2021届通用版高考英语二轮复习题型精练学案：新高考书面表达之读后续写（8） WORD版含解析.doc

1、江苏省百校联考高三年级第二次试卷67. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。What started as a lonely graduation day for a teen in Alabama has turned into a priceless opportunity to bond with his teacher. Now, that teacher is working to get that student a car that will get him started in his adult life.On Thursday, Bes

2、semer City High School held its annual graduation ceremony. Dom Moore was one of the teachers involved in coordinating the event. After the ceremony ended, Dom was cleaning up. Nearly everybody had left to celebrate with friends and family, but one young man was still sitting there by himself. “I kn

3、ew his moods and I knew he wasnt himself,” Dom said. Not knowing what to say at first, the teacher told him, I expect big things from you and its going to be OK.”Dom assumed that someone would show up eventually to give the graduate a ride home. But nobody did. When Dom offered to drive him, the two

4、 had no idea that this was to be more than just a ride home. The teacher decided to take him out to eat-at any restaurant of his choice. They ended up at the Cheesecake Factory, and enjoyed a hearty meal and dessert to celebrate the graduates achievement.At first, the two were fighting back tears. B

5、ut before long, they were having a great time together. Dom never asked why the boys family did not attend the ceremony. What was important to him was that the young man felt appreciated for what he had accomplished. Later that evening, Dom took to Facebook to share a photo and some thoughts on the

6、event. He says that he doesnt normally post about these situations, as they are all too common in his profession, but that something inside urged him to share this experience.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Actually, Dom wanted to help the young man._Dom thinks what these people did set an ex

7、ample to us._【答案】Actually, Dom wanted to help the young man. Dom shared his wish to raise money for the young man in the post. He hoped someone may be a blessing to this young man. Luckily, before long, generous people, many of whom were strangers, sent more than $5, 000 as donations. Dom took him t

8、o open a bank account with the money. Dom wanted to help him buy a car, which can make his travel more convenient. He also taught the man to save up to attend college one day.Dom thinks what these people did set an example to us. Dom felt amazed that so many people would help the teen. He has undoub

9、tedly raised much money beyond his imagination. Dom thinks the story will remind us of what is truly important and give hope to those who are struggling. We usually take life for granted, but the story shows us that there is always beauty in our heart. Even though we have difficulties, at this momen

10、t it shows that mankind is good.【解析】【分析】本文以毕业典礼为线索展开，讲述了一位老师Dom，在学生毕业典礼上，遇到一名深陷困境，没有父母来接的孤独的毕业生，Dom努力帮助他，筹集资金，准备给他买一辆车，让他开始他的成年生活的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“实际上，Dom想帮助这个年轻人。”可知，第一段可描写Dom想帮助他，筹集资金买车的经过。由第二段首句内容“Dom认为这些人的所作所为为我们树立了榜样。”可知，第二段可描写Dom对好心的人们高度赞扬，以及感谢，并对人性善良感到欣慰。2.续写线索：帮助筹集资金买车感谢赞扬感悟3.词汇激活行为类.帮

11、助：help him/dohim afavour/givehimahand.筹集资金；准备买车：raise money / raisefunds； buy a car for him/get him a car.赞扬：praise/speak highly of/ commend情绪类.感谢：showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful.欣慰：show us that there is always beauty in our heart / show that mankind is good【点睛】高分句型1. Luckily

12、, before long, generous people, many of whom were strangers, sent more than $5, 000 as donations. （由many of whom引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型2. Dom wanted to help him buy a car, which can make his travel more convenient. （由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）高分句型3. Dom thinks the story will remind us of what is truly important

13、and give hope to those who are struggling.（what引导的名词性从句和who引导的定语从句）浙江省20202021学年高三百校12月联考47. 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Karie double-checked the words on her spelling test. If she got 100 percent today, shed win her class First- Quarter Spelling Challenge and a brand-new dictionary that came with

14、 videos and other cool stuff. Plus，Ms. McCormack had promised to do a handstand (手倒立) if anyone got a perfect score.Three more words to go. N-i-c-e-l-y. Q-u-i-c-k-l-y. H-o-n-s-t-y. , Wait! Shed spelled honesty, not honestly! She erased the t-y and wrote l-y before handing in her paper. “Ill correct

15、these while youre at recess” Ms. MeCormack said.After recess, Karie hurried into the classroom. She fidgeted (坐立不安) in her seat, tapped her pencil and looked over at her best friend, Norah. Norah crossed her fingers. Karie crossed hers, too.Ms. McCormack walked to the front of the room and cleared h

16、er throat. Then, as if she were an Olympic Gymnast，. Ms. McCormacks feet flipped (翻转) into the air. “Congratulations, Karie! You did it! she announced while upside down.The whole class erupted!Ms. McCormack righted herself and presented Karie with her prize. Karie grinned as she read the label on th

17、e box: To Karie Carter, for her perfect first -quarter score in spelling.“Everything OK?” Mom asked as Karie burst through the front door after school.“Everything s perfect!” Karie shouted, showing Mom her spelling test and prize.Mom hugged her. “Put the test on the fridge so Dad can see it when he

18、get home.”“And Casper, too. ”Karie scooped (抱起) up her cat. “Can you spell nicely，Casper? And quickly and honesly, and. .Karies heart missed a beat suddenly. Honestly? H-O-N-E-SL-Y!“Karie, whats the matter?” said Mom.“I dont feel so good, Karie said, putting Casper down and stuffing the test paper i

19、nto her backpack.“Probably too much excitement.”Mom rubbed her back.“How about some tea?”Paragraph 1:Karie swallowed, “Howdid you know? At is exactly what I needed._Paragraph 2:Karie pushed open the door of Ms. McCormack s office._【答案】One possible version:Paragraph 1:Karie swallowed, “How did you kn

20、ow? At is exactly what I needed.” Shortly afterwards, she dashed into her room and pulled out the test paper. Recalling the joyful moment, a mixture of guilt and unwillingness overwhelmed her, Karie slowly picked up her pen，hesitant. “If I put the missing t back in, no one would ever know.” she thou

21、ght. The moment the nib touched the paper, she tossed the pen on the table and stormed out of the house with her backpack. She raced back to school as fast as her legs could carry her.Paragraph 2:Karie pushed open the door of Ms. McCormacks office. At the sight of Karie, Ms. McCormack asked her what

22、 was happening. Karie unzipped her bag, pulled out the prize and handed it to her teacher. Head down, she explained her mistake in spelling competition. For a moment, Ms. McCormack stood quietly reading the label on the dictionary. Then she picked up a pen, crossed out the word perfect on the label

23、and wrote honest before handing the prize back to Karie. “I get to keep this? Honestly?” she asked suspiciously, “Not for the spelling mistake you made,” Ms. McCormack smiled “But for your honesty.”【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Karie在拼写测试中取得了完美的成绩，结果她回家才发现，自己“诚实”的单词拼写错了，但是老师没有发现。Karie陷入了沉思，不知道要不要告诉老师，不过最终Ka

24、rie还是去学校告诉了老师这个错误。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容Karie 喝了一口茶。“你怎么知道的? 一个“t”正是我需要的。”可知，第一段可描写Karie回想自己高兴的时刻及发现自己拼写错误后的内疚感，进而可写Karie的举动。由第二段首句内容“Karie 推开了 Mcormack 老师办公室的门。”可知，第二段可描写Karie如何告知老师这个试卷上的错误的。2.续写线索：Karie喝茶Karie拿出试卷Karie感到内疚Karie告诉老师这个错误老师肯定了Karie的诚实。3.词汇激活行为类举动：pull out/ hand/pick up /take out看：look a

25、way from/ fix ones eyes on / look at去往：go to / come in / get in情绪类不情愿：reluctantly / unwillingly内疚：guilt /guilty conscience犹豫：hesitant/ in hesitation【点睛】高分句型1 Recalling the joyful moment, a mixture of guilt and unwillingness overwhelmed her, Karie slowly picked up her pen，hesitant.（“Recalling the joy

26、ful moment”为现在分词作状语）高分句型2 At the sight of Karie, Ms. McCormack asked her what was happening.（由连接代词what引导的宾语从句做ask 的宾语）辽宁师大附中2021届高三上学开学考试英语试题47. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Laura Stevens was nine years old. But every single time her mother and her father went out，they insisted

27、that Mrs. Thomas stay with her. Laura didnt like Mrs. Thomas. She wouldnt let her stay up late to watch television, she wouldnt let her eat more than three cookies, and she even made Laura play games with her! Im not a baby”. Laura pleaded with her parents. Im nine years old. I dont need a baby-sitt

28、er. And if you make me have one, Im going to go to my room and stay there forever”.“Laura, scolded her mother, youre acting just like a baby. Thats why you need a baby-sitter.” Laura sighed. But if she didnt complain, she wondered, would she still have to have a sitter? But no matter what Laura did,

29、 every time her parents went out they insisted Mrs. Thomas stay with her. And every time Mrs. Thomas stayed with her, she was very nice to Laura, but made her obey stupid rules. But someday, Laura knew, someday she would be big enough to stay by herself, or at least have a baby-sitter who wasnt so b

30、ossy.One night, Lauras parents had a big surprise for her. Mrs. Thomas had gone to visit her sister in another city. Her parents had hired a brand-new Robo-Sitter! When the Robo-Sitter was delivered，Laura was amazed to discover that she looked just like a real person and even sounded like a real per

31、son. Her father programmed the Robo-Sitter to make dinner for Laura, give her three cookies, help her with her homework, and so on. And then he programmed the Robo-Sitter to clean the whole house. When he pressed Enter the Robo-Sitters eyes opened brightly and a big smile appeared on her face. When

32、Lauras parents left the house, Laura reprogrammed the Robo-Sitter! The Robo-Sitter whizzed around the whole house, cleaning it from top to bottom in less than a minute. Then she raced into the kitchen and returned carrying three whole boxes of cookies, which she handed to Laura. Then she did all of

33、Lauras homework in nine seconds. Then she put Lauras favorite movie in the VCR and got out of the way. Laura sat down in front of the TV set with her box of cookies and pressed the Off button. And just like that, the Robo-Sitter went to sleep. Laura ate her cookies and watched her movie. But after a

34、 little while, her stomach started hurting and she wanted someone to talk to. She turned on the Robo-Sitter, who immediately cleaned the whole house all over again, brought Laura three more boxes of cookies, and did Lauras homework for a second time. Laura tried to reprogram the robo-Sitter, but was

35、 only able to make her do the same things faster and faster. Laura had no choice and finally turned off the Robo-Sitter.Paragraph1:The house was very quiet. _Paragraph 2:Two hours passed, but they seemed like two weeks. _【答案】The house was very quiet. For the first time in her whole entire life, Laur

36、a was all alone. And it made her feel really strange. She wanted someone to talk to; she wanted someone to play with. She picked up another cookie but her tummy hurt too much so she didnt even want to eat it. She sat very still in her fathers favorite chair, watching her movie. But then she heard a

37、loud creak from her bedroom. Maybe it was just a noise in the house, but in her mind it was a person. Oh, she wished Mrs. Thomas was there.Two hours passed, but they seemed like two weeks. Finally, she heard her fathers car driving into the garage. Just as her parents walked in, she turned on the Ro

38、bo-Sitter who immediately cleaned the whole house again. Did you have a nice time? Lauras mother asked. Laura smiled. It was very nice. she said softly, and then added, but I think I like it better when Mrs. Thomas is here.”【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，以前劳拉的父母外出时会让邻居托马斯太太和她在一起，但因为托马斯太太会让劳拉遵守一些愚蠢的规

39、定所以劳拉不喜欢她。劳拉一直恳求父母让她独自待家里父母不同意，直到有一次父母外出时托马斯太太也去另一个城市看她的姐姐了。这次劳拉的父亲雇了一个全新的机器人保姆来照顾她。父母外出后，她按照自己的意愿更改了机器人保姆的程序。【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：屋子里很安静。所以应该写劳拉感觉到孤独，而且因为吃多了饼干肚子也很疼痛，对比之下，劳拉开始想念托马斯太太。要详细描述劳拉感到孤独的过程。第二段开头是：两个小时过去了，但它们看起来像两个星期。本段应该写劳拉终于等到了父母回来，为了不让父亲发现又打开了机器人让其打扫房子，但这次，她向妈妈表达了与机器人相比，她更喜欢托马斯太太的陪伴。【点睛】本

40、文描写详略得当，使用了许多高级句子。如：She picked up another cookie but her tummy hurt too much so she didnt even want to eat it.这句话使用了由so连接的结果状语从句；She sat very still in her fathers favorite chair, watching her movie.这句话使用了现在分词做状语；Just as her parents walked in, she turned on the Robo-Sitter who immediately cleaned the

41、 whole house again.这句话使用了由as引导的时间状语从句和由who引导的定语从句等。扬州中学2021届高三上学期十月月考47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Nita was recently married and had started living with her husband and mother-in-law. Nitas mother-in-law was conservative whereas Nita was liberal with modern lifestyle. Soon th

42、ey both started quarreling due to differences in opinions and lifestyle. As days and months passed, neither of them changed their behavior.Nita became very aggressive over time and started to hate her mother-in-law. Once, as usual, when she quarreled with her mother-in-law, her husband took his moth

43、ers side. She became so angry as to leave to her fathers home. Nitas father was a chemist and she told him about everything thats been happening. Then she pleaded her father to give her something poisonous, so she could mix it up and give it to her mother- in- law to get rid of her.Nitas father felt

44、 pity at her situation but tried to persuade her not to do anything against the law. However, Nita was in no mood to listen and understand. Finally, a clever idea occurred to his mind. He brought a powder and told her, Every day when you make lunch or dinner, just mix a little of this powder in your

45、 mother-in-laws meal, since the quantity is less, she will die slowly in a few months and people will think she has died naturally.He also told her, “Because no one should have doubt on you, from today onwards, you will not fight at all with your mother-in-law but instead you will be very caring tow

46、ards her, even if she is rude to you, you will simply be polite only. Nita agreed, thinking she would be free from her mother-in-laws quarreling in a few months. As advised by her father, she started mixing the powder in her mother-in-laws meals and behaved in a caring and polite manner whenever her

47、 mother-in-law said something bad.Paragraph 1:As time passed, Nitas mother-in-laws nature also started to change._Paragraph 2:She hurried to her fathers home and asked for the antidote( 解药) to cure the effect of that poisonous powder._【答案】Paragraph 1:As time passed, Nita s mother-in-law s nature als

48、o started to change. Because Nita was being very caring towards her, she too started to be affectionate towards her. Five months passed and Nita had been mixing the powder but atmosphere of the house was changed. There were no quarrels, both were praising each while talking to neighbors. They got ve

49、ry attached to each other like mother and daughter. Now, Nita started to get worried thinking due to the powder, her mother-in-law may die soon.Paragraph 2:She hurried to her fathers home and asked for the antidote to cure the effect of that poisonous powder. She said, “I dont want to lose my mother

50、-in-law, she is just like my mom and I love her very much. Her father smiled and said, “Which poison? I had simply given you a sweetener!【解析】【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，Nita和婆婆由于意见和生活方式的不同，他们开始吵架，开始讨厌她的婆婆。某一天吵架后Nita回到家里，她的父亲是位化学家，她把发生的一切都告诉了父亲。然后她恳求父亲给她一些有毒的东西，这样她就可以把它混在一起给她的婆婆来摆脱她。Nita的父亲同情她的处境，但

51、试图说服她不要做任何违反法律的事。然而，Nita还是听不进去。于是她父亲想了个办法，给Nita拿了一包粉末，让她每天做午饭或晚饭的时候，在她婆婆的饭里拌一点这种粉，因为量少了，几个月后她会慢慢死去，人们会认为她是自然死亡的。他还告诉她从今天起，不要和婆婆吵架，而是要非常关心她，即使她对你很粗鲁，也要有礼貌。Nita同意了，在父亲的建议下，她开始在婆婆的饭菜里拌粉，每次婆婆说了坏话，很有礼貌。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：随着时间的推移，Nita的婆婆的性格也开始发生变化。所以后文应该是讲述婆婆因为Nita对她很关心，她也开始对她很亲切。五个月过去了，房子里的气氛变了。没有争吵，现在，Nita

52、开始担心，她的婆婆因为粉末可能很快就会死去。第二段开头是：她急忙跑到父亲家里，寻求治疗那毒药的办法。本段应该写Nita告诉父亲自己不想失去婆婆，非常爱她。结果父亲笑着说他只不过给了Nita一点甜味剂。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：tooto；be affectionate；get attached to等高级词汇；Because Nita was being very caring towards her, she too started to be affectionate towards her.原因状语从句；There

53、 were no quarrels, both were praising each while talking to neighbors.运用省略句等高级句式。常德市第二中学2021届高三开学摸底考试52. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。My sister Stacy and I set out on a warm spring day to hike the Triple Falls Trail. On the way up, we climbed over a tree that had fallen across the path, and we mark

54、ed this place for our return trip. We hiked past steep cliffs（悬崖）and thick trees and lunched at Triple Fall. On the way back, we walked for what seemed like a very long time, expecting to see the fallen tree any minute.We rounded a bend; finally, there it wasby then I was hot and ready to go home. A

55、t the same time, we crossed paths with a man and a child. I stepped aside to make room for them，my eyes were still glued to（全神贯注）the tree.I dont remember exactly how it happened, but suddenly I was sliding down. As I waved about for something to help slow my fall, my water bottle flew out of my back

56、pack. I didnt hear it land. I rolled onto my stomach and started clawing（抓）at the cliff. After another 10 feet or so, somehow I managed to grab a very thin tree branch and stopped myself. It looked like it would break as soon as I bent i. My heart was beating madly but I didnt dare move for fear tha

57、t I would start sliding again. I glanced up at my sister and her face was all pale. She was looking down at the sheer drop, crying loudly, and I knew she was trying to find a way to pull me up.I couldnt hold myself up any longer. Someone comes to help me! I shouted at the top of my lungs. I knew the

58、 ground was far away. My breaths grew heavy and short. After about 10 minutes, a crowd gathered on the trail above and I saw a man climbing down toward me.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Then a rope made of raincoats, trousers,

59、and other clothing fell own from above,_Paragraph 2:The man had found a little ledge（岩脊）sticking out of the cliff to my side._【答案】Then a rope made of raincoats, trousers, and other clothing fell down from above, bringing down loose rocks and dirt on the cliff toward my face. The man was risking his

60、life to save me. I shouted up at my sister, Stacy, I love you so much. I heard her crying, and that was when my attitude changed: I couldnt let my sister down. I took some deep breaths, and I held on, and I waited. Slowly, the man lowered himself with the aid of the rope.The man had found a little l

61、edge sticking out of the cli to my side. Holding onto a tree with one hand, he looped the rope around me. He pointed out a spot next to him and told me to step on. My legs started shaking so hard that I could hardly hold myself up. Luckily, the man pushed me up from below as I pulled myself up the r

62、ope, struggling through the bushes. I climbed up about 15 feet to a woman named Sarah, who joined in the rescue and took my backpack. Stacy and another man grabbed my arms and pulled me to safety. I am extremely grateful for the assistance the man provided.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，作者和她的妹妹步行上山游玩，

63、在回来的途中发生了意外，作者摔倒滑落到悬崖的边上，经过作者呼喊求救，过来一群人来帮忙。【详解】续写第一段开头为：然后，一根用雨衣、裤子和其他衣服做成的绳子从上面掉下来后面应该写有人顺着绳子爬下来救作者的过程以及作者的心路历程。续写第二段开头为：那人在我这边发现了一个小岩脊伸出来后面应该写那个人怎样救我的过程，并且最后我成功得救了，非常感激救我的人。 续写要求至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语，所以，考生应熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候使用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】文章主题部分选用的是一般过去时，续写

64、部分也用一般过去时，通篇时态把握准确；所给关键词使用的恰当并且高级，显示出较高的英语能力；文章中还使用大量的复合句，为文章增加色彩和高级感，如I climbed up about 15 feet to a woman named Sarah, who joined in the rescue and took my backpack. I shouted up at my sister, Stacy, I love you so much. I heard her crying, and that was when my attitude changed: I couldnt let my sister down. 这里的复合句显示高级的英语水平，作者精准掌握了从句使用的要领；续写部分构思巧妙，衔接自然，思路清晰自然，表达完整，为一篇优秀的作品。