英语：UNIT 4 WRITING课件（重庆大学版必修4）.ppt

1、重庆大学版重庆大学版高一高一(4)(4)Unit 4Unit 4 Look at the picture and discuss with your partner the following questions.Who are these people?Where are they?What is happening to them?When does it happen?They are classmates.In the classroom/at school.They just got exam paper and knew the test result.At the end of

2、the term/On the first day of new term.Some of them got a high mark and others were not glad to see their poor performances.Some students are expecting a reward from their parents;while others were worried about the incoming parents meeting.Why are some of them crying while other are laughing?Referen

3、ce words and expressions:test results score exam paper parents meeting notice reward punishment bless What do you think would happen after they go back home?Make predictions with your partner and then draw a second picture to show your idea.Choose some appropriate expressions to make a natural trans

4、ition from the first picture to the second one:A.After they go back home,B.When they are ready,C.As soon as they hear about the news,D.Before they tell their parents about the meeting,E.In the evening,F.On the way home,What may they say in the situation?_summary看图作文的写作从整体上可分为五个环节:一、“抓”为抓主题。首先,根据图片内容

5、确定好题材与体裁-是写人还是写景，是说理还是叙事,是书信还是日记或其他应用文体。二、“列”为列要点。结合图片中的情景用自己熟悉的结构与词汇列出,忌用生疏的结构与词汇按汉语思维盲目罗列,原则“不求难,不求异,唯求准”。三、“变”为变要点为句子。将第二个环节中所罗列的要点,先按一定的时间、空间及逻辑顺序排列；然后选定恰当的主语与人称，再根据动作发生的时间与主谓关系拓词成句。四、“连”为连句成篇。要在句与句以及段与段之间加一些表转折、递进和因果等关系的关联词与过渡句,使文章前后照应，行文流畅。五、“检”为文章检查：1、文章的体裁格式是否正确。2、要点有无遗漏。3、句子(人称、时态、语态、主谓一致、结

6、构、词语搭配等)。4、词汇(意义、拼写、时态语态，形容词与动词的形式，名词单复数)。5、标点符号是否有遗漏与错误。假设下面六幅图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面所示内容，用英语写一篇100字左右的日记。Sample 今天下午我去看电影。在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来。I went to the cinema this afternoon.I went to see a film this afternoon.On the way,I found/saw a case fall down from/off a mans bike.我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经

7、骑远了。于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主。I picked up the case and shouted at the man,but he had already rode away.I stopped a taxi to to catch up with the man.我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他。失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了。我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我的行动所感动,不收我的车费。I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him.The man took out some money to

8、 thank me,but I refused.I went back to the cinema by taxi.The driver was very moved and didnt accept my money.One afternoon,I went to see a film.On the way,I saw a case fall off a mans bike.I picked up the case and shouted at the man to stop.But he didnt hear me and rode away.What should I do?Then I

9、 had an idea.I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case.And we caught up with the man.I gave the case back to him.The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money.But I refused.Then the driver took me to the cinema.When I paid him,the driver wouldnt accept the money.He said he was v

10、ery moved at what I did.一、合并为简单句把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为介词短语二、合并为复合句三、把复合句改为简单句把从句改为分词短语把从句改为介词短语四、避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.五、注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。六、适当的联想与发挥。I went to see a film this afternoon.One the way to the cinema,I saw a case fall off a mans bike.I was on my way to the cinema this af

11、ternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.I picked up the case.I shouted at the man loudly.But he didnt hear me and rode away.After picking up the case,I shouted at the man loudly,but he rode too fast to hear me.Loudly as I shouted at him after picking it up,the man was riding so fa

12、r away that he couldnt hear me.I shouted at the man the moment I picked it up,however,he was riding too fast to hear me.Suddenly,I had an idea.I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man.I caught up with him at last.Suddenly,an idea flashed into my mind.I held out for a taxi and got into it with the c

13、ase.Of course,it didnt take me long to catch up with the man.I was wondering what I should do when an idea suddenly struck me.I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could so as to catch up with the man.I gave the case back to the man.The man took out some money to thank me.I refused.Getting the case back

14、from me,the man was so grateful to me that he insisted on offering me some money as a reward.But I refused him politely.The driver took me the cinema.He was very moved.He didnt accept my money.With the help of the driver,I went back to the cinema.When I was paying him,he pushed my hand away and said

15、 with a smile:“Never will I accept your money.”I went back to the cinema by taxi.To my surprise,the driver didnt accept the money because he was very moved at what I did.How proud I was!I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.After picking up t

16、he case,I shouted at the man loudly,but he rode too fast to hear me.Suddenly,an idea flashed into my mind.I held out for a taxi and got into it with the case.Of course,it didnt take me long to catch up with the man.Revised versionGetting the case back from me,the man was so grateful to me that he in

17、sisted on offering me some money as a reward.But I refused him politely.I went back to the cinema by taxi.To my surprise,the driver didnt accept the money because he was very moved at what I did.How proud I was!Discussion and homework1.You are going to write a short story about migrants in the Three

18、 Gorges.Discuss in groups to decide the following aspects.You can get the information from the reading passage.When:Where:Who:What:Why/How:2.The following pictures are about migrants and their new homes.Write a composition about 100-200 words,with the help of the words and phrases given.(settle down,adapt to,improve)(see off,leave for,pull out)(beat drum and light firecrackers,invite)(set apart,hot pepper,arrange)