2020版高考英语大二轮专题复习新方略专练：专题六 写作规范练（三） WORD版含解析 (2).doc

1、写作规范练(三)(限时：35分钟)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。2019潍坊高考模拟Im delight to welcome you to our Wildlife

2、 Club. Youll be surprised that a various of plants and creatures are living here. Here are the most visited tourist sites. One of the pleasant place is Holland Common. This has been public land for two hundred of years, and that youll find interesting is that the River Ouse has its source in the Com

3、mon. Theres information board about the plants and animals and the Common is accessibly 24 hours a day. Then there is Holl Island which was noted for its great range of trees. It is open only from Friday to Sunday because its quite small, but if there were people around every day, many of the wildli

4、fe would keep away. Have a good time here!答案与解析：Im to welcome you to our Wildlife Club. Youll be surprised that a of plants and creatures are living here. Here are the most visited tourist sites. One of the pleasant is Holland Common. This has been public land for two hundred of years, and youll fin

5、d interesting is that the River Ouse has its source in the Common. Theres information board about the plants and animals and the Common is 24 hours a day. Then there is Holl Island which noted for its great range of trees. It is open only from Friday to Sunday because its quite small, if there were

6、people around every day, of the wildlife would keep away. Have a good time here!delight改为delighted此处形容主语I的感受，修饰人应该用ed形式的形容词delighted，故将delight改为delighted。various改为varietya variety ofvarious，意为“各种各样的”，修饰名词plants，故将various改为variety。place改为places“one of the可数名词复数”为固定搭配，表示“之一”，故将place改为places。删除ofhundre

7、d, thousand, million等前有基数词限定时，不用介词of，故删除of。that改为what分析句子结构可知，此处引导主语从句，从句中缺少find的宾语，应用what来引导，故将that改为what。在information前加anboard意为“公告板”，为可数名词，此处泛指“一个信息公告板”，应用不定冠词修饰，且information的发音是以元音音素开头，故在information前加an。accessibly改为accessible此处作系动词is的表语，表示主语的状态或特征，应用形容词，故将accessibly改为accessible。was改为is根据语境和全文时态可

8、知，此处应用一般现在时，故将was改为is。but改为and前面提到“因为它很小，所以它只有星期五至星期日开放”，后面提到“如果每天都有人在附近的话，很多野生生物将会离开”。前后都表示限制开放时间的原因，所以两个分句之间应为顺承关系，并非转折关系，故将but改为and。many改为muchwildlife是不可数名词，不能用many修饰，可用much修饰，故将many改为much。第二节书面表达(满分25分)2019黑龙江六校协作体一模假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter下个月要来你校进行短期游学，因此他发邮件询问你该如何准备。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示欢迎； 2.从衣、食、住、

9、行四个方面给出建议。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考范文：Dear Peter， Im happy to learn that you will come to my school to study Chinese next month. Id like to express my sincere welcome. Herere some suggestions. First, it is neither too hot nor too cold in the city where I live at that time. Bringing some light

10、summer clothes will do. As for eating, people here are used to using chopsticks when they have a meal. It will be helpful if you have some practice ahead of time. Besides, to have a better knowledge of Chinese culture, I strongly recommend you to live with a Chinese family. Finally, it is convenient to use public transport in this city. Dont worry about it. Im looking forward to your arrival.Yours，Li Hua