专题10 应用文写作（10）-研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考.docx

1、研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考Part1 应用文写作文（十）1（2014安徽卷）为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。注意：1词数120左右；2信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪Hi Worried，Im sorry to kno

2、w that youre having such a bad time at the moment._Yours,Jamie【答案】Hi Worried， Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you dont have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to con

3、trol your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips: First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physica

4、l exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger .And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours，Jamie【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲作文。【详解】内容是用英文写一封回信。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示：为了帮助

5、中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意写信格式。

6、【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: that引导的宾语从句Im sorry to know that youre having such a had time at the moment.定语从句sothat 引导的目的状语从句The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。2（2014重庆卷）青少年研究专家

7、Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏，邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为，礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力。假设你是李华，请用英文发帖，内容应包括：*赞同Susan的看法*你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么*该礼物的意义*期待大家回复注意：1. 词数不少于80； 2. 符合语言规范； 3. 在答题卡上作答； 4. 开头已给出（不计入总词数）。 I am a high school student from China. _.【答案】I am a high school student from China and I am quite for your opinion abo

8、ut best gifts: the value of gifts lies in its intension so we should devote more to them. The best gift Ive ever received is a book from my English teacher, Debbie, which she brought to me when she returned from her holiday in USA. The books name is Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul: The Real Deal:

9、Friends. I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way. And I must thank my favorite teacher for her care about me because she found me at loss dealing with friends at one time. Reading it, I have been inspired and balanced myself in life and study.I s

10、trongly recommend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply. Yours ever, Li Hua【详解】审题：该题也具有较大的开放度。但按要求一定要写出Susan的看法，而这个看法就在试题的写作说明里：礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力。而选择什么样的角度来写一定要根据自己的生活和切身感受，且要量力而行。写作技巧：一般情况下应分三段来完成改写任务：1阐释Susan的观点并表示认同。2收到或送出的礼物的具体描写及其意义。该部分是本写作任务的重点，应多费笔墨完成。3表期待应另外起段完成，以便阅卷老师

11、发现和评判内容要点。遣词造句尽量使用自己熟悉的词句。优秀学生一定要在保持正确的前提下尽量使用较为复杂的句型，如状语从句，定语从句，倒装句和适量的非谓语动词。特别强调：一定要注意卷面整洁并避免拼写错误。3（2014浙江卷） 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100120词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。Dear Mr. Wang, _Yours sincerely

12、 Li Yue【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and

13、 arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books. Classic literary works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. Th

14、ey not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生就学校图书馆需要购置的新书提供建议。【详解】1.词汇积累购买：buypurchase建议：suggestionadvice有趣的：interestingamusing推荐：recommendpropose2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Usually p

15、opular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way.拓展句：It is in a simple and interesting way that popular science books explain basic principles of nature .【点睛】高分句型1Knowing that our library is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions.(由that引导的宾语从句)高分句

16、型2What we need most are popular science books.(由what引导的主语从句)4.（2014北京卷）你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。注意： 1.词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Chris,_Yours,Joe【答案】Dear Chris, How is everything going? Do you remember our plan? We planne

17、d to visit Yunnan in July. But now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. Im sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Joe 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：

18、你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。【详解】1.词汇积累游览：visittravel around因为：becausesince受伤了：be injuredget injured 建议：suggestadvise2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Do you remember our plan? We planned to visit Yunnan in July.拓展句：Do you remember our plan that we will visit Yunnan in July?【点睛】高分句型1 But now beca

19、use my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句) 高分句型2 Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? (运用了that引导的宾语从句)5（2014全国I卷）假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）注意：1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。参考词汇：住宿accommodation_【答案】Dear Sir/Ma

20、dam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Ive seen your ad, and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would n

21、ot be too many students in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。一则广告引起了你的注

22、意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。【详解】1.词汇积累计划：planmap out此外：besideswhats more为付款：payforspendon回复：replyresponse2.句式拓展并列句变主从复合句原句：I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.拓展句：I am a student in China, who plans to go to Britain to attend a summer school during

23、the vacation.【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class.（运用了虚拟语气）【高分句型2】Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.（运用了how much和whether引导的宾语从句）6（2014全国II卷）一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1.家庭：2工作：3.业余生活。注意

24、：1.词数100左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3.开头语已为你写好。I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. _【答案】I often imagine what my life would be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lo

25、vely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. Ill do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I w

26、ill travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.【导语】本篇书面表达属于半开放性作文。要求考生以“十年后的我”为题，写一篇征文。【详解】本文的话题是“十年后的我”，要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活来想象十年以后的自己。文章应该使用一般将来时和第一人称。因为提示信息较少，所以要充分发挥想象，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，充实内容。比如可以联想到的内容有健身，度假，聚会等等。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词，插入语以使文章层次分明，使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次，如定

27、语从句，宾语从句和状语从句等。此外，因为是畅想未来，所以要用一般将来时。【点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，要点全面，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对未来的畅想，然后从生活，工作，家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了较多的高级语法表达，如I hope Ill work in a computer company as a program designer.（省略that的宾语从句）Ill do a good job

28、in whatever I do.（whatever引导的宾语从句）In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.（比较级+and+比较级连用）等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。7（2014天津卷）假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津， 得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示， 给他写封邮件：(1) 表示欢迎 (2) 介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如天气， 饮食等）(3) 介绍本班情况 (4) 希望Chris做哪些事情， 以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊注意：(1) 请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息

29、。 (2) 可适当加入细节， 使内容充实，行文连贯。词数不少于100； 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。(1) 参考词汇： 交换生 exchange studentDear Chris, Im Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven._【答案】Dear Chris，Im Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. Welcome to our class in China. Im glad you can join our class, which is a wonderful group. Every st

30、udent not only enjoys studying, but is ready to help each other. So if you join us, Im sure you can get along well with them and quickly make friends with them, too. The climate here is changeable. Now, it is very cool in autumn and cold in winter, so dont forget to bring different kinds of clothes

31、with you. In your spare time, you can visit some famous places of interest in our city, as well as tasting all kinds of delicious traditional Chinese local foods. We Chinese use chopsticks to have Chinese food instead of forks and knives. And I can be your tour guide if you like. As an American, the

32、re is no doubt that you are familiar with your country. So if it is convenient to you, please bring a map of America and some photos of your families，friends, and some famous buildings with you, and give us some speeches to introduce your school life and different culture of America. And well exchan

33、ge our different lives and cultures together then.looking forward to your coming!YoursLi Jin【导语】本文是一封书信。假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津， 得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。请根据提示， 给他写封邮件。【详解】本文要求写一封Email。本文包括了四个要点。1. 表示欢迎。2. 介绍班级情况。3. 注意事项。4. 希望Chris做的事。应该用一般现在时。【点睛】范文要点齐全，全文连贯。运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句；not onlybut also 连接

34、词；用了get along well with，make friends with，as well as， instead of， it is convenient to you等短语和固定句型。8（2014福建卷）如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.（热情）”Sir Winston, Churchill内容要求：1. 你对该引语的理解；2. 你的相关经

35、历；3. 恰当的结尾。注意：1. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息；3. 词数：120左右。This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_【答案】This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to

36、 continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I w

37、as about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.Actually, we cant succeed in everything we try. Whats important is that we should stick at it.【导语】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文

38、，要求考生结合自己的经历发表对丘吉尔的名言“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.”的理解。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：夹叙夹议文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 你对该引语的理解；2. 你的相关经历；3. 恰当的结尾。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）get discouraged; keep trying with enthusiasm; consist in;

39、 couldnt wait to do; fall off; encourage sb to do; stick at; lose heart; be about to do; give up第三步：连词成句1. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.2. So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.3. I was about to give up when my father came and encour

40、aged me to keep going.4. With more practice, I did better and better.5. Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.6. Actually, we cant succeed in everything we try.7. Whats important is that we should stick at it.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First

41、 of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）2.表并列补充关系：Worse still3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1 So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.（sothat的倒装结构）高分句型2 Whats important is that we should stick at it.（what引导的主语从句以及that引导的表语从句）