2020-2021学年九年级英语上学期期中复习 考点06 书面表达专练（含解析）.doc

1、期中复习考点06. 书面表达一如何写建议类作文四步法写出给建议的短文1首先要知道给出建议的格式：常用书信格式。2然后写出提建议的原因。3最后根据具体的情况给出明确的建议。4写出希望。【典例】假如你是李华，你的朋友小明在学习英语时遇到了一些困难：1. 记单词很难；2. 非常害羞，不敢说英语，害怕犯错误。请你给他写封email，提出一些帮他克服困难的建议。【参考词汇和句式】单词problem, advice, should, improve短语pay attention to, be afraid of句式You should DontWhy not do?_二介绍节日的作文模板How are y

2、ou? Im really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. Id like to introduce _（节日名） to you. _（节日名） is _(重要性) important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for _（持续时间）.Day

3、s before the festival, people _（节日活动一）. They _（节日活动二）. On the eve of the festival, _（节日活动三）. Then _（节日活动四）. (节日传统一、节日传统二) How happy we are.假如你叫王雷，请给你的笔友Lucy写封信，介绍一下你最喜欢的节日春节。注意书信的格式。（80词左右）要点：1. When is Spring Festival?2. When do people eat?3. What do people do?4. Why do you like it so much?【写作方法】总分

4、总法写介绍节日的文章1. 总体介绍某一节日。2. 具体介绍与这一节日相关的活动等内容。3. 总结全文并谈谈感受。【参考词汇和句式】单词relative, present, earn短语lucky money, ask sb. to do sth., give back to句式if引导的条件状语从句 _ 三如何写好人物描写类文章写好人物描写类文章的三点建议：1. 写人重写外貌特征。2. 一般用第一或第三人称写，时态一般用一般现在时。3. 要抓住所描写人物的典型特征和与众不同之处。写好物品描写类文章的三点建议：1. 抓住特点，注重顺序2. 一般用第三人称写，时态一般用一般现在时。3. 要抓住所描

5、写物品的典型特征（外观、用处、产地等）和与众不同之处。【常用表达】关于人物描写的英语作文素材1. 描述人物心情的常用词语：sad 难过的 happy 高兴的excited 兴奋的 pleased 高兴的satisfied 满意的 angry 生气的worried 担心的 disappointed 失望的terrified 恐惧的 friendly 友好的anxious 焦虑的 curious 好奇的eager 急切的2. 表达人物兴趣和爱好的常用词组或短语：like very much 非常喜欢 love 喜爱be interested in 对感性趣 be fond of 喜欢hate 憎恨

6、 be tired of 对厌倦be crazy about 对极度喜欢 enjoy 喜欢lose interest in 对失去兴趣3. 描写人物外貌和性格特征的常用词语：good-looking 长得好看的 ugly-looking 长得难看的funny-looking 长相滑稽的 ordinary-looking 长相一般的white-haired 白头发的 warm-hearted 热心肠的kind-hearted 好心的 absent-minded 心不在焉的bad-tempered 脾气不好的 near-sighted 近视眼的far-sighted 远视眼的 tall 个高的sh

7、ort 个矮的 pretty 漂亮的naughty 淘气的 lovely 可爱的easy-going 温和宽容的 smart 精明的wise 明智的 bright 聪明的diligent 勤奋的 lazy 懒惰的clever 聪明的 healthy 健康的humorous 幽默的 funny 滑稽的silent 沉默的 attractive 有吸引力的talkative 多话的4. 介绍人物的姓名、出身：She was born in Beijing on Oct. 12, 1986.She was a great woman with the name.Born of a poor cler

8、ks family, she had little schooling.假如你在奥运会期间碰到外国朋友，请你介绍进入NBA美国球队的中国球员易建联的情况。要求：1. 主题鲜明、语句通顺、意思连贯、适当发挥、拼写正确、书写工整。2. 词数80左右。易建联 生日 1987. 10. 27 出生地 广东 身高 2.12米经历 2003年他成为大学生 2000年1月入选中国国家篮球队 2007年7月进入美国NBA，继姚明后的第二个中国球员 爱好 他喜欢听流行音乐、玩电脑。 其他 现在还在努力学习英语。【参考词汇】单词famous, player, choose, college短语be born on

9、, in ones spare time, pop music, try ones best, National Basketball Team_四如何写好今昔对比类作文写好今昔对比类作文的三点建议1. 一定要把握时态的运用，时态通常是一般现在时和一般过去时。2. 写作格式：提出主题句对过去情况的描述对现在情况的描述总结句。或者对今昔进行逐条对比。3. 找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点【写作技巧】对比描述法写事物变化的短文对比描述法即常从一个或几个方面对同一事物的过去和现在的区别等进行对比。【常用句型】(1).used to., but now.过去常，但是现在(2).in the past,

10、but now.在过去，但是现在(3)once., but now.曾经，但是现在(4)Things are different now.情况已大不同了。(5)But now, everything has changed.但是现在全变了。联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员，请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1. 大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2. 变化：过去很穷，最近变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3. 教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。要求：1. 要点齐

11、全，前后连贯。2. 词数：100120之间。Ladies and gentlemen,_五如何写好物品描写类文章【写作技巧】三步法介绍你所喜欢的物品的文章一、首先介绍喜欢的物品是什么二、然后具体介绍此物品的相关信息(如：材料、产地等)三、总结收尾一种名为丽影的数码（digital）照相机，现准备打入国际市场，请你用英语为该产品写一份广告推荐书。相关资料：产地：中国上海。生产厂家：乐达照相机厂（生产相机史50余年）。性能特点：款式新颖、多样；体积小，重量轻，操作方便，可作多用途。价格：是同类新产品价格的70%。注意：1. 本题是写一篇新产品介绍的推荐书。 2. 词数80左右。备注：介绍是一种说明

12、书，也是一种常见的应用文。产品介绍除了说明性和广告性外还应有较强的推荐性。语言要简练，有吸引力和趣味性。要突出写产品的特色和优点。_六根据要求完成大作文，词数：80词左右。现在的科技日新月异，各种发明以及高科技产品成为了我们生活中不可缺少的东西，如电脑、笔记本电脑(laptop)、手机(mobile phone)、MP4、数码相机(digital camera)、数码摄影机(DV)等。请以My Favorite Invention为题描述你最喜欢的一种发明，并说明理由(理由至少有两个方面)。_七随着手机功能日益增多，越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动，成为手机控一族。假定你是某校学生，请根据以

13、下提示写一篇短文，向某英文报社投稿，谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议。手机控的表现沉迷于手机娱乐活动（聊天、看电影等），与朋友和家人的交流减少，离开手机会有焦虑症等异常情绪表现手机控的危害对健康不利，影响学习你的建议注意：1. 内容须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；3. 90个单词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：手机控a phone freak 焦虑anxious(adj.) 沉迷于be addicted to【解题思路】第一步：判断主题对手机控一族的看法。第二步：定时态一般现在时；定人称第三人称为主，第一人称为辅。第三步：列提纲：(1) 手机控的

14、表现沉迷于手机娱乐活动（聊天、看电影等），与朋友和家人的交流减少，离开手机会有焦虑症等异常情绪表现等；(2)手机控的危害对健康不利，影响学习等；(3) 你的建议（一至两条）。第四步：组句成篇。Today, many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. They _八我国有很多的传统节日, 假如你最喜欢的节日是端午节，请以“My favorite Chinese festival”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。要求：1.紧扣主题、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；My favorite Chinese festivalMy fav

15、orite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival._九提示：你的初中生活即将结束，结束也意味着成长，在你的成长过程中，一定有什么东西起到了重要的作用。请以“.Makes Me Grow up”为题用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的想法。要求：1. 请将短文题目补充完整； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。.Makes Me Grow up_2020-2021学年人教新目标版初三英语上册期中复习考点06. 书面表达（答案解析）一如何写建议类作文【参考范文】Dear Xiaoming,

16、 I am sorry to hear that you have some problems. Now I give you some advice. I think you should memorize words by using them. And you should pay attention to having conversations with your partners. You can make complete sentences with the words you have learnt. And you should get much spoken Englis

17、h practice. Its a good way to join an English club. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Try to get over the problem of shyness. And answer questions in class actively. You are hard-working, and I believe you can improve your English. Good luck! Yours, Li Hua二介绍节日的作文模板 【参考范文】Spring Festival begins on

18、the first day of the first month.Spring Festival is an excellent day for every Chinese, especially for children. During the festival, relatives go to visit each other and give presents to each other. Then its the happy moment for children, children are given some lucky money. But Im not a child any

19、longer. I want to make the festival a little bit different. I plan to have a different day. Im going to sell some toys in the flower market. I will ask my friends to join me. If I earn some money, Ill buy some presents for my parents. Well, its my turn to give back to my parents for their love.三如何写好

20、人物描写类文章【参考范文】Yi Jianlian, a famous basketball player, is from Guangdong, China. He was born on October 27th.1987. He is 2.12 meters tall. This handsome boy became a college student in 2003. He was chosen to play for the National Basketball Team in January, 2004. This young man is the second Chinese

21、player in NBA after Yao Ming. In his spare time, he likes listening to pop music and playing computer games. Now he is trying his best to learn English well.四如何写好今昔对比类作文【参考范文】This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor.However, it has

22、changed a lot recently and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before. Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building w

23、hich has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the schoolage children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here!五如何写好物品描写类文章【参考范文】Come to buy this wonderful camera. The Liying Digital Camera is a newcomer in the camera family. It is made in

24、 Shanghai, China, by Leda Camera Factory, which has been making cameras for 50 years and enjoys rich experience and good fame for its high quality. Liying Camera attracts people by its modern and various models and also, it is small in size and light in weight, so youll feel it very convenient and e

25、asy to use. Whats more, it can be used for different purposes, for example, you can use it for art or for ordinary life purpose. As for the price, it is surprisingly low. It costs only 70% of that of the same kind of other cameras. Why wait?六【参考范文】My Favorite InventionAmong all the modern inventions

26、, the laptop is my favorite one. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21st century. Laptops are light and small. They are easy to carry. With a laptop, we can work, study and entertain everywhere. A laptop can get to the Internet outside, which enables us to get the latest information whe

27、never we want. Using a laptop, I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mails and QQ at any time and in any place. I think in the future, everybody will have his or her own laptop.七【参考范文】Today, many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. They are addicted to playing mobil

28、e phones. They often use phones to chat with others, watch movies, play games, listen to music or take photos and so on. In fact, they will be anxious without phones. However, it does harm to their study. Because they spend too much time playing with phones. They cant have a good rest. They dont hav

29、e time to do their homework. They cant get good grades. In my opinion, we must use it in a right way. If we take it to school, we mustnt use it during the class. And remember that study is our first work.八【参考范文】My favorite Chinese festivalMy favorite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival.It f

30、alls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. Its a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet.On this day people usually eatzongziand hold dragon boat races. They also drink realgar wine, hang Chinese mugwort around the doors and carry a spice bag around with them.What makes the festival sp

31、ecial for me is the dragon boat race. The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit everybody tries their best to win the race.九【参考范文】Friendship Makes Me Grow up I have studied in this school for three years and have a lot of friends. Li Ming is my best friend and he is quite diffe

32、rent from others. He is not only easygoing but also one of the best students in our class. He often helps me with my lessons. When I am in trouble, he always encourages me to face difficulties and gives me good advice. With his help, I have made great progress in my lessons. Im very thankful for all that he has done for me. I think its he who makes me grow up.