2019年高考英语大一轮复习渐进写作训练：STEP ONE 第2讲 WORD版含答案.docx

1、第2讲整齐有致的并列句 由两个或两个以上不分主次、相互独立的简单句构成的句子叫并列句。并列句通过并列连词、连接副词和分号三种方式连接起来。一、常见的并列连词类型连词并列或递进关系and，both.and.，not only.but also.，neither.nor.转折关系but，yet，however，while选择关系or，otherwise，or else，either.or.，not.but.因果关系for，so，therefore，thus，hence对比关系while(1)A seminar leader shared her success storyshe had not o

2、nly lost 125 pounds，but also raised 25,000 for homeless children.一位培训会领导者分享了她的成功故事她不仅减掉了125磅的重量，而且为无家可归的儿童募集了25 000美元。(2017天津)(2)Some compromises were unavoidable，but the video turned out perfect.一些妥协是不可避免的，但是这个视频结果是完美的。(2017北京)(3)Take the chance，or else you will regret it.抓住这次机会，否则你会后悔的。(4)Id bette

3、r take an umbrella，for it is going to rain.我最好带把伞，因为天快要下雨了。(5)When I made a little progress，she always praised me，so I worked harder than ever.当我取得一点进步时，她总是表扬我，所以我学习更努力了。(6)Mike is outgoing while Jane is shy.Mike很外向，而Jane很腼腆。即时训练1用适当的并列连词填空1In my opinion，everyone here is a member of our big family a

4、nd we learn a lot from each other.(2016天津)2It is a very difficult task，but I will not give it up.3It must have rained last night，for the ground is very wet this morning.4Although my grandfather is very old，yet he is leading an active life.5My mother is busy doing the housework while my father is sit

5、ting there doing nothing.二、并列句的常见句型1either.or.要么要么Either he could not come or he did not want to.要么是他不能来，要么是他不想来。2not only.but also.不但而且Not only are books shared but also it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.书籍不仅被分享，而且它还能建立一个联系世界各地读者的桥梁。(2015重庆)3not.b

6、ut.不是而是She did not ask others to help her，but finished the whole work by herself that day.那天她没有叫别人帮忙，而是自己完成了所有的工作。4for.因为We listened eagerly，for he brought news of our families.我们急不可待地听着，因为他带来了我们家人的消息。5therefore.所以There is still much to discuss.Therefore，we shall return to this item at our next meet

7、ing.要讨论的问题还很多。因此，我们将在下次会议上再讨论这个议题。6while.而/然而/但是It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.它对一些人是有好处的，却使其他人处于是否投票的两难境地。(2016江苏)7祈使句/名词词组and/or/otherwise陈述句(1)Keep in mind and gradually we can gain this good learning habit and benefit from it.记住它，逐

8、渐地我们就能养成这个好的学习习惯并从中受益。(2)A few more minutes，and she will do it much better.再给她几分钟，她会做得更好的。(3)Work harder，or/otherwise you will fail in the next exam.学习再努力一些，否则下次考试你会失败的。8when.这时(1)I was walking to school this morning when I heard someone call me.今天早上我步行去上学，这时我听到有人喊我。(2)I was about to give up when my

9、 parents encouraged me to go on.我正要放弃，这时我的父母鼓励我坚持下去。(3)She had just arrived home when her mother asked her to play the piano.她刚刚到家，她妈妈就让她弹钢琴。即时训练2用并列句完成句子1两周过去了，我们的交流活动结束了。(2016天津)Two weeks went by，and our exchange activities ended.2它不仅影响我们的日常生活，而且可能也会威胁人们的生命安全。(2015江苏)It not only affects our everyd

10、ay life，but may also threaten peoples lives.3虽然她是一个普通妇女但是她确实值得尊敬。 She is an ordinary woman but she is really worth respecting.4一些人支持他而其他人则不然。 Some people are in favor of him while others arent.5我正要打开门，这时我听到有人敲门。 I was about to open the door when I heard someone knocking at the door.三、在写作中使用并列句时的常见错误

11、1because和so，although/though和but使用不当2when和while误用综合演练.用并列句完成句子1微笑不仅使我们高兴，而且也使别人放松。Smiling can not only make us happy，but also make others relaxed.2我的老师们对我不满意，所以那时我甚至想离开学校。My teachers werent satisfied with me，so I even wanted to leave my school then.3他自己去看电影了，因为我上周看过了。He went to see the film by himsel

12、f，for/because I saw it last week.4快点，否则足球赛我们会迟到的。Be quick，or/otherwise well be late for the football match.5我的好朋友很细心，而他的哥哥非常粗心。My good friend is very careful while his brother is very careless.6在周末，我爷爷不是待在家里，而是去公园散步。On weekends my grandfather doesnt stay at home，but goes to walk in the park.7要么他们要么吉

13、姆下周六去上海。Either they or Jim is going to Shanghai next Saturday.8我正和我的老朋友说话，这时我的手机响了。I was talking with my old friend when my smart phone rang.按要求完成下列各题(一)用并列句翻译句子9上周日我们去野营，一路上非常兴奋。We went camping last Sunday and we were very excited all the way.10我们不但带着食物和水，还画了一张地图。Not only did we bring some food and

14、 water，but we also drew a map.11我们不是去玩， 而是去探索些什么。We didnt go to play，but went to explore something.12我们在树林走着时，天突然开始下雨了。We were walking in the forest when it began to rain.13我们正要出去时，雨下得更大了。We were about to walk out when it rained more heavily.14后来雨停了，所以我们从洞里走了出来。Later the rain stopped，so we walked ou

15、t of the cave.(二)把上述句子连成一篇100词左右的短文，可适当增加细节We went camping last Sunday and we were very excited all the way.Not only did we bring some food and water，but we also drew a map.As a matter of fact，we didnt go to play，but went to explore something.Unfortunately，we were walking in the forest when it began to rain.Therefore，we had to enter a cave to shelter.We were neither feeling nervous nor disappointed.We were about to walk out when it rained more heavily.Later the rain stopped，so we walked out of the cave.