excellent waterfalls. Some 140 kinds of birds also live in the valley, as well as a number of endangered plants and animals,

3、 the giant pandas included.Khami Ruins National MonumentThe city of Khami, which developed after the capital of Great Zimbabwe had been given up in the mid-16th century, is of great archaeological(考古的) interest. The discovery of objects from Europe and China shows that Khami was a major centre for t

4、rade over a long period of time.Henderson IslandHenderson Island, which lies in the eastern South Pacific, is one of the few atolls (环礁) in the world whose ecology has not been touched by human beings. It is especially famous for the ten plants and four land birds that can only be seen on the island

5、.The Old City of JerusalemAs a holy city for three different religions in the Middle East, Jerusalem has always been of great religious (宗教的) importance. It was given a World Heritage Status in 1981 and placed on the “List of World Heritage in Danger” the following year.1.What can we know about the

6、Jiuzhaigou Valley?A.It has different forest ecosystems.B.It sits at the foot of a 4,800-meter high mountain.C.In all about 140 kinds of birds and other animals live there.D.Most of Chinas endangered plants can be found there.2.The discovery of some of the objects in Khami shows that the city .A.had

7、a very short historyB.was ruined in the mid-16th centuryC.was once Great Zimbabwes largest cityD.once played a great role as a trade centre3.What can be learned about Henderson Island from the passage?A.It hasnt been greatly influenced by human activities.B.It isnt suitable for humans to live on.C.I

8、t has been open to visitors for years.D.It is made up of a few large atolls.BPlays are an important part of British culture. The West End theatre district in London is the best place to watch a professional play, but acting also takes place in every school and village hall across the country.There a

9、re over 2,500 non-professional drama groups in the UK today and they are an active part of community life. People from all walks of life take on acting roles in addition to their regular jobs. They do it for fun, for the love of acting and as a way to meet new people.Not everyone in a drama club is

10、a skilled actor, but enthusiasm(热情)is considered to be more important than talent. Friends, family members and neighbours enjoy getting together to watch the final performance and telling the people they know to “break a leg(走运)”. Its a great way of bringing communities together. Also, in many rural

11、 parts of Britain, non-professional theatre is the only chance people have to see plays for miles around.Many people get a taste for acting at school. Every school puts on a play at least once per year, usually at Christmas, and parents love coming to watch their children perform. Ask any British pe

12、rson and theyre sure to have happy memories of being in their schools Christmas play, whether they played the role of Mary or Joseph or perhaps even a sheep or a donkey.Another Christmas theatre tradition is the pantomime(童话剧). Pantomimes are a type of musical comedy for families. The audience is en

13、couraged to participate in the performancesinging along with the music and shouting to the actors. Pantomimes are really fun to watch, especially for children.British people love going to the theatre, professional or not, and many of them also enjoy performing. If you have the chance, go and see a p

14、lay in the UK.4.What matters most for an actor in a drama club, according to the article?A.Talent.B.Enthusiasm.C.Professional training.D.Support from family.5.According to the article, what is special about pantomimes?A.All the performers are professional child actors.B.The audience is allowed to pl

15、ay some small roles in them.C.The audience is encouraged to interact with the actors.D.The musical comedy is always about family life.6.What is the article mainly about?A.Reasons why British people love plays.B.The origin of theatre traditions in the UK.C.Rules for theatergoers to follow in the UK.D

16、.The popularity of non-professional plays in the UK.CTo remind people of those Chinese poems and to promote cultural heritage, China Central Television (CCTV) has produced a TV showChinese Poetry Competition. The final of the hit shows second season was shown on Feb. 7.Wu Yishu, 16, who studies at t

17、he High School Affiliated to Fudan University in Shanghai, came out on top. “I really admire her knowledge of poems,” said Huang Zijin, 16, a senior 2 student from Ningbo High School in Zhejiang Province. “The first time I saw her wearing traditional Han clothing on TV, I was very impressed by her c

18、lassical looks. She fulfills all my fantasies for classic Chinese womens talents. Whats more, she always appears especially calm throughout the show, which is very unusual for her age.”“Learning poems isnt about winning or losing. The power of poetry lies in shaping ones view of life and developing

19、ones inner world,” said Li Bo, an expert at the Chinese Poetry Competitions second season.When it comes to teaching people about poetry, Li Dingguang, the shows academic advisor, suggested that teachers should explain more about the beauty of the poetry from both the aesthetic (审美的)and emotional sid

20、es, and guide the student to lose themselves in the poems rhythmic and rhyming lines.“Although the proportion(比例) of ancient Chinese poems in the textbooks of primary and secondary schools has increased, many students still learn them for exams,” Li Dingguang told C.“Therefore, its important to help

21、 students truly appreciate the artistry and fun of poetry.”7.China Central Television (CCTV) hosts Chinese Poetry Competition aiming at .A.enriching Chinese history and literature B.learning poems from ancient peopleC.giving people a chance to compete D.spreading traditional Chinese culture8.Accordi

22、ng to Li Bo, why do people learn poetry?A.To get good marks in examinations.B.To help build up their inner world.C.To win in Chinese Poetry Competition.D.To appreciate the beauty of rhythm and rhyme.9.What is Li Dingguangs attitude to poetry teaching?A.Doubtful.B.Supportive.C.Critical.D.Causal.10.Wh

23、at can be inferred from the last paragraph?A.Few Chinese learn poems just for exams. B.Most Chinese learn poems just for exams. C.Poems are now learned by more and more Chinese. D.Not all the students are truly appreciating and learning poems. 第二节(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项

24、为多余选项。Showing other people respect is an important part of keeping important personal relationships. Learning to respect peoples efforts, abilities and opinions will help keep you happy and successful in your life.Be a good listener. Practice active listening to show people that you have respect for

25、 their opinions. Watch and be quiet when someone else is talking and spend time thinking actively about what theyre saying. 11 Even if you disagree, try to consider the point of view and empathize with it before responding.Ask lots of questions. To show respect for other peoples opinions, question t

26、hem. Ask open-ended, leading questions that show youre listening closely. 12 Instead, it means youre interested in the topic.Learn about the viewpoints of others. Learning to empathize with other people who have different experiences will help you learn to show respect. 13 Its important to appreciat

27、e other peoples opinions and respond properly.14 Sometimes it shows respect to speak up and voice your opinion, as a way of respecting the intelligence of others. On the other hand, sometimes its better to hold back on your opinions and avoid unnecessary arguments(争论). Respectfully disagree. When yo

28、u have to disagree, do it calmly and smartly. Respect the opinions of other persons. Dont look down on other peoples ideas, even if you disagree with them. Try to admit common ground before adding your disagreement. 15A.Speak for yourself.B.Make wise decisions.C.Disagreements arent necessarily a bad

29、 thing.D.Questioning doesnt mean that you dont believe them.E.Praise others and then move to your addition to the conversation.F.Too often, we wait to talk instead of really listening to other peoples ideas.G.Be proud of your own opinions, but dont think everyone feels the same way.11.12.13.14.15.第二

30、部分语言运用(共两节,满分45分)第一节(共20小题;每小题1.5分,满分30分)阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。The sound that woke Damian Languell at 8:15 in the morning was so loud that he 16 it came from inside his house in Wade,Maine.As he got up to investigate, he heard 17 sound, this one coming most definitely from 18.

31、Looking out of his bedroom window, he noticed a tree 19 in smoke about 500 yards away. A car wrapped around the trees 20, its engine on fire.Grabbing buckets of water, he and his wife ran to the crash(撞车) 21. Up close, the accident looked 22. The car was split 23 in two, and the tree was where the d

32、rivers seat ought to have been, as if 24 there. No one should have survived this crash,and yet there was 20-year-old Quintin Thompson, whose 25 face was pressed 26 the drivers side window,invisible pain.Languell tried putting out the fire with the 27 but failed. When the flames got into the 28 seats

33、, he knew he had to get the young man out. 29 Languell opened the cars back door and 30 in. Using a pocket knife hed brought with him, he 31 Thompsons seat belt. Now that Thompson was free, Languell pulled him out, and dragged him to safety 32 the entire car was in flames.It is empathy(同情心)that 33 L

34、anguell to help,just as he said, “My heart goes out to Thompson. When you are that 34 to that level of hurt, you feel it so directly.” For his heroic 35,Languell was added to the list of real-life heroes changing the world.16.A.foundB.reportedC.thoughtD.said17.A.nextB.anotherC.secondD.other18.A.insi

35、deB.forwardC.distanceD.outside19.A.trappedB.huggedC.envelopedD.burned20.A.baseB.trunkC.branchD.root21.A.treeB.fireC.pointD.site22.A.worseB.badC.goodD.better23.A.nearlyB.mostlyC.completelyD.partly24.A.crashingB.grewC.plantedD.burning25.A.excitedB.terrifiedC.calmD.ordinary26.A.byB.againstC.offD.above2

36、7.A.extinguisherB.clothesC.waterD.buckets28.A.driverB.frontC.backD.both29.A.ThusB.ButC.SoD.Yet30.A.rushedB.walkedC.ranD.climbed31.A.break throughB.go throughC.think throughD.cut through32.A.beforeB.thenC.afterD.till33.A.pulledB.droveC.madeD.forced34.A.kindB.braveC.dangerousD.close35.A.actionB.behavi

37、orC.operationD.movement第二节(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。An artist who had painted many pictures of great beauty found that he had not yet painted one “real” picture.As less people choose to make sugar painting, the traditional Chinese folk craft might have become a 36 (dis

38、tance) memory in some ways. However, a 38-year-old craftsman, Li Jianzhong, is devoted to keeping the art of sugar painting alive.Li worked as a miner for more than ten years. After 37 mine closed down, Li turned 38 housing decoration, until he 39 (force) to give that up due to a finger injury. Earl

39、ier this year, he discovered sugar painting, something he really had interest in.Since there was no sugar painting craftsman in his village, he studied by 40(he) through large quantities of videos and information on the Internet. Li loved painting when he was young, and he found it easy 41(learn) th

40、e skill in sugar painting. He soon mastered the skill and could make all 42(kind) of sugar painting. Sugar painting is made with 43(melt) brown or white sugar. Craftsmen 44 (normal) paint animals and flowers on a stone board with the syrup (糖浆). 45 the sugar cools down, what appears is a piece of su

41、gar art.36. 37. 38. 39. 40.41. 42. 43. 44. 45.第三部分写作(共两节,满分40分)第一节应用文写作(满分15分)今天,你校举办了古典诗歌朗诵比赛。请为校英文报写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:1.选手情况;2.比赛简介;3.个人感受。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.短文题目已为你写好,不计入总词数。Classical Poetry Reciting Contest第二节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。On a cold windy day, a poor

42、boy tried to pay his way through school by selling goods door to door. Wandering on the street, he was not a successful seller. Whats worse, he found that he only had one dime(十分硬币)left. His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadnt eaten anything. He had no choice but to beg for

43、a meal at the next house. Hesitantly he knocked at the door, thinking about what to say when it opened. However, he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. “What can I do for you?” asked the young woman. The boy paused for a while. “Would you please give me some.a drink of water?”

44、the boy dared not look directly into her eyes. She looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give himself energy so she brought him a glass of milk. His head rising and small hands taking the cup, he drank it up slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you?” “You dont owe me an

45、ything,” she replied with a warm smile on her face. “My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” Deeply moved, he said sincerely, “Then I shall thank you from the bottom of my heart.” As Howard Kelly left that house, he felt stronger physically. It also increased his faith in God an

46、d the whole human race. As a matter of fact, he was about to give up and quit before that point. Years later the young woman became critically ill. However, the local doctors were unable to give her the effective medical treatment. Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city, where specialis

47、ts could be called in to cure her rare disease. Among those famous specialists, Dr. Howard Kelly was called in for consultation. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes. Immediately, he rose and went down through the hospital hall into her room.注意:续写词数应为150左

48、右。Paragraph 1:Dressed in his doctors gown, he went in to see her.Paragraph 2:The bill was sent to her room.附加题短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11

49、处起)不计分。I am interested at swimming very much. At the first, I went swimming just to keep health. Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics. Though practicing in the pool is very bored, I still work very hard in order to realize my dream. Because my hard work, I have already come first

50、in much important competitions. In the competitions, Ive made lot of friends and were very close. Its much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.答案全解全析单元达标检测1.A2.D3.A4.B5.C6.D7.D8.B9.C10.D11.F12.D13

51、.G14.B15.E16.C17.B18.D19.C20.A21.D22.A23.A24.C25.B26.B27.C28.B29.C30.D31.D32.A33.B34.D35.A第一部分阅读理解第一节A语篇解读本文是一篇应用文,介绍了四个著名的历史遗址。1.A细节理解题。 根据第二段第一句中的with a series of different forest ecosystems(生态系统)可知,九寨沟有不同的森林生态系统。2.D细节理解题。 根据第三段第二句The discovery of objects from Europe and China shows that Khami was

52、 a major centre for trade over a long period of time.可知,Khami在过去很长一段时间里是东西方贸易交流的中心。3.A推理判断题。 根据第四段第一句Henderson Island, which lies in the eastern South Pacific, is one of the few atolls(环礁)in the world whose ecology has not been touched by human beings.可知,Henderson Island 还没有被人类文明影响。B语篇解读戏剧是英国文化的一个重要

53、组成部分。本文讲述了在英国,非专业的戏剧表演深受人们的欢迎。4.B细节理解题。根据第三段首句Not everyone in a drama club is a skilled actor, but enthusiasm(热情)is considered to be more important than talent.可知,热情对于戏剧俱乐部的演员来说最重要。故选B。5.C细节理解题。根据第五段第二、三句Pantomimes are a type of musical comedy for families. The audience is encouraged to participate

54、in the performancesinging along with the music and shouting to the actors.可知,童话剧的特殊之处在于观众可以和演员互动。故选C。6.D主旨大意题。根据第一段以及全文其他内容可知,在英国,非专业的戏剧表演深受人们的欢迎。故选D。C语篇解读为了让人们更多地了解中国古诗词这一文化遗产,中央电视台创办了中国诗词大会这一栏目。本文介绍了中国诗词大会的影响,并从不同的人的角度介绍了古诗的作用及该如何学习和对待古诗。7.D细节理解题。根据第一段中的To remind people of those Chinese poems and

55、to promote cultural heritage可知,中央电视台创办这个节目是为了宣传中国古诗词和文化遗产。8.B细节理解题。根据第三段中的The power of poetry lies in shaping ones view of life and developing ones inner world可知,诗歌的魅力在于能够塑造人的人生观和发展人的内心世界,这也是人们学习古诗词的原因。9.C推理判断题。根据第四段和第五段内容可知,李定广批判了中国古诗词教学的不足以及中小学生学习古诗词的功利性。据此可知,李定广的态度是批判性的。10.D推理判断题。根据第五段中的many stud

56、ents still learn them for exams可知,很多学生学习古诗词是为了应付考试。据此可以推知并非所有的学生都真正地欣赏和学习古诗词。第二节语篇解读本文是一篇说明文。尊敬他人对于维持人际关系来说是非常重要的。本文从五个方面介绍了如何对他人表示尊敬。11.F利用主题句法可解此题。本段的主题句Be a good listener.与F选项中的wait to talk instead of really listening相呼应。12.D利用主题句法可解此题。本段的主题句Ask lots of questions.与D选项中的Questioning相呼应。13.G利用上下文的衔接

57、可解此题。下文中的appreciate other peoples opinions与G选项中的dont think everyone feels the same way相呼应。14.B利用设题位置法可解此题。本空在段首,应该是本段的主题句,本文主题句的共同特点是祈使句,且句子较短。又根据下文to speak up and voice your opinion和 hold back on your opinions是两种不同的做法可知答案为B。15.E利用同义转述法可解此题。上文中的Dont look down on other peoples ideas.admit common grou

58、nd与E选项中的Praise others都是在阐述与他人有不同意见前的铺垫,都是首先肯定对方。故答案为E。第二部分语言运用第一节语篇解读本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了Damian Languell勇敢地救出了一起车祸中的幸存者Quintin Thompson的故事。因为他的英勇行为,他被列入了现实生活中改变世界的英雄名单。16.C清晨8点15分,Damian Languell被巨大的声音吵醒,他以为声音来自自己位于缅因州韦德镇的家中。 find发现; report报告; think想,认为;say说。故选C。17.B当他起身去查看的时候,他听到了另一个声音,这个声音肯定是从外面传来的。 nex

59、t下一个; another另外的; second第二的; other其他的。故选B。18.D当他起身去查看的时候,他听到了另一个声音,这个声音肯定是从外面传来的。 inside内部; forward向前; distance远处; outside 外部。故选D。19.C从卧室的窗户向外望去,他注意到大约500码外有一棵树被烟雾笼罩。 trap陷入; hug拥抱; envelop包围; burn烧着。故选C。20.A一辆汽车撞上了树的底部,发动机着火了。base底部; trunk树干; branch树枝; root根。故选A。21.D他和妻子抓起几桶水,跑到车祸现场。 tree树; fire火;

60、point点; site地点。故选D。22.A近看,事故看起来更糟了。 worse更糟的; bad坏的; good好的; better更好的。根据“No one should have survived this crash”可知,事故情况很糟糕。故选A。23.A汽车几乎裂成两半,而那棵树就在驾驶员的座位上,就像栽在那里一样。 nearly几乎; mostly主要地; completely完全地; partly部分地。故选A。24.C汽车几乎裂成两半,而那棵树就在驾驶员的座位上,就像栽在那里一样。 crash摧毁; grow成长; plant种植; burn燃烧。故选C。25.B本没有人会在这

61、次车祸中幸存下来,然而20岁的Quintin Thompson却活了下来,他惊恐地把脸贴在驾驶座的侧窗上,疼痛难忍。excited激动的;terrified恐惧的;calm镇静的;ordinary普通的。故选B。26.B20岁的Quintin Thompson惊恐地把脸贴在驾驶座的侧窗上,疼痛难忍。 by通过; against紧靠; off离开; above超过。故选B。27.CLanguell试着用水灭火,但失败了。extinguisher灭火器; clothes衣服; water水; bucket水桶。根据上文“Grabbing buckets of water, he and his w

62、ife ran to the crash”可知,Languell用水灭火。故选C。28.B当火焰进入前排座位时,他知道他必须把那个年轻人救出来。 driver司机; front前部; back后部; both两者。故选B。29.C于是,Languell打开汽车后门,爬了进去。thus因此; but但是;so因此; yet然而。故选C。30.DLanguell从汽车后门爬到驾驶室去救Quintin Thompson。 rush冲; walk行走; run跑; climb爬。故选D。31.D根据“Using a pocket knife hed brought with him”可知,Langue

63、ll用随身携带的小折叠刀割断了Thompson的安全带。break through突破; go through经历; think through充分考虑; cut through割断。故选D。32.A根据“Languell pulled him out, and dragged him to safety”可知,Languell是在大火吞没汽车之前救出了Thompson。 before之前; then然后; after之后; till直到。故选A。33.B正是同情心驱使着Languell伸出援手。pull拉; drive驱使; make使得; force强迫。故选B。34.D你离那种程度的伤害

64、如此近时,你会如此直接地感觉到它。 kind善良的; brave勇敢的; dangerous危险的; close靠近的。故选D。35.A因为他的英勇行为,Languell被列入了现实生活中改变世界的英雄名单。 action行为; behavior举止; operation操作; movement活动。故选A。【高频词汇】1.investigate v.调查2.definitely adv.确定地3.grab vt.抓住4.split v.分开5. invisible adj.看不见的6.flame n.火焰长难句分析原句Now that Thompson was free, Languell

65、pulled him out, and dragged him to safety before the entire car was in flames.分析本句是一个主从复合句。Now that引导的是原因状语从句。before引导的是时间状语从句。句意既然Thompson摆脱束缚了,Languell就把他拉出来,在整辆车着火之前把他拖到安全的地方。第二节语篇解读本文是一篇记叙文,介绍了中国民俗艺人李建忠传承中国传统文化“糖画”的曲折故事。36.distant考查词性转换。设空处作定语修饰名词memory,应使用形容词形式。故答案为distant。37.the考查冠词。空前无限定词,此处指

66、李工作的矿井,表特指,故答案为定冠词the。38.to考查介词。 本空没有提示词,考虑是动词turn的固定搭配,又因宾语是名词,所以本空应用介词。turn to意为“转向”。39.was forced考查时态、语态和主谓一致。he与动词force之间是被动关系,故用被动语态。本段描述民俗艺人李建忠的过去,故用一般过去时,又因为主语为he,所以填was forced。40.himself考查代词。此处是介词by的宾语,又因主语与宾语是同一人,故用反身代词,study by oneself意为“自学”。41.to learn考查动词不定式。前面的代词it是形式宾语,此处应用不定式作真正的宾语,故答

67、案为to learn。42.kinds 考查固定短语。all kinds of是固定短语,意为“各种各样的”。43.melted考查过去分词。本空作定语修饰名词sugar,此处意为“融化了的”,表示已经发生的动作,故用过去分词作定语。44.normally考查副词。本空作状语修饰谓语动词paint,应用副词,故答案为normally。45.When/After考查连词。分析句子可知下文the sugar cools down描述的是糖画成型的时间,设空处引导时间状语从句,结合句意可知应填When或After。第三部分写作第一节应用文写作One possible version:Classica

68、l Poetry Reciting ContestToday, our school held a classical poetry reciting contest. Each class recommended three contestants, who were the pre-selected winners of each class.On the stage, the contestants recited famous classical poetry, including poems written by famous poets Du Fu, Li Bai, Li Qing

69、zhao and so on. The competitors were in high spirits and the atmosphere was warm.Not only has this activity greatly promoted our traditional culture, but it has also inspired students interest in classical poetry. The competition was warmly welcomed by teachers and students, who said that they had r

70、eceived great artistic enjoyment.第二节读后续写写作指导故事要素Timeon a cold windy day, years laterPlaceon the street, a young womans house, a hospital in the big cityCharacterDr. Howard Kelly(the poor boy), the young woman (the patient)ReasonThe young woman had helped the poor boy before.情节BeginningA poor boy was

71、 so hungry that he had no choice but to beg for a meal. A young woman gave him a glass of milk. The poor boy was moved.DevelopingYears later, the young woman was critically ill and sent to the hospital where Dr. Howard Kelly worked.续写方向Para. 1Dressed in his doctors gown, he went in to see her.Dr. Ho

72、ward Kelly立刻认出了她;Dr. Howard Kelly决定尽最大努力挽救她的生命;年轻女士被治愈; Dr. Howard Kelly要求把账单给他并在账单上写了一些字。Para. 2The bill was sent to her room.年轻女士担心治疗疾病的费用;她打开账单后看到了上面Dr. Howard Kelly写的字,知道Dr. Howard Kelly替她付了治疗费,她感动地哭了。One possible version:Paragraph 1:Dressed in his doctors gown, he went in to see her. He saw her

73、 lying on the bed and recognized her at once. Her lovely face looked pale. He went back to the consultation room and determined to do his best to save her life. From that day on, he gave special attention to her case. Luckily, after a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr. Howard Kelly requested the

74、 business office to pass the final bill to him for approval. He looked at it and then wrote something on the side. Paragraph 2:The bill was sent to her room. Hesitantly she took it. She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off. Finally she open

75、ed it, on the side of which a note caught her attention. She read these words. “Paid in full with a glass of milk,” signed by Dr. Howard Kelly. Tears of joy flooded her eyes as she prayed silently, “Thank you, God.”附加题短文改错1.第一句:atin考查介词。be interested in是固定搭配,意为“对感兴趣”。2.第二句:去掉the考查固定搭配。句意:一开始,我游泳只是为了

76、保持健康。at first是固定短语,意为“最初,首先”。3.第二句:healthhealthy考查形容词。句中的keep是系动词,后跟形容词作表语。4.第三句:wasis考查时态。根据本句的时间状语Now可以判断,本句应该使用一般现在时。5.第四句:boredboring考查形容词。boring意为“令人厌烦的”,其主语往往是“事物”;而bored意为“感到厌烦的”,其主语往往是“人”。6.第五句:Because后加of考查介词。句意:因为我的努力,我已经在很多重要比赛中获得第一。because是连词,常引导原因状语从句。而because of是介词短语,后跟名词或者名词短语作状语。7.第五句:muchmany考查限定词。本句中的competitions是复数形式,在本句中也是复数意义,故用many。much只能修饰不可数名词。8.第六句:lot改为lots或在lot前加a考查固定短语。a lot of=lots of,意为“许多的”。9.第七句:whichwho考查定语从句。先行词friends指的是“人”,故用who;而which在定语从句中通常指代“事物”。10.第七句:youme考查人称代词。本文通篇介绍作者自己对游泳的喜爱以及在游泳项目中获得的成绩,本句也是描述作者自己的故事和经历,故应使用第一人称。