山西长治县2016高考英语二轮短文改错训练（7）及参考答案.doc

1、山西长治县2016高考英语二轮短文改错训练（7）及参考答案【2014模拟冲刺试题】短文改错（满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend / wee

2、kend with you. Luckily I was the amcompletely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday evening. onThere are many people think that wealth is better than health. I used to thinking so until one day I read a story about Howard Hughes. He was a American billionaire

3、 who got everything he wants. Therefore, in the last twenty years of his life, his health became worse and she was miserable. He had the best doctors and nurse. But he could still find no relief. I realized that health is worth all the money in the world. If you have millions of dollars but your hea

4、lth is poor, you will not be able to do that you want to do. So I would like to say, “ Dont hurt at yourself and try to make money. Instead, take care of your body and be happy at what you do. Healthy is more important.” 【参考答案】短文改错：There are many people / think that wealth is better than health. I u

5、sed to thinking so until one day I who thinkread a story about Howard Hughes. He was a American billionaire who got everything he wants. an wantedTherefore, in the last twenty years of his life, his health became worse and she was miserable. He had However hethe best doctors and nurse. But he could

6、still find no relief. I realized that health is worth all the money nurses in the world. If you have millions of dollars but your health is poor, you will not be able to do that whatyou want to do. So I would like to say, “ Dont hurt at yourself and try to make money. Instead, take care of your body

7、 and be happy at what you do. Healthy is more important.” Health【浙江省2014高考英语模拟冲刺卷】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如 It was very nice to get your invita

8、tion to spend weekend with you. Luckily I was the am completely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. in Friday evening. onAs a student, Li Hua works very harder at his lessons, so he is always one of the top student in our class. He loves sports very much that he ma

9、kes it a rule to play the football at weekends with his friends. Li Hua is concerning about the students who are not good at their lessons, so she always helps them after class.As a monitor, Li Hua has organized some voluntary activities successful. We visit a nursing home last month, and we pick ru

10、bbish in the park near our school every week. What we do is warmly welcomed by the community. This is how Li Hua is so popular.【参考答案】短文改错【解题思路】短文改错应先浏览语篇，了解短文情节与时间，在此基础上以句子为单位寻找错误 As a student, Li Hua works very harder at his lessons, so he is always one of the top student hard studentsin our class.

11、 He loves sports very much that he makes it a rule to play the football at weekends so with his friends. Li Hua is concerning about the students who are not good at their lessons, so she concerned healways helps them after class.As a monitor, Li Hua has organized some voluntary activities successful

12、. We visit a nursing successfully visitedhome last month, and we pick rubbish in the park near our school every week. What we do is upwarmly welcomed by the community. This is how Li Hua is so popular. why 2012模拟短文改错C It is Sunday.Li Ming is busy with working on his lessons1. in the afternoon at hom

13、e. During a break, he relaxes in the2. Window，expecting enjoy the sunshine. Yet the heavy3. traffic seems to remind him of something.Like a Senior 3 4. student,facing with the college entrance exams, he feels time is 5. more or less limited for him.He thinks he must careful plan 6. anything in order

14、 to solve the remaining problems with7. his lessons but prepare for the coming exams.Meanwhile,8. he has to take good care of him.Li Ming is determined9. to try his best so that he would go to a good university.10. 【参考答案及解析】1. 去掉with或with改为in 考查固定短语的用法。此处应为be busy doing或be busy in doing。2.第二个 in改为by

15、 考查介词的含义。此处by the window意为：在窗户旁边。3. enjoy前加to 考查动词的用法。此处应为expect to do sth。4. Like改为As 考查介词的含义。此处as a student意为：作为一名学生。5. faced改为facing或去掉with 考查face作动词的用法。动词face的用法有两种：be faced with或face+宾语。6. careful改为carefully 考查副词的用法。修饰动词用副词。7. anything改为everything 考查不定代词的用法。根据文意应为计划好一切事情。8. but改为 and 考查句间的逻辑关系。

16、此处为递进关系而不是转折关系。9. him改为himself 考查反身代词的用法。此处意为：他不得不照顾好他自己。10. would改为will 考查动词时态。此处will表意愿。2012模拟短文改错DAnimals are close friend of human beingsTheir existence 1.especially that the existence of rare animals，makes the whole 2.world lively and colorfulUnlucky,we have heard such news that 3.rare animals，

17、even keeping in the zoo，cant escape being hurt 4.and killedYou may wonder how this can happenThe reason 5.is that some people lacked understanding about these animals 6.and care little about them.However,we should make information about rare animals 7.known to the publicLets keep on mind that protec

18、ting animals 8.is duty of everyoneMeanwhile，we should take active and effective 9.measuresAfter all，protecting animals are protecting ourselves 10.【参考答案及解析】1friend-friends考查名词的单复数。根据主语animals可知，其后应一致用复数形式。2. that去掉 考查代词的用法。此处especially后直接接名词即可。3 Unlucky-Unluckily考查副词的用法。此处副词作评注性状语修饰整个句子，故用unluckily。

19、4 Keeping-Kept考查分词的用法。根据文意动物被关在动物园里，故用过去分词kept。5经分析本句正确。6Lacked-1ack考查动词时态。根据文意此处应用一般现在时。7However-Therefore考查副词的用法。此处表结果故用therefore。8. on-in考查短语的用法。解题关键：掌握短语keek sth in mind。9Duty前加the考查冠词的用法。根据文意应用the duty of everyone。10Are-Is考查主谓一致。动名词短语作主语谓语动词用单数。2012模拟短文改错EDear Xiao Wang, Learned that you are go

20、ing to visit me during the 1._holiday, Im so happy that I have shared the good news 2._with your parents. They look forward to seeing you, too. 3._My hometown located in a mountainous region. The 4._mountains here are all covered up with trees of all kinds 5._or are worth touring. The first thing we

21、 may do after 6._you arrive are going to the woods, which are a good place 7._for bird. After that, we can go fishing in a river nearby. 8._Phone me before you set off and let me know exact 9._when you will get there. I will meet you at station. 10._ Best wishes! Yours truly, Zhang Ying【参考答案及解析】1. L

22、earned-Learning 考查现在分词作状语。此处I和learn之间为主动关系，故用现在分词。2. 正确 经分析本句正确。3. your-my 考查代词指代一致。根据文意我和我的父母分享这一好消息。4. located前面加is 考查固定短语的用法。表示位于用be located in/at。5. 去掉up考查动词短语的用法。为。覆盖be covered with。6. or -and 考查句间的逻辑关系。此处表递进而不是选择。7. 第一个are-is 考查主谓一致。本句the first thing是主语，故用单数形式。 8. birdbirds 考查名词的单复数。根据句意此处应为复数

23、形式。 9. exactexactly 考查副词的用法。修饰动词know用副词。 10. at后面加the 考查冠词的用法。此处指双方都知道的 “station”。2012模拟短文改错FA few days ago I saw an instructive program on TVIt was about what the traffic problem in cities. It seems 1. that a great deal of damages is done by trafficAll our 2. cities are suffering from this. Some bu

24、ildings are actual 3. falling to piece. Its often fast to walk than to go by car 4. and by bus. The problem has been getting worse day by 5. dayThis is only one of the thousands problems in our 6. cities. All sorts of terrible things were happening to our 7. cities.The question is how can we do abou

25、t it0ur 8. roads were never designed for such heavy trafficIt 9. is time the government does something about therse problems10. 【参考答案及解析】1.去掉what考查介词宾语。此处about后直接接名词或名词名词短语。2.damagesdamage考查名词的单复数。此处damage为不可数名词。 w.w.w.k.&s.5*u.c.#om3.actualactually考查副词的用法。修饰动词用副词故用actually。4.fastfaster考查形容词的比较级。根据句中的than可知用比较级。5.andor考查句意理解。根据句意此处表选择关系。6.thousands后加of考查短语的表达法。“数以千计”表示为“thousands of”。7.wereare考查动词时态。根据句意应用选择进行时。8.HowWhat考查表语从句的连接词。此处what在表语从句中作do的宾语。9.V经分析本句正确。10Doesdid考查动词时态。在it is time that句型中，应用虚拟语气故用一般过去时。