江苏省2022高考英语第三部分写作层级训练第二步通览全局写作分类突破第二讲如何写记叙文的主体讲解.docx

1、第二讲如何写记叙文的主体李仕才一、题型特点读写任务型作文的主体部分一般要求写120词左右，通常包括两部分：一是衔接过渡语；二是论证自己的观点或描述类似的事例。1.衔接过渡语：写完摘要后要用一句过渡性的语句引出自己的观点(赞成或反对)或类似的事例。2.论证观点或描述事例：对文中的观点进行对比论证，并提出自己的观点；描述事例时要紧扣文章主题，所描述的事例能够与文章观点契合。二、写作技巧出现在读写任务中的记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料有关联的事件，并说出自己从事件中得到的教训或对所描述现象发表自己的看法。1.写作步骤衔接过渡描述事件发表看法2.常用过渡语句(1)This reminds me o

2、f the similar experience.(2)This story brings me back to an event many years ago.(3)I had a similar experience.【典例示范】 请阅读下面的短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。(2022盐城高三二模)I was on my way to the Taiyetos Mountains.The sun was setting when my car broke down near a remote and poor village.Cursing my misfortune，I

3、was wondering where I was going to spend the night when I realized that the villagers who had gathered around me were arguing as to who should have the honor of receiving me as a guest in their house.Finally, I accepted the offer of an old woman who lived alone in a little house.While she was gettin

4、g me settled into a tiny but clean room, the head of the village was tying up his horse to my car to pull it to a small town some 20 kilometres away where there was a garage.I had noticed three hens running free in my hostesss courtyard and that night one of them ended up in a dish on my table.Some

5、villagers brought me goats cheese and honey.We drank together and talked merrily till far into the night.When the time came for me to say goodbye to my friends in the village, I wanted to reward the old woman for the trouble I had caused her.写作内容1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个词谈谈你的感受；可以是自己亲身的经历，也可以用他人的事例。写

6、作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文The story I read tells us that when the writers car broke down near a faraway village, he got help from all the villagers and felt grateful for how he had been treated.I was moved by the story.Nothing is more impressive and

7、unforgettable than being offered help or helping others in trouble. Since we are living under the same roof, theres no doubt that we need to care about other people and support each other, especially when time is hard.In these two years, there have been many disasters striking different parts of our

8、 country, causing thousands of people suffering pains of losing homes. I remembered when Yiliang Earthquake took place, many of us donated money for people there. A beggar without legs, who was just able to earn his bread by begging for money, donated all his savings to help Yiliang people. Hearing

9、the story and watching all about this on TV, we were moved to tears. Why not hold out your helping hand to those who are suffering?To give is to receive. What you give is the best gift for whoever are waiting for the help.能力提升练1请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。(2022江苏无锡高三质量检测)As a man was passing the el

10、ephants, he suddenly stopped, confused by the fact that these huge creatures were being held by only a small rope tied to their front legs. No chains, and no cages either. It was obvious that the elephants could, at any time, break away from their bonds but for some reason, they did not.He saw a tra

11、iner nearby and asked why these animals just stood there and made no attempt to get away. “Well，” the trainer said, “when they are very young and much smaller we use the rope of the same size to tie them and, at that age, its enough to hold them. As they grow up, they are conditioned to believe they

12、 cannot break away.”The man was amazed. These animals can break away from their bonds at any time, but because they believe they cant, they are stuck right where they are.写作内容1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120词谈谈你的看法，内容包括：(1)这个故事有什么寓意？(2)你如何解决这样的问题？写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规

13、范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文Some adult elephants, which could have easily broken away from the chains which confine them, chose to remain where they were. This is largely due to their conditioned thinking pattern, which were formed from their early age.The passage casts spotlight on the moral that once the fixe

14、d thinking pattern is deeply rooted in ones mind, it becomes extremely challenging for one to make any positive changes to the circumstances. Ridiculous as it may sound, it is not uncommon for us to see some vivid examples around. For instance, some of us invariably blame our failure in exams on our

15、 poor genes inherited from our parents, thus never adopting any effective approaches to polish up this subject.To eliminate this vicious thinking pattern, I should determinedly resort to my teachers or parents for help. I will talk my problems through and seek their suggestions. Once finding out the

16、 underlying reasons for my fixed thinking pattern, I will think out of the box and see things from a different angle.能力提升练2请阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 (2022江苏扬州中学高三检测)Middle and high school days are both fun and busy. Students spend their days in class, listening to the interesting and sometimes

17、boring words of the teacher. They spend the short breaks running, playing, and shouting happily before going back to the classroom again. But how should students spend their free time outside school? In Western countries, it is common for students to have a part-time job after school and at weekends

18、. Students can earn their own money and learn more about the “real world”. They enjoy the extra independence and money, and parents enjoy the quiet house. However, it seems that, in China, parents worry so much about their children studies that they would prefer to see their children spending most o

19、f their free time studying and preparing for all those exams. It is natural for parents to feel that way, but I believe the answer lies in balance. Sometimes, Western school children work long hours after school to make money, and so they become too tired to listen in class or have no time for homew

20、ork. But Chinese students spend so much time on their studies that all else becomes less important until they want that new MP4 player. So, find a good and healthy balance! If you have a part-time job, youll be happy, and your parents will also be happy because youre spending your hard-earned money

21、and not theirs! 写作内容1.概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右； 2.就“如何利用课余时间”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右：a.以自身为例，简述你平时是怎样打发课余时间的；b.你如何看待自己利用课余时间的方式； c.你的父母对你利用课余时间的态度及你的看法。 写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文There is a great difference between the way high school s

22、tudents spend their free time, and the writer hopes to find a balance between studying and having fun. What worries the writer is just what we students are confused about: can our “spare time” actually mean something “spare”？Take me for example. Every day I have just 1 hour in the afternoon to do so

23、me sports. At weekends, I usually have lots of homework assigned by teachers to finish. Even if I want to do something else, I will often be stopped by my parents. Like many other parents, they just want me to study all the time until I am admitted to a famous university. As a result, I cant control

24、 my “spare time” on my own! Looking around at my friends, I find Im not alone in such a situation. What a boring life for us students!I just dont agree with my parents about their way of controlling my spare time. Yes, for us students, studying is the most important thing to do. But we cant be separ

25、ated from the outside world. Studying all the time, Im afraid what we are learning cant match the real world. I dont want to depress my parents, of course; but I do think that we need to find a way to settle this problem.能力提升练3请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。(2022江苏姜堰中学高三模拟)Tchaikovsky, a famous Russia

26、n composer of the late-Romantic period, was born on 7 May 1840 in the mountains of western Russia. He was the first Russian composer whose music made a lasting impression internationally. Tchaikovskys training set him on a path to combine what he had learned with the native musical practices to whic

27、h he had been exposed from childhood. He first helped write a song in 1844, at an age when most children are still in kindergarten. At home, his mother sang folk songs, which helped develop his interest in music. Mozart was Tchaikovskys favourite composer and he influenced Tchaikovskys life and work

28、. For 11 years, beginning in 1866, Tchaikovsky taught at the Moscow School of Music. During his time there, he wrote music for the piano, along with ballets, operas and symphonies. He was famous for writing the music for the ballet Swan Lake in 1876. Because of his musical talent, Tchaikovsky toured

29、 many countries as a conductor, including a voyage to the USA in 1891. He continued to write for the ballet until his death in Saint Petersburg in 1893.写作内容1.用约30个单词概括故事的主要内容；2.用约120个单词谈谈自己读完故事后的想法。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文Tchaikovskys talent in mu

30、sic is just the first step to success. His mother, idol, hard work also play an important part in the process of his success. He is even committed to music until death.After reading through Tchaikovskys life story, we can learn upwards of two lessons as follows. First, one should set a big goal and

31、spare no effort in achieving it. Tchaikovskys life-long goal was to catch up with his idol Mozart, who influenced his life and work. Second, one should commit ones whole being to work. Tchaikovsky wrote music for ten years and finally created his masterpiece, Swan Lake. When it comes to commitment to work, I shall count it as a personal favour. I was once poor in math, but I swore to get it improved in my senior year, so I devoted myself to math in classroom, library and anywhere possible and made it eventually. 7