2022版高考英语 Unit 4 Making the news 单元达标检测（含解析）新人教版必修5.docx

1、单元达标检测(满分:120分;时间:100分钟)第一部分阅读理解(共两节,满分35分)第一节(共10小题;每小题2.5分,满分25分)阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中,选出最佳选项。AHere are some of the most influential print journalists in history.John Peter ZengerThis man published The New York Weekly Journal in the 1700s. He wrote honestly about the British government, and in

2、 1734 he was arrested(逮捕). He was found not guilty, since what he wrote was based on the truth. His case helped influence the American Revolution.Benjamin FranklinWe know that Benjamin Franklin had a lot of interests. But many people dont realize that the inventor and Founding Father was also a jour

3、nalist. His The Pennsylvania Gazette began in 1729, and Franklin used it to help get his ideas out and influence the public leading up to the American Revolution.William Randolph HearstHearst was well known as one of the biggest publishers and journalists of his time. He started with The San Francis

4、co Examiner, and went from there. Hearst was one of the starters of “yellow journalism”, which started a new field of journalism that used eye-catching headlines to draw the attention of readers.Helen ThomasThis woman was the first lady of print journalism. Helen Thomas has been a White House report

5、er since 1961. She was known for her bold(大胆的)questions, and for her ability to get to the heart of the matter. Thomas gained new influence and fame when George W. Bush was President for her sharp questions and comments.1.Why was John Peter Zenger not guilty?A.He didnt lie at all.B.The police got th

6、e wrong guy.C.He took part in the American Revolution.D.His achievements were greater than his fault.2.Which role of Franklin may surprise you most?A.A father.B.A leader.C.An inventor.D.A journalist.3.Whats the biggest feature of “yellow journalism”?A.It was created by Hearst.B.Its newspapers were i

7、n yellow.C.It used little tricks to attract readers.D.It came from The San Francisco Examiner.BId been asked to go to an editors office with the old program “We have a story we think youd be perfect for.” Here was the topic: We want you to write about how middle-aged men have no friends. Seeing that

8、, I couldnt help thinking, “Excuse me? I have plenty of friends.” Then the editor told me there were all sorts of evidence out there to show how men, as they age, let their close friendships go, and that the fact can cause all sorts of problems and have a terrible impact on their health.As I walked

9、back to my desk in the newsroom a distance of maybe 100 yardsI quickly took stock of my friend list. First of all, there was my friend Mark. Wait, how often do we actually hang out? Maybe four or five times a year? And then there was another best friend from high school, Rory, and.I actually could n

10、ot remember the last time Id seen him.There were all those other good friends who seemed as if they were still in my life because we followed one another via social media, but as I ran down the list of those I considered real, true, lifelong friends, I realized that it had been years since I saw man

11、y of them, even decades for a few.By the time I got back to my desk, I realized that I was indeed perfect for this story, not because I was unusual in any way, but because my story was very, very typical. And as I looked into what that meant, I realized that in the long term, I was heading down a pa

12、th that was very, very dangerous. And I knew I needed a change.4.Seeing the topic, the author.A.showed an interest in itB.felt surprised and skepticalC.knew the editor was jokingD.thought it was perfect for him5.What did the author realize when walking back to the newsroom?A.He had lost some best fr

13、iends.B.He wasnt popular with others.C.He had close friends in his life.D.He hadnt made any true friends.6.How did the author maintain his friendship?A.By letter.B.By the Internet.C.By phoning each other.D.By having get-togethers with his friends regularly.7.What do we know from the last paragraph?A

14、.The author was a good writer.B.The author liked making new friends.C.Others had more friends than the author.D.The author would attach importance to friendship.CThe traditional news media in America has been having a rough time in the last few years. According to a recent survey, more Americans hav

15、e a negative (43%) than a positive (33%) view of the news media, and are finding it harder to be well informed because it is getting harder to determine which news is accurate.The problem is preference. While ideally the media should be objective and hold power to account, in reality we know that mo

16、st news outlets belong to a certain party and have their own agenda to advance. Whether state-owned or run by some shady tax-avoiding billionaires, getting “the masses” to view the world from a certain perspective has always been the priceless power to wield.So why is trust in the media so low? Well

17、, according to the same survey, 8 out of 10 Americans believe that the news media is critical to their democracy. The gap between these noble expectations of the honest, objective media and the performance that they actually deliver is large. Times when the mask slips and examples of media manipulat

18、ion(操纵)are exposed are hugely damaging to trust, and people naturally turn to social media for others, even easier-to-manipulate sources. Thus we are in the current state in which we find ourselves confused and mistrustful.People have been posting examples of how the media can use different techniqu

19、es of deception, to trick you into seeing exactly what they wanted you to see. As you will discover, the perspective is really everything! It will go to show that a healthy dose of skepticism goes a long way, and getting your news from a wide range of different sources is your best bet for a more ro

20、unded view of the world we live in. Social media is good in that respect, but bad in terms of regulation, trolling people and shouting horrible things at each other. The good old traditional news media is really needed as a forum for reasonable debates and expert opinions, but they have got to stop

21、with the manipulation already!8.What does Para. 2 want to convey?A.People have prejudice against the media.B.The media can take control of the party.C.The media has acted as a tool to mask the truth.D.The media has the priceless power.9.Whats the structure of the passage?A.B.C.D.10.Whats the best ti

22、tle for the passage?A.Wheres trust in the mediaB.Why peoples trust in the media fallsC.How people treat trust in the mediaD.Whats trust in the media第二节(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。 Whether you are a new blogger, or one who has been blogging for a while, you are probably

23、 wondering how to make the best of your blog. 11By doing so, you can get your blog known, promote a product and get the results you are expecting. Here are several ways to do this.The first step is to make sure that your blog is updated frequently. 12This makes a huge effect on your blog. Continue p

24、osting as possible as you can, and this will keep attracting your readers to your blog.13Having your look is a huge plus in the blog marketing world. You can have your own look by just using HTML, and adjust the code to suit your taste. You are going to see that this will truly make a difference to

25、your blog. Try to get a theme that is going to match the market that you are promoting in your blog. Doing so will make it look even more professional.Something else that will help you with your blog marketing is exchanging links with authority blogs that are in your same market. 14The authority sit

26、es are listed high in Googles search results. However, just a few links are hardly ever enough to get your blog known. Your will need to continue to work on your blog and get more links to it all of the time. 15In the world of blogs, most blog owners are thankful for all links, and are willing to re

27、turn the favor.A.Make your blog different.B.The more the better in this case.C.In fact, the key to this is to blog effectively.D.Meanwhile, be on guard against harmful links.E.Post in your blog regularly for the best results.F.Another important thing is to make your blog look nicer.G.This is another

28、 great way to get the word out about your blog.1. 2. 3. 4. 5.第二部分语言运用(共两节,满分45分)第一节(共20小题;每小题1.5分,满分30分)阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。When I was just out of college, I managed to get my dream job as a trader in New York City on the floor of the American Stock(股票)Exchange.Though it was

29、a proud16,the job was simply too physically17I must stand in a crowd every day, which often18me in a mindset(心态)that held me back.Manhattan is a walking town and its difficult to19when you have a disability. Taxis are expensive and riding the subway20dozens of steep steps to get below21. This left m

30、e only one22the bus.One night, after the23for my job, I was aching with self-pity24it started to rain on my walk to the bus stop. I became more and more25without an umbrella, thinking Id never26it in this city and telling myself, “This city is just too hard.” and “Maybe it is just not possible for a

31、 guy like me.”And then, I27the most beautiful, short moment. A couple came rolling by on roller skates, hand28hand as they were skating what seemed like the tango. They were all wet but they saw the29as an opportunity and romance.I suddenly became30for waiting in the rain because I would have missed

32、 this beauty31if I had been in a taxi or on the subway. This, although32, was an important moment on my journey to discovering the33of achieving health and happiness. When I change my mindset,34for a moment, to what is possible and work to get rid of the self-limiting beliefs that35my daily actions,

33、 I will be on the road to a healthier, happier life.16.A.adjustmentB.achievementC.agreementD.treatment17.A.tiringB.boringC.relaxingD.disappointing18.A.remindedB.expectedC.tookD.left19.A.go upB.get aroundC.set offD.show up20.A.requestsB.acquiresC.requiresD.surrounds21.A.groundB.streetC.townD.city22.A

34、.changeB.chanceC.ideaD.choice23.A.struggleB.workC.experienceD.influence24.A.beforeB.whileC.whenD.after25.A.nervousB.curiousC.scaredD.upset26.A.getB.makeC.putD.watch27.A.recalledB.observedC.witnessedD.realized28.A.onB.byC.toD.in29.A.rainB.treeC.windD.cloud30.A.surprisedB.gratefulC.consciousD.excited3

35、1.A.exactlyB.instantlyC.entirelyD.suddenly32.A.strangeB.smallC.normalD.different33.A.humorB.honestyC.powerD.principle34.A.stillB.yetC.alsoD.even35.A.affectB.followC.forbidD.harm第二节(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。For 28-year-old Russian Artem Zhdanov, China is a place to fulf

36、ill dreams. After graduating from college with a major in Chinese, he left his hometown in Siberia 36(he) and moved to Guangzhou, Chinas southern economic powerhouse.He37(build) a Russian-language news website about China in recent years, founded a consulting company and set up38online store on the

37、e-commerce platform Taobao. The news website now has a 39(month) visit of 100,000, and the products he sells onlinesuch as T-shirts, cups and chopsticks with catchy Chinese phraseshave become popular with foreigners 40live in China.“My childhood dream41(be) to be a diplomat(外交家). Now my website and

38、Taobao store42(connect) foreigners with China are like bridges,” he said. “China is a good place to start a business. As long as you have an idea and the courage, you can43(easy) build a business here,” he said.Zhdanov wants to connect Russian businessmen with investors in China. “China has more uni

39、corn (独角兽) companies 44many other countries. And the government has provided great support for high-tech development. I would like to tell more Russians that instead of only looking at Silicon Valley, they can also come to China45(realize) their dreams.”36. 37. 38. 39. 40.41. 42. 43. 44. 45.第三部分写作(共

40、两节,满分40分)第一节应用文写作(满分15分)假定你叫李华,是一名高中生,你校校园网需要招收一名英文编辑。请根据以下提示,用英语向外教主编Chris申请这一职位。1.关心时事(current affairs),对新闻工作(journalism)感兴趣;2.有做校刊记者的工作经历;3.擅长英语,曾获英语写作大赛一等奖。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语和结尾语已写好,不计入总词数。Dear Chris,Yours,Li Hua第二节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Now, parents an

41、d students separate into two groups. You will be reunited at the end of the campus tour.”Groups of incoming freshmen happily left their parents upon hearing this announcement. I was less than thrilled about starting college, let alone leaving my mothers side to tour the campus with other freshmen; I

42、 felt a little anxious.We followed the senior tour guide. The other freshmen chatted and made casual introductions as I dragged behind. How could I have believed I was ready for this? After all, it had only been a few months since I left the hospital. I was feeling better for the first time in years

43、. But college.?My thinking was interrupted by a sweet female voice,“Hi, Im Jennifer.” “Im Lauren,” I replied.“Where do you prefer to live? At home or on campus?” she smiled.“Im not sure,” I said.“You should live on campus! It will be a lot of fun!” she said. Before I could reply, the tour guide anno

44、unced that it was time to create our schedules and select the courses we wanted to take.We crowded into the Student Activity Center. Three seniors handed out thick course bulletins (课程公告) and forms that needed to be filled out. All around me, the sounds of turning papers and writing sounded like tho

45、se given by an alarm clock. Others seemed to be moving through the process quickly but I hadnt even opened my course catalog(目录).“Focus,” I told myself. “Just read through the catalog and find the courses you like and a schedule that works.” Psychology A or B, Geology 101, English, History, sections

46、 1, 2, 3. The list went on and on.I panicked and almost started to cry. How was I supposed to know how to complete it? I was just relearning how to live in the real world, and they wanted me to make a schedule. How I wished someone could help me.注意:续写词数应为150左右。Paragraph 1:Soon, other freshmen were h

47、anding in their forms._Paragraph 2:Then, I felt a warm hand on my shoulder._附加题短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Last summer, I spend two

48、 weeks at a summer camp in England. Summer camps are high popular and a lot of teenager usually go camping every year. It was my first time, and I thought it was amazing. I stayed in a little wooden house with four another kids. We took part in lots of interested outdoor and social activities. I too

49、k my computer and camera to me, and sent photos back to my parents. At the camp I spoke English all time and I also practiced read signs. So my English is quite good now. I was sad to leaving the camp because of it was a really special holiday.单元达标检测1.A2.D3.C4.B5.A6.B7.D8.C9.A10.B11.C12.E13.A14.G15.

50、B16.B17.A18.D19.B20.C21.A22.D23.A24.C25.D26.B27.C28.D29.A30.B31.C32.B33.C34.D35.A第一部分阅读理解第一节A语篇解读本文是一篇说明文,向我们介绍了历史上一些非常有影响力的记者。1.A细节理解题。根据第二段倒数第二句He was found not guilty, since what he wrote was based on the truth.可知,因为他所写的内容都是基于事实的,所以他无罪。2.D推理判断题。根据第三段第二句But many people dont realize that the invent

51、or and Founding Father was also a journalist.可知,很多人并不太了解富兰克林原来还是一名记者。由此推断富兰克林最令人惊讶的是他的记者身份。3.C推理判断题。根据第四段最后一句中的that used eye-catching headlines to draw the attention of readers可知,“黄色新闻”是指用一些小伎俩来吸引读者的新闻报道,比如吸引人眼球的大字标题等。B语篇解读本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述作者在接受主编布置的稿件创作任务的过程中对友谊的思考。通过反思,作者认识到自己逐渐失去朋友并决定做出改变。4.B推理判断题。

52、根据第一段第三句Seeing that, I couldnt help thinking, “Excuse me? I have plenty of friends.”可推断,当主编让作者写一篇关于没有朋友的中年人的文章时,作者感到惊讶、怀疑,故B项正确。文中并未体现作者对这一话题感兴趣,故A项错误;由Excuse me?可知作者心怀疑问,并不确定主编是在开玩笑,故C项错误;觉得这一话题非常切合自己是在文章最后作者通过反思后发现的,而不是一开始作者看到这个选题时的想法,故D项错误。5.A细节理解题。根据第三段最后一句中的I realized that it had been years sin

53、ce I saw many of them, even decades for a few及第四段开头By the time I got back to.for this story可知,作者意识到他已经失去了一些最好的朋友,故A项正确。B:他不受其他人欢迎;C:他的一生中有亲密的友谊;D:他没有交过任何真正的朋友,均不正确。6.B细节理解题。由第三段第一句中的we followed one another via social media可知作者通过社交媒体(即互联网)与朋友保持联系,故B正确。7.D推理判断题。由最后一段中的.I realized that in the long term

54、, I was heading down a path that was very, very dangerous. And I knew I needed a change.可以推断作者认识到了友谊的重要性。故D正确。A:作者是位好作家;B:作者喜欢交新朋友;C:其他人比作者有更多的朋友,均不正确。【高频词汇】1.cant help doing 禁不住做;不禁做2.sort n.种类,品种 v.把分类,整理3.have a.impact on.对有影响4.a distance of.的距离5.take stock of(对某情况)加以总结/进行反思6.hang out闲逛; 逗留; 晾晒(洗

55、好的衣物)7.decade n.十年;十年期8.in the long term 从长远来看原句Then the editor told me there were all sorts of evidence out there to show how men, as they age, let their close friendships go, and that the fact can cause all sorts of problems and have a terrible impact on their health.分析这是一个主从复合句。there were.on thei

56、r health为省略了that的宾语从句。在这个宾语从句中,to show.为不定式短语作定语,修饰evidence;show后为and连接的两个宾语从句,分别由how和that引导,作show的宾语,其中as引导时间状语从句,表示“随着”。句意然后主编告诉我有各种各样的证据显示男人怎样随着年龄的增长而放弃了他们亲密的友谊,以及这个事实会导致各种各样的问题,并对他们的健康有可怕的影响。C语篇解读本文是一篇说明文,文章解释了为什么近年来美国人对新闻媒体的信任度如此低。8.C推理判断题。根据第二段内容,特别是While ideally the media should be objective

57、and hold power to account, in reality we know that most news outlets belong to a certain party and have their own agenda to advance.可知,理想中的媒体应该是客观的,但现实中却不是这样,它属于某个政党,有自己的议事表要推进。由此推知,媒体充当了掩盖事实的工具。9.A推理判断题。根据文章内容可知,文章第一段提出问题对新闻媒体持消极态度的人比持积极态度的人要多,他们认为越来越难判断哪条新闻是准确的;第二、三段介绍了新闻媒体已经沦为掩盖事实的工具以及人们对新闻媒体失去信任

58、的原因;第四段总结全文,指出怀疑精神对我们认识世界的真相是有好处的。由此可知文章采用了总分总的结构。10.B主旨大意题。通读全文,特别是根据第三段中的So why is trust in the media so low?可知,本文主要介绍了为什么人们对媒体的信任度下降了并如此之低。第二节语篇解读本文是一篇说明文,主要介绍了如何做博客以及如何宣传博客。11.C本段作为文章首段,主要阐述做好博客的重要性。C项意为“事实上,这其中的关键是高效地写博客。”,句子中的this指前句中的make the best of your blog。空后的By doing so中的so指的就是C项中的blog e

59、ffectively。C项符合语境,故正确。12.E本段介绍第一条建议经常更新博客。E项意为“为得到最好的结果,要经常在你的博客上发帖。”,符合段落主旨,且其中的regularly与空前句的frequently、空后句的Continue相呼应,构成近义衔接,故可判断E正确。 13.A本空作为本段的中心句要概括全段内容。由本段中的your own look、your taste并综合本段其他内容可知。本段主要讲的是你的博客要有自己的风格,A项(使你的博客与众不同)符合此主旨。故选A。易错提醒:F项中的Another important thing貌似与上一段的段首The first step 衔

60、接顺畅,实则不然,F项意为“另一件重要的事情是让你的博客看起来更漂亮。”与本段中的your own look(强调有自己的风格)不是一回事,F项不能概括全段内容,故错误。14.G本段的主旨是建议增加博客中的链接来扩大自己博客的知名度。 G项意为“这是另一个给你的博客做宣传的好办法。”,其中This指空前句中的exchanging links with authority blogs,前后句语意衔接紧密,故正确。 易错提醒:D项意为“同时,当心恶意链接。”,内容与本段主旨无关,故错误。15.BB项意为“这种情况越多越好。”,其中的this case指空前句中的get more links to

61、it(获得更多链接),由此可知B项与语境吻合,故正确。【高频词汇】1.promote v.促销;提升2.attract v.吸引3.adjust v.调整;调节;适应4.link n.链接;联系 v.把联系起来5.post v.张贴;发帖;邮递 n.帖子;职位;邮递第二部分语言运用第一节语篇解读本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了作者在工作、生活不顺时人也变得消极,最后因雨中等车时被一对夫妇溜冰的场面震撼,最终改变心态的故事。生活就是这样,当你只沉湎于痛苦,你的内心也是灰暗的;而当你改变了心态,阳光就会照进你的心里。16.B根据第一段中的I managed to get my dream job可知,作者

62、毕业找到了自己理想的工作,可知这份工作是作者引以为傲的一个成就(achievement)。17.A根据本句中的I must stand in a crowd every day可知,这份工作是非常累人的(tiring)。18.D作者每天都必须站在人群中,这常常让作者有想退缩的心态。“leave+sb.+宾补”意为“让某人”。19.B结合语境可知,身有残疾的话很难四处走动。get around意为“四处走动”,符合语境。20.C句意:出租车很贵,乘坐地铁需要(requires)走几十个很陡的台阶才能到达地下。21.A根据本句中的the subway以及常识可知,乘坐地铁应去地下,ground符合

63、题意。22.D根据上文提到其他交通工具的弊端可知,此处表示作者只剩乘公交车这一种选择(choice)。23.A根据上下文可知,经过了一天辛苦的工作,作者开始自怨自艾。struggle意为“奋斗,挣扎”,用来形容工作辛苦较恰当。24.C根据be doing sth. when.可知答案。when在此处意为“就在那时”。25.D下雨天没有雨伞让作者心情沮丧(upset)。26.Bmake it为固定用法,意为“达成目标”。那天作者在自怨自艾且下雨没有雨伞,想着自己在这个城市怕是要一事无成。27.C根据下文描绘的一对夫妇的画面可知,作者目睹了(witnessed)最美丽的短暂时刻。28.D一对夫妇穿

64、着溜冰鞋,手拉着手(hand in hand),他们溜冰的时候像是在跳探戈舞。29.A根据上文提到下起了雨可知,这对夫妇把雨(rain)当成一种机会和浪漫。30.B根据下文可知,作者很感谢这一场大雨,作者觉得,如果自己打车或者坐了地铁,都会错过这样的美景。grateful意为“感激的”。31.C根据上下文可知如果作者在出租车或地铁上,作者会完全(entirely)错过这样的美丽时刻。exactly正是,恰好;instantly立即,马上;suddenly突然。32.B尽管这一刻看着很渺小(small),但这是作者在获得健康和幸福的过程中所经历的一个重要时刻。strange奇怪的,陌生的;nor

65、mal正常的;different不同的。33.C根据语境可知作者看到的这一幕给了作者力量。humor幽默;honesty诚实,正直;power力量;principle原则。34.D当作者改变自己的心态,即使(even)只有片刻,去做可能的事情,并且努力摆脱那些影响日常行为的自我限制的想法,作者都将会走上一条更健康、更快乐的生活之路。35.A根据语境可知这样的一种心态会影响(affect)作者的日常行为。第二节语篇解读本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了一个俄罗斯人在中国成功创办了新闻网站,创立了咨询公司,并开了一家淘宝网店的故事。36.himself考查反身代词。分析句子可知,本句主语为he,故可知空

66、格处作同位语,他自己离开了家乡,故填反身代词himself。37.has built考查动词时态。根据时间状语in recent years可知,此处用现在完成时。故填has built。38.an考查冠词。store为可数名词,第一次提及,用不定冠词,指一家网店。online是元音音素开头的单词,故填an。39.monthly考查词性转换。修饰名词visit用形容词形式,故填monthly。40.who/that考查定语从句。分析句子可知,40live in China为定语从句,修饰先行词foreigners,从句缺少主语,故用关系代词who或者that。41.was考查动词时态。分析句子

67、可知,本句缺少谓语,陈述过去的事情,所以用一般过去时。故填was。42.connecting考查非谓语动词。分析句子可知,connect与其逻辑主语my website and Taobao store为主动关系,故用现在分词,故填connecting。43.easily考查词性转换。修饰动词build用副词形式,故填easily。44.than考查介词。由本句中的more可知此处用到了比较级,故填than。45.to realize考查非谓语动词。此处指不要只盯着硅谷,来中国也可以实现梦想。分析句子可知,设空处作目的状语,故填不定式to realize。第三部分写作第一节应用文写作One p

68、ossible version:Dear Chris,Im Li Hua, a senior high school student. I happened to see the advertisement that our website is looking for an English editor. Im writing to apply for this position.First of all, not only am I enthusiastic about current affairs, but I also take a great interest in journal

69、ism. And I think I can do the job well due to my language skills. Whats more, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better. More importantly, I have a good command of English. I won first prize in the English Writing Competition in our school

70、.In conclusion, Im convinced that I am qualified for the job and looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua第二节读后续写写作指导故事要素Timeprobably the first day of college life when I was just relearning how to live in the real world after years of illnessPlacecampus, Student Activity CenterCharacterother

71、 freshmen, a senior tour guide, Jennifer, three seniors, meReasonI panicked because of failing to choose my courses.情节Paragraphs 1,2 and 3:生病多年,大学校园第一天,其他新生高高兴兴与父母分开游览校园,而我跟在后面,一点都不兴奋,反而有点紧张。Paragraph 4:珍妮弗出现,与我热情聊天,并就大学是否住校问题提出建议。Paragraphs 5, 6 and 7:在学生活动中心,三个高年级学生分发课程公告,要我们选课填表。我只听见嘈杂的人声,虽然想强迫自己

72、专心填表,但仍不能完成,最后惊慌失措,快要哭泣。我渴望有人帮忙。续写方向Para.1Soon, other freshmen were handing in their forms.看到其他人交表“我”会怎么样?其他人会有什么反应?由最后一段的“panicked and almost started to cry”和最后一句“How I wished someone could help me.”推测会不会有人帮“我”?Para. 2 Then, I felt a warm hand on my shoulder. 根据第四段中形容珍妮弗声音的“sweet”、珍妮弗热心提出住校建议的表现以及本

73、段所给第一句中的“warm hand”可以判断是珍妮弗来帮忙。珍妮弗会如何帮“我”?由形容珍妮弗声音的词“sweet”可知珍妮弗在和“我”对话时会比较热情、有耐心。“我”和珍妮弗的关系会如何发展?One possible version:Paragraph 1:Soon, other freshmen were handing in their forms. Many of them rushed out to meet their parents. I couldnt breathe and was feeling anxious. My head was aching. Moments l

74、ater, I was crying. And several students started to stared at me. One of the seniors walked over to my table. “Whats the matter?” she asked impatiently. “I.I cant do this!” I said. “All you have to do is to make your schedule, just like everybody else,” she said, with coldness and annoyance in her v

75、oice.Paragraph 2:Then, I felt a warm hand on my shoulder. I looked back and found Jennifer standing behind me. “Everything is all right,” she told the senior. “ Ill help her.” The senior walked away. “Whats wrong, sweetie?” Jennifer asked. Hearing Jennifers kind words, I cried even harder, saying, “

76、Its just too much!” Then Jennifer put her arm around me and said, “Let me instruct you.” She then guided me through the process step by step until my form was completed. Later, when saying goodbye, we made a promise to keep in touch.附加题短文改错1.第一句:spendspent根据时间状语Last summer判断句子应该用一般过去时,讲述去年夏天的经历。故把sp

77、end改为spent。2.第二句:highhighly修饰形容词popular应该用副词形式,highly意为“非常”,而high作为副词意为“高”,指具体的高度。故把high改为highly。3.第二句:teenagerteenagers因为teenager 是可数名词,又有a lot of修饰,所以用复数形式,指很多青少年。 故把teenager改为teenagers。4.第四句:anotherother固定用法“数字+other+复数名词”意为“其他几个”。故把another改为other。5.第五句:interestedinteresting描述事物应该用以-ing结尾的形容词,如果指

78、人的内心感受则用以-ed结尾的形容词。此处指户外活动有趣,故把interested改为interesting。6.第六句:towith固定搭配take sth. with sb.意为“某人随身带着某物”。此处指作者随身带了电脑和相机。 7.第七句:在all后面加the固定短语all the time意为“一直”。故在all后面加the。8.第七句:readreading固定搭配practice doing sth. 意为“练习做某事”。 9.第九句:leavingleave在描述情感的形容词后往往跟不定式表示原因。be sad to do sth.做某事很伤心。故把leaving改为leave。10.第九句:去掉ofbecause of后面应该跟名词、代词或动名词。而本句中because后面it was.holiday是句子,所以把because 后面的of去掉。