2025版高考英语一轮总复习 写作培优 第1部分 第3章 第4讲 日记课件.ppt

1、第四讲 日记第三章 记叙文写作日记是用来记录一天中所发生的有意义的、值得记录的事件。在日记中，人们会对事件发表评论，阐述自己的态度或体会。1英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。其具体格式为：英文日记的书端是专门写日记的日期和星期的。左上角是日期(日、月、年)、星期。2日记的时态：由于日记是对当天所发生事情的回顾，因此常用一般过去时。在发表评论或感想时，也可使用其他时态。3日记的人称：因为日记是记载自己的亲身经历，因此应用第一人称，语言尽量口语化，按照事情发生的先后顺序，清楚、准确、连贯地把事情表达出来。4日记的具体写作结构为：1吸引眼球开头句This morning,when I was w

2、alking on the street,I saw that two travelers were reading a map,looking puzzled.今天早上，当我在街上散步的时候，我看到两个旅行者在看地图，看起来很困惑。It is Sunday today.This morning,we had a voluntary activity.今天是星期天。早晨，我们有个志愿活动。2亮点出彩篇中句I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take No.20 Bus,which could take them there

3、 directly.我把他们带到附近的公共汽车站，建议他们乘坐20路公共汽车，这样他们就可以直接到那里了。Seeing them on the bus,I felt a kind of satisfaction.看到他们在公共汽车上，我感到一种满足。Today I successfully got rid of my phone and I felt it amazing.今天我成功地摆脱了我的手机，我觉得很神奇。It offered me an opportunity to get close to nature and have a good chat with my friends in

4、stead of chatting online.它给了我一个接近自然并和我的朋友聊天的机会，而不是在网上聊天。3韵味无穷结尾句A thrilling as well as meaningful day has ended,but I still remained excited for quite a long time.劳累而有意义的一天结束了，但我仍然激动了很长一段时间。What happened today has left a deep impression in my memory.今天发生的事在我的脑海里留下了深刻的印象。What an unforgettable experie

5、nce!多么令人难忘的一次经历！This is the lesson we should learn from.这是我们应当汲取的教训。Though tired,I felt very happy.虽然很累，但我感觉很快乐。星期_ 日、月(日期)Everyone may have experienced something unforgettable,good or bad.I will never forget the thing that _(事情)(提出将要讲述的事情)It was_(时间)On the way,I found _(人物)I went upward and knew th

6、at _(事情发展)I thought _(帮助对方)However,to my surprise,I _(遇到挫折)At last I _(结果)(详细讲述事情发生的时间、地点和过程等)This is only a small thing,but only at that moment did I know_(感受)(发表见解或感想)假定你是李华，昨天你参加了学校举办的以“我最喜欢的一本书”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语日记，要点如下：1描述当时比赛的情况；2你的表现和感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式作答。Saturday4 June【满分范文】Saturday 4

7、 JuneThis afternoon I attended the English speech contest held by my school，whose topic is“The book I like best”When I knew that the first five candidates performed very well,I felt a little worried.At the thought of the words“I can do it”，I became calm a lot.Soon it was my turn.When I said“The book

8、 I like best is Three Days toSee written by Helen Keller;from the book,I realize that it would be an excellent rule to live happily each day as if we should die tomorrow.”，my teachers and classmates cheered for me.Finally I won first prize.Be happy every day and try my best to do everything.Ill keep

9、 it in my mind and make it come true.【名师点评】1文章开篇总体描述；随后详述当时的比赛情况；最后阐述自己的感想。2范文中使用了大量高级句式结构，如whose引导的定语从句(whose topic is“The book I like best”)，when引导的时间状语从句(When I knew that the first five candidates performed very well)，as if引导的方式状语从句(as if we should die tomorrow)，过去分词短语(written by Helen Keller)作后置

10、定语；还使用了(at the thought of,keep it in my mind等)高级词汇，使得文章语言多样，条理清楚，层次分明。这些都彰显了作者扎实的英语语言功底，较强的思维能力和表达能力。假定你是李华，上周六下午你校在学校礼堂举行了消防逃生演练(fire drill)。请你写一篇英语日记记录这一事件，内容包括：1消防讲座；2逃生演练；3你的感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式作答。Saturday26 February【参考范文】Saturday 26 FebruaryIn order to raise our safety awareness,some fire

11、fighters were invited to our school to give a speech last Saturday afternoon.They showed us what to do in case of a fire,how to prevent the fire and how to use different kinds of fire-fighting equipment.Then a fire drill was held.As soon as the alarm rang,all of us students ran downstairs one by one.We finally got together at the playground safely;our teachers were waiting for us.Through the drill,we have learned how to escape in an emergency.I think it is important for us to remain calm and know what to do.