2021-2022学年新教材高中英语 Unit 4 Looking good feeling good S2系统写作指导（含解析）译林版必修第一册.docx

1、Unit 4 Looking good feeling good议论文：健康(Argumentative writing about health)【命题原则】议论文就是为了阐述某一个观点的文章。撰写议论文时可以使用“PRE”的文章结构：P就是某个论点，文章开头就必须直接阐明你的观点；R是理由，也就是论据；E是个人体验，也就是个人的经历或者观点，通过该点来进一步阐述观点。【写作要点】本类作文一般分为三个部分，具体内容如下：首段：开门见山，直接阐述观点；主体段：引用论据进行论证；结尾段：个人经历或者观点。【常用词汇】physical and mental condition 身体与精神状态str

2、ong 强壮的healthy/unhealthy 健康的/不健康的overweight/fat 肥胖的thin 瘦的nearsighted/shortsighted 近视的mentally unhealthy 精神不健全的normal 正常的abnormal 不正常的energetic 精力旺盛的unhealthy eating habit 不健康的饮食习惯eat much junk food 吃太多的垃圾食品stay/keep healthy/fit 保持健康build up ones body/ improve ones health 强身健体enough sleep 充足的睡眠take

3、regular exercise 进行有规律的运动proper diet 合理的饮食good living habits 良好的生活习惯lose weight 减肥remove heavy burdens 减轻负担be good fordo good to 对有益处nutrition 营养go on diet 节食form aeating habit 养成一个的饮食习惯breathe more fresh air 多呼吸新鲜空气【常用句型】表达观点句型In general/On the whole, I think/believe/feelTo be honest, Im against/fo

4、rbecauseOnce again/As I said, Id support/oppose the idea ofIve changed my mind. I (dont) believe/agree/think that【写作模板】People hold the opinion that _ (大部分的观点). Personally, I prefer that _ (自己的观点). The reasons are as follows. In the first place, _ (论据1). Whats more, _ (论据2). In addition, _ (论据3). In

5、my opinion, _ (总结)【典型示例】假定你是学生李华，进入高中后你发现很多同学为了学习不吃早饭，还经常熬夜，出现了不少不健康的学习生活方式。学校校报正在开展以“健康生活方式”为主题的英语征文活动，你打算投稿。请根据以下提示信息写一篇英语短文。1. 指出现在部分高中同学不健康的学习生活方式；2. 结合实际，从膳食、体育锻炼、人生态度三方面提出具体的健康的生活方式。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作指导】第一段直面问题，提出自己的观点(stay up late, live a healthy life)第二段分条陈述理由或者建议：1. 膳食(have

6、a balanced diet)2. 体育锻炼(take exercise regularly)3. 人生态度(develop a positive attitude)第三段总结，发表个人观点(be beneficial to)【核心要点的不同表达】1. 虽然我们在很大的压力下，但是我们有必要过一种健康的生活。Although we are under great pressure, it is necessary for us to live a healthy life. 2. 我们应该培养一种积极的态度，无论发生什么，让我们积极看待事情。We should develop a posit

7、ive attitude, which allows us to look at things positively no matter what happens. No matter what happens, a positive attitude allows us to look at things positively.【优秀范文】Recently I find that some classmates lead an unhealthy life, such as staying up late and not eating breakfast. Although we are u

8、nder great pressure, it is necessary for us to live a healthy life. The following are some useful tips.First, its important that we have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day, because we consume much energy while studying. Second, taking exercise regularly is of equal importance, which can help us to keep fit and release stress. More importantly, we should develop a positive attitude, which allows us to look at things positively no matter what happens. In a word, proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude can be beneficial to us.