Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年高一英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019必修第三册）.docx

1、必修第三册Unit 1单元写作指导与演练A narrative essay about a festival or celebration experience单元写作早知道写作任务本单元的写作任务为介绍庆祝节日的经历。中国传统节日，形式多样、内容丰富，是中华民族悠久的历史文化的重要组成部分。传统节日既使人们在节日中增长知识，又受到教义，又有助于彰显文化、弘扬美德、陶冶情操等。传统节日是传统文化的展示，近年来，高考英语命题上增加了中华优秀传统文化的考核内容。常用表达1. the Spring Festival春节 2. Mid-Autumn Festival 中秋节3. Thanksgivin

2、g Day感恩节 4. National Day 国庆节5. dress up 盛装；打扮 6. take place发生7. catch sight of 看见;瞥见 8. get together 聚会;联欢9. in memory of为了纪念 10. turn up 出现；到场11. in the hope of doing sth.希望做某事 12. be satisfied with对.满意13. originate from 起源于. 14. it is thought that人们认为15.lunar calendar 农历 16. lunar January 正月17.New

3、 Years Eve除夕 18. the beginning of New Year初一19.The Lantern Festival元宵节 20. celebrate the Spring Festival过年21. poetic couplet对联 22. Spring Festival couplets春联23. paper-cuts剪纸 24. New Year paintings年画25. do Spring Festival shopping买年货 26. propose a toast 敬酒27. lion dance舞狮 28. dragon dance舞龙29. tradit

4、ional opera戏曲 30. exhibit of lanterns灯会单元话题真题展示高考链接中国传统文化2021年全国甲卷为了更好地体现作文的交际性，第一段可以简单问候友人，然后再表明自己的目的；而在最后一段不妨补充对友人帮助的认可和对其所提建议的期待。Use what you have learned to write an article about traditional Chinese festivals. 假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示，请你给外国朋友Chris写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容如下：1. 阐明写信

5、事由；2. 征求建议；3. 表达感谢。注意:1. 词数 100 左右2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。应用文的选题一般贴近学生生活，内容积极向上，目的旨在用英语讲好中国故事，用英语与外国友人互动交流，在交流互动中增强文化自信，培养爱国情怀，扩展国际视野。写作时要注意以下几点:1.开篇点题在写作的一开始，就要点明所介绍的节日。2.内容丰富这一部分要联系实际，想一想我们在庆祝节日时的具体时间、具体活动、和谁一起庆祝等。3.结尾精炼结尾可用再次点题的方式，如强调庆祝节日的意义，或者按照写作要求进行收尾。【“四审”审题建模】审体裁：求助信，书信格式。审人称：第一、三人称。（写信人和收信人之间是朋友关

6、系，那么信中的语言既要体现对收信人的尊重，又要体现与对方的友好关系。所以在征求建议时，要保证语言的得体性。)审内容：要点1“阐明写信事由”，明确写信背景“学校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示”。要点2“征求建议”为主要内容，应详写。可以用举例子的方式，如民乐、武术、剪纸、中国结等。要点3简写，“表达感谢”的口吻要真挚，以体现你的感谢和期望。开头常用句式1. The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the four traditional festivals in China.中秋节是我国四大传统节日之一。2.The Spring Festival

7、 is Chinas traditional culture, which has a long history.春节是我国的传统节日，它有着悠久的历史。3. Im happy to introduce the Lantern Festival to you.我很高兴给你介绍元宵节。主体段落常用句式1. The Spring Festival is a festive time, especially for children.春节是个欢快的时光，对孩子们来说尤其如此。2. It can show peoples happiness, their feelings and the festiv

8、e mood.它可以展示人们快乐、热情的节日气氛。3. In winter, fairy lights, powered by a generator, give it a festive glow.在冬季，车站内的装饰彩灯则由一台发电机供电，为车站增添了节日的气氛。4. We celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival by eating zongzi.我们吃粽子庆祝端午节。5.The Chinese Spring Festival comes on the first day of the Chinese Lunar Year.中国的春节在农历新年的第一天。6.

9、Most families have a dinner together to celebrate the festival.为了庆祝这个节日，许多家庭会聚在一起吃晚餐。结尾常用句式1.Throughout continental Asia, Mid-Autumn Festival is a time for families to reunite and spend time together.在亚洲大陆的各个地方，中秋节都是一个与家人团聚及相互陪伴的节日。2.Celebrating festivals is a good way to carry on the tradition.庆祝节日

10、是传承传统的好方法。3. It is an occasion to remember ones ancestors, the sacrifices they made and the hardships they underwent.这是一个纪念祖先的时刻，为了他们所做的牺牲和他们所经历的苦难。【小试牛刀】July 4,2018Today was my first fourth of July celebration,and Ill always remember it because it was so wonderful. The fourth of July is Independenc

11、e Day in the US-the anniversary of the day the United States became its own country in1776.I began the day by packing my swimming suit and a towel. Then I went with my host family to a supermarket to load up on food and drinks. After that we were off to a friends ranch out in the country for a barbe

12、cue and pool party.It was all so amazing!While the adults cooked food on the barbecue, we played in the pool. Then we all ate and ate until we were completely stuffed. Our friends had some old ice cream churners, so after lunch we all took turns churning homemade ice cream. Since the temperature out

13、side was around 40 degrees, it seemed like the ice cream took forever! I would turn the handle on the churn until my arm was sore, and then someone else would take over. But it was all worth it because when we were finished it was the most fantastic ice cream I have ever eaten! Then, someone asked m

14、e if I would like to try horseback riding. I was afraid at first, but they gave me a very gentle horse. It was so peaceful to ride the horse through the fields and forest. Finally when it grew dark, we had a thrilling fireworks display.Now Im back home with my host family. Though Im tiredI think thi

15、s had to be the most exciting day of my life! I cant wait for next year!Festivals & Celebrations节日与庆典1.the Spring Festival/ the Lunar New Year春节2.the Lunar New Years Eve除夕 3. the Chinese Lantern Festival元宵节4.the Dragon Boat Festival 端午节5. the Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节6. the Laba Festival腊八节7.New Years

16、Day元旦8. the Qingming Festival/ Tomb Sweeping Day清明9.the Chongyang Festival/ the Double Ninth Festival重阳节10.National Day国庆节11.The Coming-of-Age Day成人节12.Halloween万圣节13.Thanksgiving Day感恩节14.Christmas圣诞节15.Easter 复活节16.Wedding/Anniversary 婚礼/纪念日17.hold a birthday party举办生日聚会18. attend a wedding ceremo

17、ny参加婚礼19. have a graduation ceremony举行毕业典礼The origins of festivals & the reasons for celebrations节日庆典的由来与缘由1. have a wide range of origins有多种多样的由来2. different customs and unique charms不同的习俗和独特的魅力3.节日+take place/fall on+时间(节日等)适逢.4.节日+be celebrated on+时间节日被庆祝在5. the religious origin宗教的起源起因6. be grate

18、ful (to sb.) for sth.因某事而感激某人7. people celebrate to show人们庆祝来展示8. play a significant role in在当中起重要作用9.节日/传统+ be established节日/传统被确立10. celebrate over a meal通过一顿饭来庆祝11.grateful for the years supply of food感谢一年的食物供应12. celebrate the new year庆祝新年13. congratulations on doing对某事表示祝贺14. get together to ce

19、lebrate+节日聚在一起庆祝 15. reflect peoples wishes, beliefs, faiths, and attitudes towards life反映了人们对生活的愿望、信仰和态度16. have a great time玩得高兴;过得愉快17. different cultures actually have a lot in common 不同的文化之间确有很多相通之处18. take advantage of the celebrations 利用这些庆祝活动19. frighten / drive away the evil spirits驱赶恶灵20.

20、feature a parade and a great feast with music以游行和音乐盛宴为特色21. allow sb. to relax and enjoy life让人放松和享受生活22. show respect to seniors向老年人表示敬意23. share joy, gratitude, love, or peace分享快乐、感激、爱或和平24. symbolize reunion, harmony and happiness象征着团聚、和谐与幸福25. be regarded as the most significant festival被认为是最重要的

21、节日26. in memory of ancestors or famous figures纪念祖先或著名人物27.in celebration of peace or the harvest of grain庆祝和平或谷物的丰收28. sweep away bad luck and get ready for the new year扫走坏运气并为新的一年做好准备29. express gratitude or love表达感激或爱意Festival customs/Celebrations activities/events节日习俗与庆典活动1. wear traditional cost

22、umes穿传统服饰2.dress up in carnival costumes穿上狂欢节服装3. visit a lantern fair 参观一个灯笼博览会4. march along the streets沿街游行5. receive congratulations from收到某人的祝贺6. guess lantern riddles 猜灯迷7. attend the ceremony出席典礼8. give performances 表演节目9. do ones hair and make-up做头发和化妆10. have a real treat for the eyes大饱眼福11

23、. have different customs and unique charms有不同的习俗和独特的魅力12. admire the shinning moon赏明月13. enjoy delicious moon cakes品尝美味月饼 14.All family members get together 所有家庭成员聚首团圆15.the dinner on the Lunar New Years Eve年夜饭16.enjoy delicious dishes品尝美味佳肴17. get lucky money in red envelopes收到红包装的压岁钱18.enjoy excit

24、ing dragon dances and carnivals 享受令人兴奋的舞龙和嘉年华19.light firecrackers to drive away the evil spirit点燃鞭炮以驱走恶灵邪祟20.take part in Easter egg hunts to find the eggs and win prizes 参加复活节寻找彩蛋活动并赢得奖品21. wish each other Merry Christmas祝彼此圣诞快乐22. look at lanterns看灯笼23. eat tangyuan/yuanxiao吃汤圆/元宵24. make zongzi/

25、dumplings包粽子/饺子25. boil dumplings煮饺子26.family get together/family reunion家人团圆27. have a family reunion dinner吃团圆饭28. watch the CCTV Spring Festival Gala 看央视春晚29. pay a New Year call拜年30. paste up Spring Festival couplets贴春联31. give children lucky money给小孩压岁钱32. set off fireworks放烟花33. decorate windo

26、ws装饰窗户34. dragon dances 舞龙35. visit relatives and friends走亲访友36. hang lanterns挂灯笼37. exchange gifts交换礼物38. sweep tombs 扫墓39. dragon boat races赛龙舟40. sing songs and dance to the music唱歌并随音乐跳舞Describe festival experience /express feelings & emotions谈论节日体验/表达感受和情绪1. help decorate the Christmas tree帮忙装饰

27、圣诞树2. put present under the tree把礼物放置在树下3. prepare for family dinner on Christmas Eve准备平安夜的家庭晚宴4. share stories and tell jokes分享故事和笑话5. play games with kids和孩子们玩游戏6. open presents拆开礼物7. It was fantastic.太棒了!8. It was great/good to spend time with my family 与家人一起共度真的很不错啊9. Im really looking forward t

28、o the next festival 我真的很期待下一个节日10. Everything was fine 一切都很好11. Enjoy the relaxing atmosphere 享受放松的气氛12. The performances were just amazing 这些表演真是太棒了一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点 ：1. 它是中国的传统节日之一；2. 家人团聚；3. 赏月、吃月饼；4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。_The Mid-Autumn FestivalThe Mid-Autumn Festival falls

29、 on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or however busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brigh

30、test in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time when we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat mooncakes and fruits, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as traveling

31、 and visiting our relatives or friends.本篇习作一方面很好的完成了写作任务，另一方面在行文过程中能够较为灵活的变换使用高中阶段的句式结构，给读者留下了深刻的印象。【积累卡片】好词：1.share 分享 2 .fall 落下;来临；变成 3.popularity流行 受欢迎。好句：1. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together.我最喜欢的是我们一起赏月的时候。好处：主语从句的正确使用。2. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we si

32、t together and eat mooncakes and fruits, sharing our stories.一轮明月挂在空中，我们坐在一起吃月饼、品水果、讲故事。好处：with结构的正确使用, share分享。The Chinese Spring Festival1.标志着冬天的结束，这个节日在传统的农历日历上庆祝新年的开始以及春季。Marking the end of winter, it is the festival that celebrates the beginning of a new year as well as the spring season on the

33、 traditional lunar calendar.2.当新年到来时，会有许多有趣的节日活动。 When the New Year comes, there are many interesting festival activities.3.大人给孩子们发“红包”一一用红色信封装的“压岁钱”。 Adults give children “lucky money” in red envelopes.4.新年里人们每次见面，都会说“新年好”或“恭喜发财”来问候家人和朋友。 People greet family and friends with “Xinnian Hao”or “Gongxi

34、 Facai whenever they may meet.5.另一个分享良好愿望的习俗是带着礼物去拜访亲戚。Another part of this custom of sharing good wishes is to pay visits to relatives and bring them gifts.6.此外，朋友和家人出门欣赏五彩缤纷的烟花，逛庙会，观看令人刺激的舞龙和舞狮。 In addition, friends and family go out to enjoy loud and colourful fireworks, spend time at temple fair

35、s, and watch exciting dragon and lion dances7.另一个重要习俗是家家户户的家门口贴上红色的对联来装饰。 Another important custom for families is to decorate their doors with red couplets.8.通常，我们在这个节日期间享用丰盛的家庭晚餐，观看舞狮和舞龙，燃放鞭炮和烟花，探望亲友，并给红包。Usually, we have a sumptuous family dinner, watch lion dances and dragon dances,light firecra

36、ckers and fireworks,visit friends and relatives and give money in red envelopes during this festival.The Chinese Lantern Festival1.元宵节在每年农历正月15日。 The Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first month of the lunar year.2.元宵节在过去曾被称为中国的情人节。这是恋人们见面的好日子。 The Lantern Festival was known as the

37、 Chinese Valentines Day in the past. It was a good day for lovers to meet.3.许多古代诗人都写了关于这个节日的诗歌，其中描述了快乐的时刻和年轻恋人的故事。 Many ancient poets wrote poems about the festival, which describe happy moments and also the stories of young lovers.Tomb Sweeping Day1.清明节通常在4月4日或5日举行，以纪念和尊重家人的祖先，当天有各种各样的活动，扫墓是最重要的。 T

38、omb Sweeping Day, meant to commemorate and pay respect to the familys ancestors, usually falls on April 4 or 5, depending on the lunar calendar.2.人们通过拜访坟墓和清扫坟墓来敬拜祖先，其中包括除草，提供食物和放鞭炮等习俗。People worship their ancestors by visiting their graves and sweeping their tombs, which involve practices like remov

39、ing weeds, offering food and setting off firecrackers.Dragon Boat Festival1.作为起源于中国的传统节日，端午节是在中国农历第五个月的第五天。As a traditional festival originating in China,the Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar.2、纪念这个节日是为了纪念屈原，他是中国古代的爱国诗人。This festival is obse

40、rved in memory of Qu Yuan, who was a patriotic poet in ancient China. The Mid-Autumn1.中秋节在农历的8月15日举行，其历史可以追溯到3000前，当时皇帝朝拜月亮以求丰收。The Mid-Autumn festival is held on August 15h of the lunar calendar with a history dating back to 3000 years ago, when emperors worshiped the moon for harvest.2.人们认为，最明亮，最饱

41、满的月亮象征着团圆，繁荣和吉祥。People believe that the brightest and fullest moon symbolizes reunion, prosperity and good fortune.3.如今，人们与家人们一起庆祝这个假期，一边吃月饼一边赏月。Nowadays, people celebrate this holiday with family relatives, enjoying moon cakes while watching the full moon. Chinese New Years Eve1.除夕据说源于一个传说，即中国祖先用鞭炮

42、杀死不断骚扰他们的怪物。Chinese New Years Eve is said to have_originated from a tale about Chinese ancestors using firecrackers to kill a monster that had kept harassing them.2.现在除夕已经被视为新旧之间的界限，那时每个家庭都必须打扫房子并准备节日晚宴。Now, the Eve has been regarded as the threshold between_the old and_ the new, when every family h

43、as to clean up the house and prepare a festive dinner.3.中国春节最重要的习俗是除夕夜的年夜饭(家庭聚餐)，这通常是一个祖父母、父母和孩子们一家人的大团圆。The most important custom of the Chinese Spring Festival is the big family dinner on the eve of the Lunar New Year,which is usually a big reunion of grandparents, parents and children.4.家人常会在家庭团圆

44、的年夜饭上吃某些种类的吉祥食品。例如，吃鱼被认为会带来比一个人所需要的更多的财富和繁荣，因为中文中“鱼”与“(剩)余”谐音。Family typically eat certain types of lucky food at the family reunion dinner. Eating fish, for example, is supposed to bring more wealth and prosperity than one needs, as the pronunciation of “fish in Chinese(yu) is also used for为弘扬中国传统文

45、化，增强青少年的民族自豪感，某中学生英语杂志开设了“中国传统节日”专栏，面向广大同学征集稿件。你想投稿介绍中秋节，内容包括：1时间；2庆祝方式；3意义。注意：1.词数100左右；2开头已给出，不计入总词数；3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【佳作欣赏】Mid-Autumn Festival is a very important Chinese festival.Falling on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month, the festival is intended to celebrate the harvest and it is also tim

46、e to enjoy the moonlight. Usually family observes some common practices. Bathed in the moonlight, the whole family will sit together, admiring the full moon and enjoying delicious moon cakes. In Chinese tradition, moon cakes stand for reunion, happiness and the well-being of each family.Mid-Autumn F

47、estival is a festival for family reunion. No matter how far away people are from their hometown, they will manage to get back for a family get-together.【链接高考经典诵读】（2021年全国甲卷）假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示，请你给外国朋友Chris写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容如下：1. 阐明写信事由；2. 征求建议；3. 表达感谢。注意:1. 词数 100 左右2. 可适当增加

48、细节，以使行文连贯。_【佳作欣赏1】Dear Chris,Im glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, and my favorite is the Spring Festival. It falls on the first day of the Chinese lunar New Year. The Spring Festival is as important as Christmas in t

49、he U.S. and Chinese people have been celebrating it for many years.To celebrate the Spring Festival, I usually stick the Chinese character “Fu” upside down to the door, which means happiness will come. Besides, I always prepare some red paper cutting to decorate my house because I believe the red co

50、lor can bring our family good luck. On the eve of the festival, my family usually get together, having dinner and sharing some interesting experiences. Midnight is my favorite time because I can set off fireworks and admire them. Shining little stars coming out of fireworks create a warm atmosphere.

51、 Everyone is overjoyed as they say farewell to the old year and welcome the new year.I really like the Spring Festival because its time for family reunions and the relationship between us becomes closer. I can do various activities during the festival. I hope you can come to China to experience this

52、 colorful and meaningful festival. Yours, Li Hua【佳作欣赏2】Dear Chris,How is everything going?To introduce traditionalChinese culture, our school will hold a theme class meeting,which will be exhibitedon the English website. I am writing to ask for your valuableadviceon the aspects of traditionalChinese

53、culturewhich are extremelyappealing toforeign friends.As far as I know,traditionalChinese culture, including paper cutting,Chinese knots,guzheng and so on, has itsunique characteristics.For example,Chinese knots are a symbol of good luck and best wishes.Furthermore, guzheng isof great significanceto

54、 Chinese folk musicleading you to a fantastic world of music.Eventually,I am stronglyeager to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culturearouse your curiositymost.With your assistance, I willmake full preparationsfor the meeting. Thanks again for your help. Looking forward to your early reply.

55、 Yours,Li Hua【佳作欣赏3】Dear Chris,I hope this email finds you well. A theme class introducing Chinese traditional culture is scheduled to be held in your school and will be demonstrated on our English websites, Im desperately in need of your views on Chinese traditional culture.To put it clearly, as Ch

56、inese traditional culture covers a wide range of fields.Id like to know what type of Chinese traditional culture appeals to our foreign friends more. Do festivals sound more attractive than literature ?Do costumes draw more attention than architecture? If anything related to my concern occurs to you, please never hesitate to inform me.I would highly appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.Yours, Li Hua