Unit 3 写作主题：观光旅行-2022-2023学年八年级英语上册单元话题写作（牛津译林版）.docx

1、Unit 3 A day out写作主题：观光旅行一、话题分析本单元的话题是“观光旅行”，要求学生能简单介绍观光旅行的好处或者细节。本单元写作要求同学们能根据相关信息提示简单地介绍观光旅行的好处或者细节。细节内容包括时间、地点、主要活动、交通方式等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点：1. 能用一般过去时描述旅行经历或者一般将来时介绍旅行安排；2. 能用as . as.和反身代词；3. 能正确使用标点符号；4. 能正确书写英语句子。二、写作步骤步骤一：确定介绍观光旅行的内容和顺序。步骤二：列举介绍观光旅行的句型，多多益善。步骤三：成段成篇，修改完善。三、 词汇积累1 take the unde

2、rground 乘地铁2 all over the world 全球3 not believe ones eyes 不相信某人自己的眼睛4 enjoy oneself 玩的愉快5 take a boat trip 坐船旅行6 have a great time 玩得愉快7 invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事8 a lot of traffic 交通繁忙9 arrive in/at 到达10 get off 下车11 in front of sb 在某人前面.四、句型积累1 Soon the whole world was there in front of us! 不久

3、整个世界出现在我的面前！2 There are models of more than a hundred places of interest from all over the world. 来自世界各地的100多个名胜古迹的模型。3 We are planning a day out on Saturday, 16 October. 我们计划在十月十六日，星期六外出一天。4 We hope you can join us. 我们希望你们能加入我们。5. 句型结构1) This is the plan for the day.2) We will meet at .3) We will t

4、ake the underground/bus to .4) It will take about . minutes/hour(s).5) We will walk to .6) We will see/visit .7) We will go back to . by underground/bus.8) The cost is about . per student.五、写作训练1如今人们热爱徒步旅行 (hiking) , 背上背包就可以开始一段旅程。请根据以下提示介绍徒步旅行的好处。提示:1）强身健体, 对身体有益。2）广交朋友, 相互学习。3）亲近自然, 对它更加了解。4）放松心情,

5、 快乐生活。要求:1）文中必须包含提示中的所有要点。2）不要逐句翻译, 可适当发挥。3）条理清晰, 书写规范, 词数不少于80, 开头已给出, 不计人总词数。4）文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。Nowadays, people love hiking very much. _2上个星期天，班级组织了一场户外活动，请你用英文写一篇80词左右的游记。内容要点:1）早上8点在校门口集合，下午2点返回；2）坐公交车前往凤凰山公园 (Phoenix Mountain Park);3）大家唱歌、跳舞、野餐、与老师合影；4）大家带齐了食物、饮料等，在公园吃了午饭；_3 根据下面所给的提纲用英语写出一篇

6、不少于80词的英文通知.明天（星期五）全班同学将去参观科学博物馆（the Science Museum）,由你（班长）通知全体同学.（通知的开头和结尾已给出）.具体内容如下：早上8点钟在校门口集合,步行前往；参观时要认真听,仔细看,并记下有趣的东西；不可在博物馆内大声喧哗及拍照；携带钢笔和笔记本；下星期一交一份有关参观的报告.要求：不要逐句翻译；词数80个左右._1 【参考范文】Nowadays, people love hiking very much. I think hiking is very important to us. Why do I think so? First, tha

7、ts because we are weaker and weaker under the pressure of work or study tasks. Hiking provides us with a chance to make our bodies strong and make us healthy. Second, when we are hiking, we can make more friends and learn from each other. Third, hiking can make us get close to nature and let us know

8、 more about it. Finally, it can also make us feel relaxed and live happily.So why dont we go hiking as much as possible when we are free?【范文点评】这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求根据所给提示介绍徒步旅行的好处。在解答写作这类试题时，要根据所给提示考虑如何开头、展开和结尾。开头要引出话题，正文着重介绍徒步旅行的好处，结尾号召大家徒步旅行。设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。通过分析可知，本文主要用一

9、般现在时，人称主要是第一人称复数。【点评】本文能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。本文运用的固定结构有love doing sth，喜欢做某事；provide sb with sth，提供；as much as possible，尽量多地。还运用了first，second，third及finally将整篇文章紧密连在了一起。语句First, thats because we are weaker and weaker under the pressure of work or study tasks. 及Th

10、ird, hiking can make us get close to nature and let us know more about it. 为本文增色不少。2 【参考范文】Our class had a day out last Sunday. We had a wonderful time together.We met at 8 oclock at the school gate and took the bus to the Phoenix Mountain Park. We sang and danced at first. Then we had a picnic for

11、lunch. Some students brought food and drinks. Some of us made salad and set the table. Some students made food by themselves. We had a nice lunch in the beautiful park. At last, we took photos with our teachers. We really enjoyed ourselves there.We had fun at the park, and we returned at 2 p.m. We w

12、ere tired but very happy.【范文点评】这是一篇提示性文章，要求用英语写一篇80词左右的游记，介绍上个星期天班级组织的户外活动 。这篇短文主要介绍集合的时间和地点，乘坐的交通工具以及具体的活动。写作内容可以适度拓展，介绍这次活动的收获和感受。写作时，时态要用一般过去时。【点评】写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，注意段落层次，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好动词的过去式，以及一些衔接词，如and，but ，while等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。3 【参考范文】Fellow students,Tomorrow 8:00 am, we will assemb

13、le at our school gate and then walk to the Science Museum. Please be punctual and bring along your pens and notebooks for copying interesting staff. Please be attentive and careful when you are visiting the museum at the same time keep the noise level in the museum down. You are also not allowed to

14、take photos. Be sure to finish your report about this visit and hand in next Monday. Thank you for your attention.【范文点评】这是一篇应用文写作，根据所给提纲写一份通知，动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。根据汉语提示，本文需要用一般将来时以及祈使句来组织文章。【点评】做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。