2021届高考英语二轮复习 读后续写深度解读（六）.docx

1、2021届高考英语读后续写深度解读（六）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Lost, Injured, and ColdThree days earlier, I was on a guided group horseback journey through the Montana backcountry. After we pitched camp in the morning, I decided to go on a solo trail run. I picked an 8-mile circle on another guys map and showed

2、him my intended route so he would know where I was headed. Then I packed a bag with snacks and water and planned to be back by mid-afternoon.I set off under a clear sky, but after about 1.5 miles, dark clouds rolled in. Burnt, fallen trees from a wildfire were covering the trail. It disappeared unde

3、r the debris (残骸) and I lost track of it. I began to feel disappointed; everything felt much more remote than I had expected. As I considered backtracking, it started to rain, so I hid under a tree to stay dry.Daylight diminished and the temperature dropped. I was wearing only running shorts and a T

4、-shirtno match for an August night in Montana at nearly 6,000 feet. I held my backpack against my chest, put my face in the opening, and sealed the flap around the edge of my cap. Each breath filled the backpack with hot air to warm my body. Soon I fell asleep.In the morning, sunlight crept (爬行) acr

5、oss the valley and finally warmed my back. I wondered how long it would take for rescuers to find me off the trailbecause the trees were mostly burnt, I was in a fairly visible spot. But as the day progressed, I worried about dehydration (脱水). I decided to head downhill in search of a stream. I lift

6、ed my leg and placed my foot flat on the ground, then propped (撑起) myself up on my hands and pushed my bottom forward. Carefully, I moved downhill, placing my leg ahead of me and crab-walking after it. It was slow going, but this method kept the pain to a minimum.续写要求：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个以上短

7、文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Around 4 p.m., I heard the distant thunder of a helicopter. Paragraph 2:At sunrise I found the path. 【思路点拨】1. 文本细解读，确定续写方向本文是记叙文，讲述了一个作者在一次马背之旅中，早上独自一人去小道长跑，不料途中丛林着火；小径在野火之下无法辨认，作者也迷路了。夜晚，作者借着背包和帽子取暖，勉强度过了一夜。第二天，在等待救援的过程中，作者为

8、了避免脱水，艰难地以仰卧的方式挪动着去找水。续写部分应为故事的结局，即作者是否获救。根据文章内容可知，作者出门前在一位伙伴的地图上圈了自己打算长跑的路线，可以推知，作者最终是可能获救的。2. 段首句解读，确定续写方向续写第一段首句写道“下午四点钟的时候，我听到远处传来直升机的轰鸣声”，第二段首句写道“日出时分，我找到了路”，由此可知，第一段内容可以着重描写作者看到直升飞机后兴奋的心情，直升飞机离开后作者沮丧的心理，及第二个夜晚作者是如何度过的。可设想，作者在又累又饿又渴的情况下昏昏睡去。续写第二段内容应着重描写作者找到路之后，如何获救。可设想，作者找到了路，说明他已经离开了人烟稀少的焦土地，这

9、是他失联的第三天，救援工作会更加紧张，最终的结果是作者得救了。3. 划线词解读，规划续写细节1) 分类划线词人物guy，rescuers时间night环境trail，stream事物backpack，horseback，water动作disappeared心情disappointed2) 构思具体情节第一段情节：我很兴奋直升飞机飞近我上空我挥手呼喊飞机飞离（disappeared），我很失望（disappointed）夜晚（night）来临，我昏昏睡去第二段情节：我发现了路路上碰见了救援人员（rescuers）喂我水（water）喝最终获救。【范文欣赏】Paragraph 1:Around 4

10、 p.m., I heard the distant thunder of a helicopter. Excitement shot through my mind.Someone was looking for me. The helicopter appeared over the canyon, then turned my way. I waved, but it passed overhead and disappeared. I was disappointed. Around 8:30 p.m., I stopped on a rock for the night. By th

11、e time it was completely dark, I was too exhausted to keep awake. Before I knew it, I was asleep.Paragraph 2:At sunrise I found the path. As I sat considering my options, three men on horseback appeared down the trail. My heart beat heavily. “Im over here!” I shouted. The rescuers rushed over. As th

12、ey talked to me and I drank water, I realized just how inactive my mind was. They told me I should be proud of myself, helped me onto a horse, and guided me to safety through the canyon that had almost killed me.亮点积累 1. 词汇disappear v. 消失；disappointed adj. 失望的； inactive adj. 不活跃的2. 短语drift to sleep 昏

13、昏睡去； rush over 冲过去；be proud of. 为自豪3. 提分句式They told me I should be proud of myself, helped me onto a horse, and escorted me to safety through the canyon that had almost killed me.分析本句是个复合句，me后省略了told的宾语从句中的引导词that，canyon后that引导定语从句，修饰先行词canyon。译文 他们告诉我，我应该为自己感到骄傲，并帮我骑上马，护送我穿过差点要了我命的峡谷，到达安全地带。读后续写深度解

14、读:自主练习阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I served as a Newport Beach ocean lifeguard for five seasons with pleasure and honor in Orange County, California. Whenever I could, I got shifts working here, which was known for its massive currents. If you wanted to save lives, thats where you worked. Late in a

15、 shift, I was working Tower 15. Two blocks to my right was another guard named Mike, working Tower 17. Id known Mike for several years. He phoned me, “I got a couple kids. Im going to give them a warning. Keep an eye on us.” Anytime you get out of your tower, youre supposed to let somebody else know

16、, in case a situation develops. He hung up the phone and grasped his buoy (浮标) when a surf came and the kids were getting sucked out. Mike saw it before its happening, and hes running toward the ocean. I scanned but only to see two small noses floating above the water. I dropped my binos (望远镜) and c

17、alled, “Double rescue 17hes out. Im going.” Mike was already pushing through the surf line. The mother of the two then realized what was happening. She screamed when Mike reached the kids. Mike told me later that he got to the boy first, and when he turned to the girl, he had to reach down into the

18、water and caught her by the hair to pull her back up. Mike swam sideways out of the current into the clear water. When I reached the mother, Mike was in waist-deep water. The kids were too exhausted to walk, so Mike was carrying them, one under each arm. I turned to the mother and said, “Hey, its OK

19、. Theyre safe.” I saw her terror start to disappear. However, when she glanced back and got her first good look at Mike, a crazy thing happened. I saw a new kind of panic wash over her as though theres some new, equally dangerous threat on her kids lives. She rushed up to Mike, caught her kids and t

20、urned up the beach. Not even a thank-you.续写要求：1. 所续写短文词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Mike had a rough upbringing, which can be figured out just by looking at him. _Paragraph 2:To the mother, judging from the appearance, Mike wasnt a h

21、ero but a really threatening guy._【范文欣赏】Paragraph 1:Mike had a rough upbringing, which can be figured out just by looking at him. He has a number of really frightening tattoos (纹身), and his shaved head showed the scar he got from a broken beer bottle. Maybe he wasnt the friendliest lifeguard on the

22、beach and lacked professional skills, but his lifesaving ability could make up for everything. If any other guard had been working 17 that night, including me, there would be a very real chance that the mother wasnt going home with both her kids.Paragraph 2:To the mother, judging from the appearance

23、, Mike wasnt a hero but a really threatening guy. I couldnt even imagine the depth of her terror. I have a young son and daughter myself, and I am very sympathetic with her. It was not hard to understand what had happened in her heart. Mike just glanced at me, shrugged. As we jogged back to our towers, I promised that Id never let my own fear or prejudice prevent me from recognizing a hero whenever I saw one.